FF: After The Maha Episode THE END PG 22 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry to say totally ruined the fiction for me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: leo4ever

sorry to say totally ruined the fiction for me



Dont worry.. This ia just one part.. :-) There is a lot more coming up next!

Precap:

Priya senses something.. Walks to the balcony and puts her hand out..
Ram steps out of the airport..
The first smowflake of th winter land on Priyas hands as Ram look up a the sky and smiles..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
😕 Ram and Priya had inspired the maximum FFs and OSs all because of RK and ST ,but honestly,I dont understand this too confusing.

.Anyway best of luck

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Its bit confusing in start but i like your updates very much.. and now i understod whats the whole matter...
thanku for this FF AND CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
I could not agree with u that Ram slapped Priya and viceversa, Ram has never hit Priya whatever the situation may be and as for Priya no question us there, some puzzle got solved but this kind if attitude wasn't expected from them, am sorry to say but this is absolutely not tolerable
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

I could not agree with u that Ram slapped Priya and viceversa, Ram has never hit Priya whatever the situation may be and as for Priya no question us there, some puzzle got solved but this kind if attitude wasn't expected from them, am sorry to say but this is absolutely not tolerable



Dear all.. There is a strong reason behind their behaviour.. Ram and Priya love eachother too much to hurt eachother.. But youll have to be paitient to know why..

Was it fo this simple reason thqt Ram took such drastic steps.. What provoked him? How could Priya sign the papers so easily?

Youll have to wait and watch.. I promise not to disappoint you readers..
Update tonight..

Love,
L.
Edited by nehaprasad1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Continued...

In KM:

They all sleep hoping that the next day will start a fresh..

In RAYA room:

Rajat lies on the couch.. While daijaan and cady are fast asleep on the bed..

Rajat thinkig to himself.. Ram, Priya aur tere beech koi nahi aasaktha.. Ill close everything in Dubai soon.. When you return I promise.. Ki I will set everything right.. Priya, mein unse pyaar zaroor kartha hu.. lekin maine kabhi apni limits cross nahi ki.. Naahi karunga.. Woh mereliye sab kuch hai.. Meri bhabi hai..

In Nutz room:

Bhai kuch toh hai.. Aap kabhi kisi pe bhi haath nahi utaaya aaj tak.. Kuch toh galat horaha hai..
Gets a call..
Karthik: Nutz Ram sir ne di ko maara? Impossible.. Yeh Aisha kya keherahi hai..
Nutz: Aisha toh apne doston ke saath Goa chaligayithi.. Woh ab tak waapis nahi aayi hai.. Jab yeh sab hua.. toh.. She was not there.. Usko kaise pata..
Karthik: Yeh di ke zindagi mein kya horaha hai..
Nutz: Bhai kabhi kisi ko mar nahi sakthe Karthik.. Kuch toh hua hai..
Karthik: Mein kal aaraha hu.. Tum ab sojaao.. Kal baat karenge..

Scene shifts to NY:

In Farmhouse of NY:

Priya shifts to their Farm house..

She unpacks.. Changes into her robe.. Black beautiful robe.. Looking divine..
She senses something.. Her heart beat is faster than normal.. She walks to the balcony and Puts her hand out..
On the other hand.. Ram comes out of the airport..
The winters first of snowflakes fall on her hand..
Ram looks at the sky and smiles..

A small tear escapes her eyes.. Thinking.. Kash aap yaha hote RAm.. Maine aapko bohot Dukh diya..

Ram: Kash tum mere saath hoti Priya.. meine tumhe bohot dard diya..

Scene splits with both of them thinking..

Kash zindagi hume ek aur mauka deti..



How did you like this everyone.. I know its a short update.. But yes.. ll continue soon.. Plz leave your comments..

Precap:

Ayesha on the phone: Haan Ram ne divorce dediya hai..
Man: Oh toh we are all clear?
Ayesha: Yes.. Cheers!
Man: Cheers!

Priya: Kaun?.. Aap.. There is a startled expression on her face..

What do you think awaits Ram Priya in NY?

Plz do criticize.. I will try not to dissappoint you all..

Love,
L.




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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
hmm fter ram slapping her for me somehow the joy is ogne, i really cant stand the mahanta of rajat in show too so in ur fanfiction seeing him all sad n victim is 😭😭😭
i love ram the most and he is painted the most bad guy in ur fiction😕
pls dntdo kuch aisa again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: leo4ever

hmm fter ram slapping her for me somehow the joy is ogne, i really cant stand the mahanta of rajat in show too so in ur fanfiction seeing him all sad n victim is 😭😭😭

i love ram the most and he is painted the most bad guy in ur fiction😕
pls dntdo kuch aisa again


Nahi Ram yeh joh bhi kar raha hai.. iske peeche ek wajah hai.. If he has done such a thing.. He is right.. You'll have to wait.. Todi si intezaar..
Abhike liye.. Enjoy RAYA moments..

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: nehaprasad1994


Nahi Ram yeh joh bhi kar raha hai.. iske peeche ek wajah hai.. If he has done such a thing.. He is right.. You'll have to wait.. Todi si intezaar..
Abhike liye.. Enjoy RAYA moments..

Love,
L.


chalo then update soon😆

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