OS : Do I Have To Say The Words? Part2 updt PG-7 - Page 5

Hey evan.. M sooo glad to read dis OS... u portrayed golu's emotions very well which v really want to see in BALH... bt vnha toh pta nai kb Milega boss...huhhh... awsm yaa.. update soon n pm me plzz

Originally posted by: -evan-

oh the 2nd line really cracked me up... 😆

😆😉

Originally posted by: Birdy91

Hey evan.. M sooo glad to read dis OS... u portrayed golu's emotions very well which v really want to see in BALH... bt vnha toh pta nai kb Milega boss...huhhh... awsm yaa.. update soon n pm me plzz

haha... galad to know u liked it("glad" - read it in Mamaji Style..LOL)
haan, PM kardunga :D
btw Your name is "Panchi" but profile pic is of a "machli" - seems comical to me (just kidding yaar)

Originally posted by: -evan-

haha... galad to know u liked it("glad" - read it in Mamaji Style..LOL)
haan, PM kardunga :D
btw Your name is "Panchi" but profile pic is of a "machli" - seems comical to me (just kidding yaar)

Heheh Mama ji Ki yaad dila di 😉 M remembering his Today's *Paap corn* hehehe...😆 Yaaa my name is panchi... bt i like fishes 😉 n tumhari wali Kitni Horrable hai 😛

Originally posted by: Birdy91

Heheh Mama ji Ki yaad dila di 😉 M remembering his Today's *Paap corn* hehehe...😆 Yaaa my name is panchi... bt i like fishes 😉 n tumhari wali Kitni Horrable hai 😛

🤣 😆

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

Just marvelous os.. Ram pain, his helpless feeling, his jealousy, his love everything was discribed beautifully in limited words.. U pen down this os really good.. I think that the hand is of peehu, who else have tiny hand..? Update soon..

awww,, dear I can't thank u enough for the sweet woeds 😃 😃
and about the "hand" thingy - well u have to wait for the next part lol

Originally posted by: -evan-

I'm really happy that u liked it, will try to up soon :D
waise I have a fascination towards your writing style, wish u could start an OS/FF 😭

Originally posted by: leena04

awesome even i read ur first writing attempt (as i never read any before if u have do sand me the link) but after reading this first word came from my mouth was simply... outstanding...

u peened down so well Ram's emotions & betryal... i loved the way u made it this is what we all wanted to see in show... but no CV's in full mood to spoil their own child... *dead* but spi mention of Ram's wish... he liked to Priya set free raither then hurting her more... i loved that thing... its called true love hope in 2nd part all matter will short out... i guess it was Peehu's or Kush's hand... let's see whose will be it...

I;m so happy to see your comment dear! I'm glad u liked the scene, THANKS A TON :D