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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm itz k bt think sooon!!! n come up with a gr81
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Part 8

Priya gets up and goes to Peehu's room wakes her up and sends in the washroom straight.

Ram : Priyaaa !

Priya runs ecstatically in the room and finds Ram all wet with sweat. She goes to him and wipes off the sweat gently from his face. And kneels down. Looks at him in his eyes.

Kya hua ?

Ram : Tum'Tum'.

Priya : Ram mein kahin nahi jaa rahi aap ko chod kar. Bas jaldi uthna padta hai Peehu ke liye. Uski school hoti haina.

Gives him a hug and feels his heart beats racing faster than light year. A tear rolls out her eyes. Before Ram can see it she quickly turns and goes to Peehus room. Gets her ready and starts making Breakfast.

Ram comes out fresh and takes peehu in his lap. They both eat breakfast and then Priya goes to drop her to the Bus stand.

Ram: Priya kahan jaa rahi ho peehu ko leke ?

Priya : Uski bus aa jayegi, aaj pehla din hai bus mein.

Ram: Peehu bus mein kyun jaa rahi hai ?

Priya : Aap chaliye.

Ram gets up and goes with her to drop peehu. They see her off in the bus.

They come back and Priya notices Ram is a little annoyed.

P : Aap aaj office nahi jayenge.

Ram : Nahi aaj se ek mahine ki chutti.

P: Kyun ?

Ram: Kyun ki meine 5 saal din raat kaam kiya kyun ki tum nahi thi mere saath. Aur ab jab tum ho mere paas to mein ek mahine ke liye nahi jaoonga. Aur Priya bahas mat karna.

Picks up the newspaper and starts reading. He starts coughing bad.

P: Ram !! starts patting his back. Yeh kya kiya hai apne, apne aap ki zara bhi fikar nahi ki ? Socha nahi ki mujhe kaisa lagega ?

Ram : Socha tha'.Kahin baar socha tha'.Par mujhe jaldi thi tumhare paas ane ki.

Priya : Ram mein hamesha aapke saath hi thi na ? Aapke dil mein.

Ram : Dil toh bahar aakar mujhe nahi rokta tha jab mein 24hrs kaam karta tha na.

Priya : Gives him a hug and just holds on to him. Tears roll out again of her eyes. Suddenly she starts feeling more guilty what she had put him through.

Ram feeling the tears on his bare chest. Cups her face. Bas ab nahi. Yeh aansu ab nahi. Kabhi bhi nahi. And hugs her tightly.

Ram: Priya ab Ayesha ka kya hoga ?

Priya : Wo hamari chotti jaise hi hain. Jab chotti sudhar gayi toh Ayesha to aasaan haina.

Ram : Kaise ?

Priya : Ram thode din aapko aur mujhe yeh baat kisiko nahi bataani hai ki hum dono ab ek ho gaye hai.

Ram : What nonsense. Priya ab mein ek pal bhi tumhare bina nahi rahoonga.

Priya : Ram hamare parivaar ke liye yeh aakhri baar. Please'

Ram: Priya mat karo yeh sab. Puri zindagi parivaar ke liye beet gayi. Ab nahi.

Priya: Unke saamne hum dono ek nahi hai. Par jab aap yahan par aaoge tab sirf aap mein aur peehu hi honge na.

Ram : Nahi. No ways.

Priya : Toh phir kya karenge ?

Ram: Yeh mujhe nahi pata abhi. Par ab mein tumhe aur peehu ko nahi chodoonga aur puri duniya ko yeh baat pata chalni chahiye.

Priya : Par Ram Neha aur Vikram ?

Ram : Mujhe pata hai unka problem kya hai ?

Priya : Kya hai ?

Ram: Blackmail

Priya : Kya ?

Ram: Unhe koi blackmail kar raha hai. Aur yeh koi apna hi hai kyunki use paise nahi chahiye. Sirf Vik aur Neha ko alag karna hai.

Priya : Sid ?

Ram : Haan

Priya : Par kaise blackmail ?

Ram: Wo Kush ki custody lene ki baat se Vik aur Neha ko blackmail kar raha hai.

Priya : Par use toh police dhoond rahi haina.

Ram: Haan. Par ab wo NRI hai. Dubai mein rehta hai. Indian police use waha touch bhi nahi kar sakti.

Priya : Phir wo case kaise kar raha hai waha se ?

Ram : Kush ke paida hone se pehle, ek din Ayesha ne Sid ko prove karne ke liye ki wo use kitna pyaar karti hai. Kuch papers sign kiye the. Usme sid ne ye likhwaya tha ki Unke bache ki custody Sid ke paas hongi. But don't worry. I have found a way to get Sid locked up. Kuch dino ki baat hai.

Priya : Kaise ?

Ram: Sid ko sabse jyada kya pasand hai ?

Priya: huh ?

Ram: Money !!!

Priya : Toh ?

Ram: Meine use ek competitor ki company se ek offer bheja hai 2000Crore ka.

P: 2000Cr ???????????????

Ram : Priya sirf bolne ke liye hai darling. Usse sirf hathkadi hi milegi.

Priya : Toh offer se kya hoga ?

Ram : Use yaha sirf ek ghante ke liye bulaya hai sign karne ke liye. He has to give all Kapoor company secrets to this competitor.

Priya : Aur competitor kaun hai.

Ram : Laughs and says Rajat.

Priya : Kya ?????

Ram : Priya tum bhul rahi ho. Rajat mera bahut purana dost hai. Meine use kaha yeh karne ke liye aur usne kar diya.

Priya : Toh kya hoga.

Ram: Darling'..Sid ek ghante 1 minute ke baad police custody mein hoga. Aur wo contract khatam. Ab jail mein to custody nahi mangega na.

Priya : Ram !!!!!!!!!! Aapne itna sab kab soch liya ?

Ram : Jab tumse pyaar hua tha na tab'..Gives her a hug again.

Priya : toh chale ?

Ram : Kahan ? Kahi nahi jaana mujhe yaar. Bas hum aise hi bethte haina.

Priya : Ram aapka blood test karvana hai.

Ram : Priya no no no nooo

Priya : Ram yeh haath mein itni badi chot lagi tab toh nahi chilaaye.

Ram : Twisting his tongue inside his mouth. Wo tumne pakda tha na haath.

Priya : Toh abhi pakdoongi haath.

Ram : Priya plzzz

Priya : Thik mein jaa rahi hoon.

Ram: Arre yaar yeh har bar tum jaa rahi hoon kyun bolti ho. Jao phir.

Priya : Jauu ?

Ram : Haan jao.

Priya : Thik hai.

Goes to the bedroom picks up her suitcase and is leaving''''''.

To be Continued

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Part 1 1
Part 2 1
Part 3 2
Part 4 3
Part 5 4
Part 6 7
Part 7 9
Part 8 12
Part 9 13
Part 10 14
Part 11 15
Part 12 19
Part 13 24
Part 14 27
Sp 1 21
Sp 2 21
Edited by kchinoy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
glad u updatd!!!! n nice way f thinking sids' vik n nehas' matter!!!!😆


n shuru hogaye raya nokh jokh!!! 😆

update asap dear!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesome update ;) Sid will land himself in the big-house... yay!! :-*
RaYa moment was mind blowing ❤️
now what's wrong with Priya? 😕 hope everything is fine...
next part --> asap plz ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
I m loving this Ram a lott... smarty.. what a way he found to trap Sid... but where did Priya leave.. pray its just a trick of hers to make Ram to agree for blood test.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
nicely landed back sid into the track!
wonderful frndship b/w ram n rajat.

nice narration
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Thank u so much for updating... I just loved the update yaar... Awesome... And plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Hii welcome to the forum ...

sory for late commenting ... i read it in one go .. all the parts were intresting and awesome..

good going .. keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
smart ram ache se sid ko handle krega
raya convo was great 👏
luved it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Loving the new track as well.. Nice update. Now give the next soon

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