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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
So glad you updated! Awesome update!!😃
Loving the way the story is progressing! Very interesting..
Can't wait for the next part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
awesome FF update krish...
thank you sooomuch
pls update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
someone wrote abt VikHa finally. nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 9

Just a little thought before penning down the next part.

Two old friends meet
On a moonlit night
They both find love,
To their delight,
They sit upon a grassy knoll,
They share their love,
They share their soul

I cried and cried, you didn't know,

You had no idea I loved you so,

It must have been a million years,

As time went by I shed less tears,

But dear, I found you, once again

I love you now as I loved you then

Knowing you share that love with me

My tears are shed more happily

Ram : Priyaaa !!

Priya : Looks back thinking he is sad. Kya ?

Ram : Suitcase khali hai.

Priya : Aapko kaise pata.

Ram: Kyunki wo mera suitcase hai.

Priya : Aapka suitcase ?

Ram : Haan wo driver ko bola that mere kapde lane ke liye.

With the funny smile on his face and playing with his tongue in his mouth. Scratches his temple with left hand. Goes closer to her.

Ram : Tum mujhse door kabhi nahi jaa sakti. Agar chaho'toh bhi nahi..

Holds the saree end that is tucked on her waist and removes it while walking to the bedroom.

Priya : Ram''. Polar bear'.

Ram comes out ready and tells her.

Ram : Agar tum saath chalo toh mein gun point pe bhi khade rehne ke liye taiyaar hoon.

Priya : Abhi needle point ke liye chale.

Ram : After you My darling.

They go to the hospital get his check up and both get their blood tests done. It has somehow become a tradition that they both need to do tests if one needs it.

Priya : Doctor Shah, can you check his hand please. Meine stitch tapes lagai thi. But I think it needs proper stitches.

Ram : Nahi yaar. Pls Priya kitna hurt hoga yaar.

Doc : Opens the bandage, If we put surgical stitches it wil heal faster.

Ram : Doctor ek saal ke baad heal hoga toh bhi chalega.

From behind Priya gives the doc green signal.

Doc calls for nurse and another doc to help.

They come in the cabin and start the procedure.

Ram holds Priyas hand.

Ram : Maza aa raha hai na. Mujhe pata hai tume bahut maza aa raha hai.

Priya : Puts her head up and has tears in her eyes.

Ram : Hey ! I am kidding. Priya mujhe pain nahi ho raha hai. Promise.

Priya : Aapko pata hai aap mere liye kya ho ?

Ram : Haan.

Priya : Kya ?

Ram : Pain in the ASS that you love more than yourself. And winks at her.

Priya : Starts laughing.

And while all this the procedure is finished. Doc says all done. Priya wipes her tears.

Priya : Thank god ho gaya. Acting karte karte thak gayi thi. Chale mere Pain the in the ASS.

Ram : Tum tum'.acting kar rahi thi. Ruko tum mein batata hoon tumhe.

They both head to Peehus school straight to pick her up. Peehu comes running out and looks Ram and Priya standing.

Peehu runs to Ram and looks at his hand. Papa yeh kya hua aapko ???

And she starts balling. Papa are you ok ? And gives a kiss on his hand.

Ram kneels down. Princess kuch nahi hua mujhe. Mein thik hoon. Chale ice cream khaane.

Peehu : Nahi Kulfi

Ram : Hey bhagwaan yeh Maa beti ka kya karoon.

Priya : Ab bahut ho gaya family time kal se bigger family time.

Ram : Priya, waise Sid already police custody mein hai. With a naughty smile on his face.

Priya : Yeh kab kiya aapne.

Ram: hahahaahahaha

Ab hume Ayesha ko sidha karna hai. Aur is baar no sympathy. She needs to be straighten for life. And you will help me. Understood ??

Priya : Ji boss.

Page no
Part 1 1
Part 2 1
Part 3 2
Part 4 3
Part 5 4
Part 6 7
Part 7 9
Part 8 12
Part 9 13
Part 10 14
Part 11 15
Part 12 19
Part 13 24
Part 14 27
Sp 1 21
Sp 2 21
Edited by kchinoy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nice update.. luved the injection n all scene...dekthe hain kaise wo Ayesha ko sidha karthe hain!!!


y the name western twist??
Edited by shilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
i luv'd it frm ...
d simpl bt heart touching...
update...priya ki acting
raya so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Heheheh... That was reallly really very awesome the test and stitches scenes were sooo good yaar... Loved the update... Plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
needle scene was nice😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Priya : Aapko pata hai aap mere liye kya ho ?
Ram : Haan.
Priya : Kya ?
Ram : Pain in the ASS that you love more than yourself. And winks at her.
Priya : Starts laughing.


Aww that was so cute!! Lovely update Krish!
Can't wait to read the further updates! Thanks a lot for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update krish loved it
thanks you sooomuch

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