SS-'Tanhayee-An Emptiness'update pg-51&52 (9 june) - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 9
so finally the long wait finished awesome... just mind blowing yaar the way Ram read her mind was just fantastic... looks like you just rocked yaar it was so so gud... Ram's family just like show i m loving it the way all teases RaYa were mindblowing aweosome... u have magic in ur writing yaaar too gud... moving to read next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

part 10

wowoow kya baat hai 1 on1 its bonus boneza yaar loved it Kakul (i hope its ok with u to call you by ur name) its awesome yaar too gud just mind blowing update i really loved the way Ram deal out with Priya's crual family... & the press confrance what to say his just line made me so happy "my queen wants a royal treatment" awww this line were awesome... it shows how much king loves her queen so much awww so sweet... the best part... now egarly waiting for next do update next soon plzzz... don't make us wait so much plzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey update the next part
waitin
continue soon
😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting... Waiting... Waiting...
U again got disappear plz update yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the epilogue plz update yar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi frnds,

Sorry for long delay...

But Will be posting an update tomorrow or may be tonight...

I hope you all remember this FF of mine...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

Hi frnds,


Sorry for long delay...

But Will be posting an update tomorrow or may be tonight...

I hope you all remember this FF of mine...



Finally!!

Waiting... pls PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys,

here comes the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
before posting new update,

i would like to thank all of you for your lovely comments and patience😉😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

Concluding Chapter (part b)

After some time, she asked Ram how many names u have, for dadi u r golu (and giggles)

Ram: Priya please na...

Priya continued : okay no more, but y nuts call u CK... wat is CK

Ram smiles and says: jaan some of my opponents call me as 'Cruel king' because sometimes I am ruthless

And he noticed that Priya didn't liked this (he felt happy with her small gesture) and Nuts calls me CK because when she was a kid she use to think that I am a king who is cute so Cute king (CK).

Priya smiled at this and said this is true but first one wrong very wrong. And hugged him tightly with her ears pressing on his heart and dozed off

Ram smiled yaar ise toh meri heart beat bahut pasand hai jab dekho tab ise yehi hi sunna hai... and smiled and pulled her close and after some time they reached their venue...

Ram picks her up in his arms and entered the farm house... (Where he brought her after kidnapping) after some time, priya opened her eyes to find herself in the same room and got confused. She thought all that happenings were in her dreams and soon tears started streaming down her cheeks. In midst of her broken dream, she failed to notice ram who entered the room with a rose bouquet and on seeing his angel with tears he threw away the bouquet and was next to priya in few seconds, hugging her asking wat happen jaan, y are u crying...

Priya: in between her sobs, sab jhooth has sirf sapna

Ram: no jaan, kuch sapna nahi hai... sab sacch hai dekho

Priya with a shaking hand touched ram's face from forehead to lips and as fingers were descending down, a smile was slowly creeping on her face as the realization dawn on her that all that happenings were a reality by the time she reached his lips she was assured that he was in real, but by now she was in trace and didn't realized that her act was turning seductive and was doing crazy things to ram. He bites her finger and pulled them in his mouth and started licking them. Their eyes kept holding other's gaze and slowly and unknowingly both of them moved close to each other covering only the few inches of gap between them and soon there lips met.

The kiss was getting sensual second by second, not able to bear any distance Ram pulled her body more close... his hands taking all liberty over her body and soon the camera zooms out darkening out leaving the two body alone to let them mould in 1 body... quenching in their passion, hunger for each others love...

Note: I tried but cant write a explicitly hot part but will try and if I succeed will PM u guys(who ever will comment😉)...


Keep reading will be updating epilogue in few minutes

Edited by fan_forever - 12 years ago

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