SS-'Tanhayee-An Emptiness'update pg-51&52 (9 june) - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago

Epilogue:

After this day Ram pampered her like his princess, and was with her at every step of hers is it facing her so called ma-pa. He loved her so much that now on priya don't even remember the phase of her life where she had no one to look after her or to love least.

Now she has a family, a brother in face of rishab, a sister (Soumya) who in reality shares a relationship of SIL but loved and respect her like an elder sister, a dadi who reminds of her nani and a mom...

By looking at all this relationship and bonding, Ram was the only one to complain about saying his value has been lowered ever since priya came into KM (but in his heart he was more than happy to give this family, love, relationship and bonding to Priya) and everytime would earn a glare from everyone as in accusing look who's talking, because he is the one who pampered her the most and spoil her rotten.

Soumya: bappa... aap toh rehne hi do, din mai kam se kam 500 baar aap bolte ho priya ye..., jaan ye..., angel ye..., sweetheart ye..., subah uthne se lekar raat to sone tak bus bhabhi hi dikhti hi aapko, (Priya was turning a brilliant shade of Red) vaise mai aapko ek q kab se puchna chahti thi

Ram: frowns

Soumya: bhaiya aap aapka office KM mai shift kyu nahi karvalete?

Ram; matlab

Soumay: matalab yeh ki... office se jyada waqt to aap ghar par I mean bhabhi ke saath spend karte hai., or office jate hai bhi toh har 10 min bhabhi ko call karte hai... arey bhai telephone co. buy kar li hai.

Everyone was laughing

Ram tries to speak out saying arey mai study mai kaam karta hu na ghar pe

Rishab: ha ha... bhaiya kisko bana rehe hai, study mai kaam, haan jarur par use time bhi toh aapko bhabhi aapke paas chahiye. (winks) kyu bhabhi bhai kaam karte hai ya phir

Ram: oye chup kar

Dadi: arey yeh baat toh sehi hai (Priya hides herself in krishna's embrace)

Ram blushes but getting bold he stands up goes to Priya pulling her up... he hugs her and says haan toh mera pyaar hai, meri biwi hai koi problem hai?

Everyone claps and nods and all disperse

Later that day in Raya's room:

Ram and Priya in bed, ram caressing Priya's stomach jaan thank u for this gift

Priya: anything for you Ram

Since their marriage, Priya has came a long way, still on some time she fears about losing everything but ram's love and support makes her realize that this is gonna be with her all her life.

They never fought with each other except when ram wanted to teach her ma-pa a lesson, but priya wasn't letting him. And this leaded to a huge fight, but later on Priya won only on one's condition that priya would never visit them.

Soon after they were blessed with a little angel in their life, who they named as Peehu and then2 years later a baby boy who was named as Rahil

With this we'll leave them in their world...

This was their story of struggle, wait and love... I hope you liked it and will bless them to live together forever.

Hope you all liked the storyline... Please do comment
Edited by fan_forever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ..awesome update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its really cute, that ram told priya to learn from the stupid sister how to hug your man. And awesome update.
Edited by priyaraya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice ss with a lovely ending loved every part except sudhir sir char just my opinion congrats for the ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u completed the story, u gave the shape to it, thank u so for doing this, and u did this after a six months leap, ufff!hats off to u dear 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
end it very beautifully
I loved every part of it.
Raya peehu and rahil😃
happy family.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Heyyy, nice FF.

Just read it now in one go.

Please PM me! Thanks.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Thnx for completing this ff
Waiting for ur next ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
after such along time u updated and finished also...loved the end and the whole ff was awesomeee :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a superb ending to the story... Just loved it... Thank you...

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