SS-'Tanhayee-An Emptiness'update pg-51&52 (9 june) - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago

The following 14 member(s) liked the above post:

ic_2000, anuraya, veenasanugommul, kritinayyar, Triesh,

thanks a lot for liking the part... glad that u guys still intersted in this story
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: name2saakshi

yaar is se pehle u r busy with ur work u plz post me epilogue 😉 i m waiting😃

btw update was rock tooo good car romance 😳😃 but i love it👏👏



hey dear, this time i wont disappear, i promiseee... car romance, yeah even i loved that part
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Posted: 12 years ago
for rest of the comments I'll comment tomorrow or later... but I m really grateful to all my readers...


thought i m not commentin individually but believe me i have read all of them...

as wished by all of u... i'll be writing two more parts before epilogue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
my 500th post... yipeee




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Concluding Chapter (part a)

Soon they reached KM, where whole family along with VikHa was waiting for the newly wedded couple. Priya got a fancy and emotional welcome.

Soon, other rituals were completed and with one eye expression Ram confirmed something from Rishab. He got up from his place went to Priya and offered his hands. Priya was shocked as well as was feeling shy from his gesture but unknowingly her hand moved and joined with his mate. Ram tugged at her hand and pulled her up and gestured everyone to follow him. Soon all of them entered the main hall where reporters from each and every channel were gathered but were so busy in discussing what could be the breaking news from Kapoors' failed to notice the supremo of Kapoor Industries entering with his better half.

Vikram silenced the gossiping, I on the behalf of all family would like to thank you for coming here on such a short notice. Gesturing a reporter to stop, he continued I know you all are eager to know the occasion, so without wasting any more time I 'l welcome Ram Kapoor on stage and he himself will do the honors. (all kapoors were sitting on the side on couch with Priya sitting close to Ram and Krishna)

As Ram was about to move, priya clutched his hands, he looked at her and soon got her apprehensions amd nervousness. So, he gently patted her hand and gestured Neha to comfort her who soon replaced him on sofa. But all this was not hidden from reporters and they suddenly started gossiping and clicking pic of this new face who was sitting in the family area close to the supremo.

Ram: Thanks for coming here. Today I would like to share the happiest day of my life with all of you. Today, this day god had proved me to be his favorite child by blessing me with the presence of my angel in my life. Ladies and gentleman I introduce you love of my life from last 16 years, 1st time we met in a club where she came with her father (Priya's eyes popped out seeing Ram disclosing this and pleaded him not to, but Ram ignored that, Priya could see Ram's eyes flaring up but he was trying his best to not show his anger in front of media) and ex-tennis fame Mr. Sudhir Sharma. Sharma's aren't present here because of some family issue and will not be able to join us for the reception.

And now (suddenly all his anger was gone) my wife Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor. He along with others started clapping to welcome Priya. But Priya wasn't moving from her place...

Ram: I guess my queen wants a royal treatment (that earned him a heary laugh from all present) saying this he stepped down walked to her. He kneeled down in front of her, taking her hands in his he kissed her hands and then he made her stood by his side and pose for their very first picture as couple. The picture was reflecting the love they shared and proud feeling on Ram's face. Ram dispersed the conference on a happy note saying, this picture is the most priceless possession for me as this is our (bringing Priya closer to him) 1st pic as a couple. I thank you all.

In few minutes the news was on all channels and was being watched over again and again by millions who were gossiping, tweeting their wishes for the couple. Media persons was busy in finding out on the queen of the Kapoor King, their 16 year old love story.

Phone at KM started their never ending journey of ringing bringing with them loads of wishes and messages for the couple from different relatives, family friends, politicians, industrialists, socialists, film actors/actress etc. and similar was the case at Sharma house where also the phone was ringing but this was not appreciated by the members of the house as they have to now face all types of questions like Is priya their own daughter, y they can't join the party, y didn't they attended the marriage ceremony and many more... but they were speechless and were cursing Priya for putting them in this place.

After some time, Ram-Priya and others came to Sharma house, where Shipra started all her buttering but Ram gestured her to stop, looked at Nuts asking her to pack Priya's belongings. All this time he had a possessive hold on Priya. In the mean time there was complete silence, which was broken my Ayesha who just entered in the house, saw ram and Priya. She congratulated Priya and hugged ram for more time than necessary and this wasn't any causal hug. She tried to rub her front to his. Ram's anger reached the top level and he separated her and placed a tight slap right across her face shocking everyone...

With gritting his teeth he said: Stay in your limit saliji, or else be ready for more than a slap, Sudhir came forward to show his not liking this, but ram stopped him saying, priya inki badi behen iske naate mai jija hua... aur is rishte se mujhe haak hai ise sahi aur galat ka ehsaas dilane ka... sehi kaha na mummyji (stressing the word mummyji)!!

Ram was trying to be at his best as he was controlling himself for nuts... and then they turned to move out... but nuts stopped them saying I have something to say... Karthik from now on don't ever try to come near me I am breaking up with you.

On one hand where ram appreciated Nuts step, Priya stopped her saying princess don't do this, I know you really Karthik and because of me...

Nuts: nahi di aapke karan kuch bhi nahi, mai nahi chhati ki mai eke se insaan ke saath shaddi karu jo apni badi behen ki izaat nahi kar sakta toh who meri kya karega.

Karthik: but baby

Nuts: shuddup, just shutup nt a single word... and listen to me pyaar karne wale toh bahut mil jayenge but meri priya dio jaisi koi nahi milegi so try and realize wat u have losr. Chale CK

Shipra to Krishna: Mrs. Kapoor woh kal Priya ko pag phere ke liye

Krishna: Aapko pag phere ki chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi, priya ki maa aur uska parivaar uska dhyaan rakh lega

Shipra shocked... Krishna continued I mean mai aur uski dadi abhi jinda hai, rishab comes forward saying mai hu na bhai kyu bhabhi chelaga na yeh bhai... Priya nodded with teary eyes. Priya came forward and hugged Krishna and dadi.

Ram was happy seeing his family supporting Priya and him. Ram came forward infront of Sudhir, folded his hands and said, mai aapse kuch nahi kahunga, kyunki aapne mujhe tennis khelne sikhya hai aur aap mane ye na mane aap priya ke papa hai, isliye I 'll only request you, aage se app ya aur koi (looking at shipra, karthik and Ayesha) ne Priya se milne ki ya uske dukh pahuchane ki koshish bhi ki toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. Aaj mai ruka hu aur kuch nahi kar raha kyunki I know Priya ko yeh aacha nahi lagega, par ek wrong move aapki taraf se aur phir mai aur aap. Priya beech mai nahi aayegi. Ab hum chalte hai. Hope we'll…….. never meet.(stressing never)

Soon they all reached home, all the way priya was crying on ram's chest with ram consoling her and saying sorry for treating her family like this but... priya said only one word thank you to which he replied anytime and then he whispers waise jaan u should learn from that stupid sis of urs, how to hug ur man... and winked at her... which earned him a nice and hard pat on his stomach and priya hide her face in his chest Ram continued Priya I couldn't control and the way she behaved, I couldn't allow any other girl besides you...

Priya looked at him... (still sitting in his arms with his arms around her shoulder keeping her close to him) their face inches apart and said; u better not Mr. Kapoor or else and raised herself and gave a bite on his earlobe. Ram was shocked from her move and words but felt happy that she is opening to him. And he hugged her and she again rested her head on his chest. He kissed her hair...

After some time, she asked Ram how many names u have, for dadi u r golu (and giggles)

Ram: Priya please na...

Priya continued : okay no more, but y nuts call u CK... wat is CK

Ram smiles and says: jaan some of my opponents call me as 'Cruel king' because sometimes I am ruthless

And he noticed that Priya didn't liked this (he felt happy with her small gesture) and Nuts calls me CK because when she was a kid she use to think that I am a king who is cute so Cute king (CK).

Priya smiled at this and said this is true but first one wrong very wrong. And hugged him tightly with her ears pressing on his heart and dozed off

Ram smiled yaar ise toh meri heart beat bahut pasand hai jab dekho tab ise yehi hi sunna hai... and smiled and pulled her close and after some time they reached their venue...

Rest in Next part


do post ur comment.. and this one is long update which will help us to pass on this weekend

Edited by fan_forever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
for pg 44😛
gosh you updated after so long...
the way ram read priya's mind was incredible
Kakul please jaldi update karo na
pls pl pls
not fair to keep us hanging...im damn tempted..
waiting waiting waiting
Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d slap ram gave 2 conda 😆
lovely part finally priya getting family love
love d way family supported priya


Edited by pinky2606 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tooo good kakul
conda deserved that slap...wish she got more😆
love it love it❤️
waiting for next part
dont disappear this time...aur jaldi next part update karna🤗
Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

what a slap i love ram every move 4 support too priya , he is such a jano
waiting for the SR
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think i missed the link some where. may be i skip reading few parts .

what a story this refelts my views on sharma's family in BALH

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