SS: tum main zindagi hai. Updated part 5(page 9) 29.5.12 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss283


<font color="#990099" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">areee pls continue karo na asap !!!!!...wanna see ram at the party ...n how RaYa meet...too good...😛</font>

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thnk u nd sry fr so much delay..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nany

Its to good please continue soon.


thnk u so much nany di.. Dnt knw whn wil b the nxt update postd..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasshuu

superb... too good...

just want to see priyas b'da surprise...



thnk u vry much..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: asheema_sharma


SUPERLYK...

PLZ CONTINUE ASAP...
PLZZZ



thnk u asheema ji... Gld to knw u lykd it..
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am vry sry fr making u wait saly di.. :-(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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am vry sry fr making u wait saly di.. :-(

its ok dear... take ur tym... will wait 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys.. Thnk u fr the ample encouragement and support.. I realy regret fr the delay in posting.. Actually the thng is that ki anjali kahin gayab ho gayi he..:-P
jst kidding .. She is bcy with her admsn.. I cnt post it without her..
I am trying my bst to cntact her.. Update wil b only aftr that..
Once again sry and love u al...<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sry guys for this late and boring update pls bear me.
Part 5
Ram's meeting with oberai group of industries had bn postpond to 2mrw. So, he was sitting quietly in his room.
He was unknwingly thnking abt ridhima..Baar baar uski yaad aa rahi thi..
Ram : pata nai kyun ek attatchment si ho gayi he gudiya ke sath. Kya nam tha uska? Haan ridhima.. Aur haan uska surname tho kapoor he.. Suddnly phn rings.
Ram:helo
ridhi:helo uncle .. Main hoon.. Riddi
ram: are gudiya.. Tumne phne kiya.. Kya baath hein.
Ridhi: wo kya hein na uncle maasi ne kaha tha na aaj mama ka b'day he.. To party mein aap aayenge na?
Ram thnks fr a min: mtng tho cancel ho gayi he.. Aur koi plan bhi nahi hein..
Ram: teek hein gudiya..aap apne maasi ko phn do..
Mal: helo mr. Kapoor.. Haan thnk u so much fr accepting the invitation..
Ram: no ms. Mallika.. The pleasure is mine..
Ram: aap pls venue bata dengi tho..
Mallika:ji party tho hamare ghar me hi hein..
Ram:k thn.. Bye
mal:k c u in the evng.. Bye...
Priya ke ghar me party ki tayari bohat acchise ho rahi thi sab khush the siwaye priya ke.
Priya: pata nahi kyu ek ajeebsi bechani ho rahi hai.
In the meantime ridhan and ridhima comes in the room and give priya a saree
priya: ye kya hai...???
ridhima: wo muma aaj aapka birthday hai na to humne aapke liye saree kharidi hai aap ise aaj paheniye naa
priya: saree! Tumlogo ne ye saree kab kharidi..?? paise kaha se aye..?? Aur matlab tum dono akele mall me gaye the..???
Mallika: kya kar rahi ho priya itne saare sawal puch ke inki jaan lene ka irada hai kya. Inhe mall main leke gayi thi aur ye saree mene dilayi hai. Ab khush khamoka tension leti rahti ho. Ab jaldi se ise pahen ke niche aajao mehmaan bas ane hi wale honge. Aur tumhare liye aaj mere paas ek bohat bara surprize bhi hain.
Priya: thik hai lekin in do shaitaano ko bhi to tayaar karna hai.
Mallika: inko tayaar karne ki jimedaari meri .

Party was about to start lekin mallika ke ankhe jaise darwaje pe gari ho. Wo priya ko surprize dena chahati thi par uske liye ye jaruri tha ki jab ram aye to use priya dhekna le.

Ram was getting ready he was supposed to wear his jet black suit and red tie but his heart was telling him to wear something colourful so at last he dicided to wear the fav colour tie of priya with that suit. Ram was in the way of the party but suddenly he remember that he was going to someone birthday party without gift. He went to nearby market and searched for most suitable gift for the birthday person but failed atlast he dicided that flowers will be the best. And purchased a large bouque of red and yellow rose.

In the party everyone was asking about priya and after sometime priya camed downstairs she was not lookina a bit less than any princess with wearing a light red saree, open hair , a big rose in her hair, a little bit of makeup and shining lipgloss on her lips. Everyone one wished her and
Priya cuted the cake and as loving mother gaved first bite to ridhima and ridhaan. But mallikas mind was somewere else she was thinking that where was ram and just then ram enter the house mallika saw him first as she was already looking at the door insanly. She went to ram and
mallik.: i am so glad u came.
Ram: infact i should be glad that u invited me in this party.
Ram mallika se baat to kar raha tha par use party ke bheed me phirse uski ankhen kisi anjaane apne ko dhund ne lagi thi jaise us din mall ke shop me dhund rahi thi.
Mallika: mr ram! Mr ram!
Ram: ohh! Sorry aap kuch kah rahi thi
mallika : ha actully wo aap mere saath chaliye aapko kisi se milwana hai
ram: kisse..??? main to yaha kisi kobhi janta tak nahi hu.
Mal: trust main jinse aapko milane ja rahi hu use aap bohat achi tarah jante hai.
Priya was talking with some one
mal: priya yaha aaoo. Mene tumhe surprize ke liye kaha tha na. Tumhara surprize ready hai. Mallika take priya to a room were ram was already present.
Mall: priya ab tum ankhe khol sakti ho and priya opened her eyes but was infront of her the man , love, life of her. was standing infront of her. She just cld not blv this. Actually she was shocked to see ram here in her drmz also she had never imagined this. Lots of ques were running in priyas mind as well as ram mind.
Kuch jaana kuch anjaana sa mujhko to wo lage. Sari raina sapna banke wo ankho me jaage..
Bare acche lagte hai... Ye dharti , ye nadiya, ye raina aur aur hmmm.

Thank u very much for bearing me and my mistakes.
Gud bad any types of comments r welcome. Exsept eggs everything r welcome even if it is tomatoes, sandal , stone any anything.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Priya aur Ram...ab aamne saamne hai...ab aage kya hua yeh bhi batao ...pls jaldi se update karo😃

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