SS: tum main zindagi hai. Updated part 5(page 9) 29.5.12 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

ram bacche ke saath... 😊... wat will happen nw... ❓...


thanks 4 the update !!!





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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Such a small update? Not fair yeah.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Here goes the 4th part..

Ram sees a smal girl crying...
He goes to her
ram: hey baby.. Aap ro kyun rahe ho?
She moves the othr side in fear..
Ram kneels down.. Are gudiya daro mat...
Riddi cldnt uttr a wrd othr thn mamma..
Ram:achcha chalo .. Frnds? And moves his hand frwd..
Riddi luks at the smiling face of ram and keeps her lil hand on his.. He lifts her up in his arms and wipes her tears...
Ram: achch gudiya ye batao ki aap ro kyun rahi thi?
Riddi: wo uncle.. Kya he na.. Mein ridhan aur maasi mama ke liye gift lene aaye the.. Aur wo log kho gaye.. Aap mere maasi ko doondoge'?
ram : haan gudiya.. mein promise karta hoon ki mein tumari maasi ko doondoonga..
ridhima: i love u uncle
and kisses him on his cheek..
ram: achcha gudiya.. aapko bhook lagi hein??
ridhi: haan uncle..
ram: haan tho chalo pehle kuch kha lete hein..
he takes her to an indian rstrnt..
ram: haan gudiya.. aap kya loge??
riddhi: aloo ke parate.. <akhir apna asli rang dhika hi diya> mujhe baht pasand hein .. . mera fav hein..
ram: are yeh mera bhi fav hein..
achcha gudiya ab ek baat poochna tho bhool hi gaya.. aapka naam kya hein?
ridhi: ridhima kapoor
ram: kapoor? aap kahan rehti hein?
ridhi: mein na.. hamare maasi, mamma aur ridhan ke sath hamare ghar mein rahte hein..
ram: aur aapke papa??
ridhi 'papa' sunte hi sad ho jaati hein... ram notices this..
ram: achcha chalo chodo.. apke mamma ka naam kya hein??
ridhi meri mama ka naam.. kehne waali hoti hein ki mallika wahan use doondhte.. doondhte pahunch jaati hein..
ridhi: maasi... maasi.. And runs towrds her..
Mal: lifts her and are mera bachcha kahan chali gayi thi?
Riddi: maasi.. Aapko pata hein? Mujhe ek uncle mile the.. Unhone na, mujhe aloo parate bhi kilaye.. Aapko pata he.. Wo na mujhe gudiya bolte hein...
She gets down and leads ridhan and mallika to ram..
Mallika is shockd to see ram..
Ram: hai am ram kapoor..
Malika: am mallika.. Thanku so much mr. Ram.. Jab aap ridhi ke kareebi ban chuke he to.. I wnt to invite u to the b'day party of her mothr..< she doesnt say her name.. Since she want to surprise thm..> please.. Mr.ram..
Ram: am realy sorry .. I've an important business meeting day aftr tmrw..
Mal: bt stil pls try to cme.. Ths is my card..
Ram also gives his card to her..
Ram kisses riddi on her cheeks and bids bye..

End of the part

pls feel free to share ur cmnts gd r bd..

With love
anjali and lavanya
Edited by Lavi_961 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

nyc part... thank u so much dear... i just came 4 a brk frm school & found u have updated... i'm so happy... u made my day dear... thank u so much... love u 🤗




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: salsaly

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">nyc part... thank u so much dear... i just came 4 a brk frm school & found u have updated... i'm so happy... u made my day dear... thank u so much... love u🤗</font>

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thnk u so much.. Vry h'py tht u likd it.. Luv u too di..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Too gud yaar. Hats off to u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
areee pls continue karo na asap !!!!!...wanna see ram at the party ...n how RaYa meet...too good...😛
Edited by sss283 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Its to good please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkjali

Too gud yaar. Hats off to u


we've togethr writtn it..;->
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
superb... too good...

just want to see priyas b'da surprise...

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