SS: tum main zindagi hai. Updated part 5(page 9) 29.5.12 - Page 4

Loved it. Waiting for the next update.

nice update please continue soon

Originally posted by: veena23

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thanks veena di sab aapse hi sikha hai

Here comer the part 3. The whole part exsept the last para is written by lavi.

Ram reaches the hotel..
Its the same hotel
where they had stayd
during
the hny mn.. He chekd in..
Nd got frsh.. Suddnly the
phn rang.. It ws
frm india..
Ram: hello..
Kk: hello ram beta.. Teek
se pauch gaya na?
Ram: haan ma.. Mein
teek se pauch gaya
hoon..
Ape:are bhai.. Aapko
mere list ke baare mein
yaad hein na?
Ram: haan baba.. Yaad
hein.. Abhi nikal raha
hoon tumhare liye
shopping karne ke liye..
Bye..
Ape: bye .. Apna kyal
rakhna..
Scene shifts to mallika's
office..
Mallika: aree priya.. Wo
india ke company se
phne aaya tha.. Unka
owner pauch gaya hein..
Hamne kal ki meeting fix
kar di hein.. Tume hi
attend karna he.. Mera
kal imprtnt meetng he..
P:haan teek hein.. Mein
handle kar loongi..
Mal: Are bachchon ko
pick karne ka tym ho
gaya hein na?
Priya:haan mein abi
nikalti hoon..
Mal:nahi tum rehne do
mein chali jaati hoon.
P:haan teek hein..bye
mal:bye.
mallika and children in car
mal:are bachcho.. Aapko
pata hein do din baad
aapke mama ka b'day
hein??
Ridhi: are maansi hame
tho pata hi nahi tha.. Hm
mama ke liye dher
sari toys lenge..
Ridhan:haan aur choclts
bhi..
Mal:haan tho abi chalen..
Mama ke liye gift lene?
Kids:yeah.. Yeah.. Hm
mama ko gift denge..
Thy reach the mall..
Ram is in the same mall
and lking the list and
searchng..
In the mean tym bache
usi shop mein aate hein
mallika ke sath..
Ram ko kuch alag sa feel
hota he aur uski nazar
kisi anzane apne ko
dhund ne lagti hai.
Waha mallika aur bache
atlast apni shoping
khatam karte hai.
Ridhaan: maasi mujhe
booohat bhuk lagi.l jaldi
se chalo naa and start
pulling mallika
while going out of the
shop ridhima notice a
cute doll and stop. Bcoz
of ridhaan shouting in
and pulling Mallika, she
did not relise that
ridhima was not with
them...
Meantime ridhima start
crying when she sees
that her maasi and bro
is not with her. Ram see a cute
little girl crying and he went near to the girl...
Ram: hey gudiya what
happen?? why r u
crying??
Ridhima was so scared
that she was only able to say is
muma & muma in a scared
and shaking voice.

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Dear, its to good please continue soon.

yep its good... continue soon

awww cuteee ...
waiting for next

poor thing crying !!!!! ...do continue sooon na...very eager to read d next part...😛