SS: tum main zindagi hai. Updated part 5(page 9) 29.5.12 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh nice start up the story ..
superb ...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh ...poor priya .Lavi dear,great starting now continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8t start👏 👏 👏
do continue soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very good beginning...thoda suspense kholdo na...3 yrs priya akele !!!😔🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Next update wil be postd by anjali very soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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we will wait eagerly !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for ur feedback. Here comez part 2. Hope u will like it.

Flash back
after niharika kdnp nutz and priya made kartik comes out of the jail,
there was huge fight in "km"..
Niharika was already there...
Jho priya ke khilaaf raam ki kaan bar rahi hain...
And ram blvs everything that niharika has said to him and rushes to priya and shouts at har...
Ram: hw dare you talk to my mom like that???hw can you say such things to her???
Priya:wht did i do ram???meine aapki maa se kuch nahi kaha...
Ram: maa jhoot kyun bolegi???jhoot tum bol rahi ho...
Priya turns to niharika and starts shouting at har..: kya kahatumne mere baare man inse??bolo na???
Kya kaha mere khilaaf??
Ram: shut up priya.. Dnt u dare to shout at my mother.. I'll throw u out of my house...
Priya: accha tho mujse jyada aapko apni maa ke kahe hue parzyada bharosa hai.. Mujh par itna bhi trust nahi hai aapko???
Ram: nahi hai...and pls priya..get out of my house right now..
I dnt wnt to live with anybody who dnt respect my mother..
End of flashback...

Tears were rolling down from priyas eyes... And mallika was feeling bad for reminding the incidence to priya..
Mallika: pls dnt cry priya everything will bcome ok...
Priya: wipeing her tears...mallika shayad tum bhul rahi ho ki aaj tumhari imprt meeting hai aur tumhe der ho rahi hai.
Mallika: ohh shit!!! Thanks priya, meet u in office...
Scene shift to mumbai.. In mumbai it is raining heavily..
Ram standing near the window and remembering the bigest mistake of his life... Today the person he had loved most his life priya was not with him... But he cld not blame priya either bcoz he had only told her live.. S! He was guilty... But the situation at that time was the main culprit...
Ram...beta ram. He came out his thought and looked back it was krishu ji..(s, atlast ram was with har real mother. After knowing the truth he had brougth back kk and apeksha to there own house and kicked out the trio but...cld not find priya)
ram: ji maa kahi
kk: vo vicky ka phn aya tha kisi kaam ke liye tumhe off bulaya hai.
Ram: ji me abhi jaake dhekta hu
kk: ram akhir kab tak yu khudko dard dete rahoge..
Ram: aap kya kahe rahi hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai...
Kk: ram tum kuch kahi ya na kahi tumhari ankhe sab kahe deti hai mujhe..
Ram: kya meri galti itni bari hai??? Kya mujhe kabhi priya milegi???
Kk: tum hosla mat haro ram main janti hu tumnhe priya jarur ek na ek din mil jayegi...
Ram huggedhis mother , and cryed he was no longer the tough guy after the incidence he was broken "The ram kapoor " was boken...
In office:::
vicky: kya yaar subah se tujhe phn laga raha hu,tera phn hai kaha???
Lagta hai tera phn dabba ho gaya hai. Naya phn kharid le bol to main hi kharid deta hu...
Ram: tune mujhe ye kahene ke liye bulaya hai...
Vicky: nahi..nahi.. Wo actually humare australia ki cmpny me kuch prbln aa gaya hai, to tujhe waha jana parega...
Australia the place were ram had felt something for priya .. First time in his life...
Ram: to tu kisi aue ko bhej dena
vicky: me bhej deta par wo australia ki no 1 cmpny hai aur unhone shart rakha hai ki humari cmpny ke owner ko mile baigar wo deal sign nahi karenge.. Wo deal humaray liye bohat impt hai.. Us deal se hume bohat profit hoga aur humare business aus me aur bhi achi tarah set ho paye ga...
Ram: jaane dena vickram , kitna profit karenge...
Vicky: ye tu kya kahe raha hai ram tujhe pata ai na ki wo deal humare liye kitna jaruri hai, tu in 4 saal me bohat badal gaya hai. Tu aaj koshis kiye baigar hi haar kaise man raha hai. Tune to kabhi zindagi me harna nahi sikha...
"After losing priya. Ram ki zindagi me har zeet in shabdo ka koi mayne nahi hai"
ram: accha baba, tu meri tickets kara de.
Vicky: mene aaj raat ki flight me teri ticket book kara diye hai and all the bst for ur deal.
Ram: mai chalta hu..
:Kapoor mansion:
ram is back from off and pckng his bag.
Kk: kya hua beta kuch prblm hai kya???aur tum kaha ja rahe ho?
Ram: actually aus mw kuch kaam agaya hai to mujhe waha jana parega
kk: par kitne dinoke liye jaa rahe ho???
Ram: sab kam smoothly ho gaya to 1 hafte me aa jaounga...
At tha time apeksha came and come to know to know that ram is going to aus
apeksha: ram agar tumhe takleef na ho to aus se mujhe kuck saman chahiye tha agar tum laa sakhte to??
Ram: isme takleef ki kya baat hai tum list dedo me samaan la dunga..
Acha to me chalta hu mujhe flight ke liya late ho raha hai.
Kk and apeksha bid him gud bye and safe.
In aus: priya riched office and saw angry mallika wailking here and there...
Priya: wht hpnd y r u so angry??
Mallika: tumhe mene india ke deal ke bare me btaya tha naa??
Priya: wahi wala naa jis deal se hume india me bhi aapna buss spread kar sakta hai.
Mallika: ha wahi wala, par deal sign hogi tab naa
priya: kyu kuch prblm hai??
Mallika: us company ke
Edited by Pinkjali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mallika bulaya to hai par pata nahi kab tak ayega..
Priya: me handle karu
mallika: ya sure, why not
priya us cmpny ke manager ko phn karke khub chilati hai, aur manager ke bohat convince karne ke baad ek aue muaka deti hai.
Priya: agle 24 hours ke ander tumhare company ke owner yaha hone chahiye.
Mallika : tum itna hyper kyu ho rahi ho.
Priya: mujhe kuch bhi harna pasand nahi.
Ram ko khone ke baad jaise priya ko haar shabd se nafraat ho gaya hai.
Waha ram ka flight aus me land karta hai and wo car me baith ke hotel ke liye nikal jata hai...
Raste me use wo stadium dhikta hai and uski aur priya ki pyaari yaade use gher leti hai. Ram priya ki tasveer dheke kaheta hai ki...
Pata nahi kyu priya par mujhe yaha ake lagta hai ki tum yahi kahi mere aas paas ho.

Sorry for any gramatical and spelling mistake. I have wriiten for first time.
Lavi without ur help this would not be possible thanks from my heart to u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey... me first !!!

well... whole part was just awesome... it's superb... i love it... thanks a lot frm bottom of my to both off u... hats off to ur effort !!! ... thanks a lot... 🤗




Edited by salsaly - 13 years ago

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