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Posted: 13 years ago
Very very nicely written. Read all of them, seriously they made my weekend.Thanks and waiting for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends
here is the update sorry for the late update

Scene 24:

Recap:

Priya: no way and she ran away, Ram was running behind her trying to catch her both of them were running in the room,

Ram: Priya this is not fair tum aise kaise kar rsakthi ho yaar

Priya: everything is fair in love and war

Ram: ye yaad rakhna... jab main tumhe pakdunga na tabh yahi kehna

Priya turns around: sochungi and tries to run but as she suddenly turns she trips and was about to fall Ram ran towards her, he held her in his arms

Update:

As they finished their lunch Priya's mobile was ringing she took the call it was from Ram's office his cell was switched off so they called her, they had some emergency for which they needed Ram immediately and both of them returned back. Next few days were very busy for both of them as they both got involved in their work Priya too started going to her classes, Ram was too occupied in his business, he would leave early and by the time he returned it would be too late in the night. Priya too understood the situation so she just adjusted herself as the days passed she felt some where deep in heart that Ram could alteast spend some time with her

Ram left for his office too early even before Priya woke up, she woke up and was still closing her eyes praying that atleast today the first thing in the morning would be to see her Ram's face she put her hand opened her eyes as she didn't feel him disappointed she opened her eyes and thought: aaj phir se subah hi chale gaye thodi der tho rukh sakthe the na… mere uth ne ka tho intezaar karte she got ready and left for her classes but all the while only one thought was there in her mind about Ram

Ram could feel that Priya was angry with him, he understood his Priya too well it was not necessary for him to hear what Priya words, even when she wouldn't say anything he would understand what she meant and he knew what she felt but he was too busy with his work that he could spend some quality time with her and knew he was worthy of her anger but on that he decided to give her a surprise by spending sometime with her, so he reached home early in the evening and was waiting for her: yeh kya hai yaar har roz tho abhi tak aa jaathi thi aur aaj dekho kitna dheer hogaya hai aur abhi tak nahin aayi chal beta Ram itne dino se tu usse itnezaar karva raha than a tho aaj teri baari hai teri galati ki sazaa tho tujhe bukhatna hi padega na and sat on her watching tv and was looking at the door for every few minutes

Priya thought to take extra classes on that day thinking that she would be alone in the room instead of that she thought of taking the classes: main ghar par akhele kya karungi who tho sirf apne kaam mein busy hai mere baare mein sochne ka waqt hi nahin… main uss karme mein rahungi tho unki yaad aur bhi zyada aayegi jab unhe meri yaad nahin aati hai tho main kyun wahan ja kar unhe yaad karu

Ram dozed off while waiting for Priya and by the time he woke up it was 10 in the night, he saw that Priya was sleeping beside him he slowly put his arm around her and brought her close to him. Priya too snuggled close to him thinking it as a dream

Priya was mumbling in her sleep: Ram aap ke paas mere liye do baatein karne ka bhi waqt nahin hai

Ram: sorry Priya main jaanta hoon mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha par main kya karu

Priya: kya karu aap ye mujhse pucha rahe hai thoda tho waqt…

Ram kept his finger on her lips: sorry sweetheart this will not repeat again Priya realized that Ram was speaking to her she opened her eyes and saw that Ram was looking at her so she pulled his cheeks

Ram: awww Priya ye kya kar rahi ho

Priya: main ye dekh rahi hoon ki ye sapna hai ya sach

Ram: ye agar ye jaana tha ki ye sapna hai ya sach tum apne aap o pinch karthi mujhe kyun

Priya tried to move away: kyun ki main aap se gussa hoon

Ram was not allowing her to move away from him: aur woh kyun

Priya was struggling a lot to move away from him but he was not ready to leave her: choddiye

Ram: tum gussa kyun ho mujse

Priya after struggling gave up and became quite: kyun ki aap ke paas mere liye waqt hi nahin hai

Ram: ye kisne kahan hai

Priya: kisi ke kehne ki kya zaroorat hai aap jo kar rahe the uss ka aur kya matlab hai

Ram: maine kya kiya hai

Priya: aap tho aise keh rahe hai jaise aap ne kuch nahin kiya

Ram was caressing her cheeks: aisa kya kiya hai

Priya caught his hand: aap ketho mere saath do baatein karne ka bhi waqt nahin hai aur punch rahe hai ki aap ne kya kiya hai

Ram: sorry baba mujhe pata hai ki ye mare galti hai aur isse sudharna chahta tha isiliye aaj jaldi bhi aa gaya tha lekin tum

Priya: kya… aaj aap jaldi aagaye… tho mujhe bhulaya kyun hai

Ram: kyun ki tumhe aurprise dena chahtha tha

Priya: mujhe laga ki akele kamre mein rehne se accha hai ki main kuch dher aur classes le loon sorry

Ram put his finger on her lips: iski koi zaroorat nahin hai yaar sorry tumhe nahin mujhe…

Priya kept her hand on his mouth: nahin…

Ram kissed her hand beforeshe could finish her sentence immediately she removed her hand: ye aap kya kar rahe hai

Ram: kya kar raha hoon matlab apne biwi ko manane ki koshish

Priya: uski koi zaroorat nahin hai aap ki biwi tho pehle hi maan gayi hai

Ram: acha… tho ab tumhe mujhe manana padega

Priya: arreh woh kyun

Ram: kyun ki aap dher se aaye the

Priya: maine sorry tho kaha than a

Ram: arreh madam hum sorry se tho maan ne wale tho hai nahin

Priya: tho phir kya karu

Ram: karna kya hai aap ko tho humara favor yaad hai na

Priya blushes when she hears the word favor: aap bhi… kuch bhi kehte hai

Ram comes close to her such that both there lips were inch apart both felt the breath and could hear the heartbeat of each other: kuch bhi kya keh raha hoon main bus apni favor maang raha hoon aur aaj tho main who lekar hi rahunga with that he closed the distance between them by placing his lips on hers


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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 nice update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...loved the update!! 😳 Please update again soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
😍😍😍😍😍😍 kya bolu??
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update meena...loved it
thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Continue soon it was awesum
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow too good! continue soon



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