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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaiqMadiha

Hey it was nice plz dnt create a diff silent between them let dem both tell each other dat dey r concernd about each other, n plz break d shuttle between them..hope u continue soon...!!! 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: balhfan

Wow... how shweet... nice update... thanks for pm...


thanksglad u like d the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanksglad u liked the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: riya01maddy

hey really wonderful update...love it😳...tnx


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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nypunya

awesome update mnh
thanq


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163

aww... dats so cute yaar... ab jaldi jaldi pyar ka ikrar ho jaye😍


thanks glad u liked the update ikrar bhi hoga jald hi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor

nice update. thanks


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamma92

Cute update! Thanks...hope to see them confessing soon! 😳


thanks glad u liked the update confession part would come soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends here is the next update:

Scene 11:

Priya realizes her feelings

After 2 days

Priya was much better now, Ram was there with her always though he never let her know that he was at the home for her he made some other other excuse, but Priya could sense that Ram cared for her that was the reason for him to stay at home.

In the evening Ram got a call

Manager: sir aap se kuch poonch na tha

Ram: haan poonchiye

Manager: sir abhi ek bahut important meeting hai 5 ko

Ram: aap khud dekh lijiye

Manager: sir main khud dekh leta par clients aap hi se milna chahthe hai bus 1 hr mein meeting complete ho jayega

Ram: 1 hr mein ho jayega tho main aata hoon

Manager: thanks you sir. Priya listens but acts as if she hasn't heard anything

Ram: Priya mera ek bahut important meeting hai

Priya: aap kab tab aa jayenge

Ram: 1-2 hrs mein aa aajaunga

Ram left for his meeting, Priya was alone in the room she was feeling lonely as it was first time that she was alone in 4 days.She was unable to concentrate on the book before her she didn't know why she was feeling so thought that it may be bcoz of fever, she unintentionally started to check the clock for every few minutes.Sh e thought Priya baar baar watch dekhne se kya 2 hrs khatam ho jayenge ye kya kar rahi hai tu kya hogaya hai tujhe

It was 8, three hrs passed Ram didn't return from the office she thought about calling him but then again she thought what if she disturbs his meeting after half an hour she dialed his number thinking even if I disturbing the meeting I don't care but Ram's phone was switched off she just stood near a window from where she could see the arrival of his car, as soon as his car arrived she ran to the hall by the time Ram entered the hall her heart was filled with joy she didn't know what this feeling was may be this… this is called love but pushed the thought away

Ram: Priya waha par kya kar rahi ho but Priya didn't respond she was thinking something else so he tried again by calling name a bit louder this time: Priya…

Priya: aap kuch keh rahe the

Ram: tum stairs par khadi ho ke kya kar rahi ho

Priya: kuch nahin niche hi aa rahi thi

Ram: niche aa rahi thi???? 10 mins se dekh raha hoon wahi pe khadi ho tum thik tho ho na

Priya: haan main kuch soch rahi thi

Ram: kya … anyways mujhe bhukh lag rahi hai hearing this Priya thanked god as she could avoid answering the question

Priya: khana ready hoga chaliye after having their dinner they went totheir room

Priya sits on couch thinking yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha jab Mr.Kapoor ghar par nahin the tho main baar baar watch dekh rahi thi aur unhi ke bare mein soch rahi thi kitna restless hogayi thi, jab woh aaye tho stairs par khadi ho kar unhe dekh rahi thi pata nahin mujhe itni khushi unhe dekh kar kya hogaya hai mujhe main kyun aise behave kar rahi hoon kahin mujhe pyar…. Nahin Priya aisa nahin ho saktha tu bhi na kya soch rahi hai

Ram saw that Priya was thinking something: Priya kya kar rahi ho tum but Priya was too preoccupied with her thoughts so he tried again

Priya: aap kuch keh rahe the

Ram: kya ho gaya hai tumhe abhi stairs par bhi aisi hi khadi thi aur abhi bhi tumhara dhyan kahin aur hai

Priya: kuch nahin aap kuch poonch rahe the

Ram: kya kar rahi ho tum

Priya: main book pad rahi thi

Ram: acha tum book pad rahi thi

Priya: haan ye raha book

Ram: tum ne mujhe kabhi bataya nahin ki tumhe ulta book bhi padna aata hai

Priya: kya??? Ulta book and sees that she held the book upside down gives a sheepish look

Ram: koi problem hai kya

Priya: nahin kuch nahin hai she got up and looked towards bed and couch thinking where she should sleep

Ram observed it: tum chaho tho bed par so sakthi ho Priya walked towards bed both slept on either side with their backs to each other but both were thinking about each other.

Next morning Ram got a call that he has to leave to Pune for a meeting for 2 days he was getting ready to leave, he stealed glances at Priya. Priya just stood unable to understand her feelings

Ram: Priya main jaa kar aata hoon

Priya: k

Ram: tum apna khayal rakhna

Priya: thanks aap bhi

Ram: bye

Priya stood by window watching Ram's car moving out of the mansion tears rolled down her cheek when a drop fell on her hand she realized that she was crying, wiping her tears she thinks: mujhe kya hua hai jab bhi Ram mera paas hote hai main kitni khush hoti hoon agar woh mujse durr rehte hai tho mann itna bechein kyun ho jaata hai, main unhe 2 din tak nahin dekh patungi ye soch kar mujhe itna dukh kyun ho raha hai ye pyar… nahin Priya aisa mat soch… nahin Priya tujhe Ram se pyar ho gaya hai and said loudly "Yes Priya Sharma ko nahin Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor ko Mr. Ram Kapoor se pyar ho gaya hai".


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