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kmishra

@kmishra

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

loved it!...awww cant wait for the next one...i was just wondering...is it possible for you to wwrite in english..i meann i have no problem understanding but for some reason reading it takes longer...sorry...but it's okay if you cant...i love the way you write!

continue soon=)

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Esha

@eshaaax3.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kmishra
loved it!...awww cant wait for the next one...i was just wondering...is it possible for you to wwrite in english..i meann i have no problem understanding but for some reason reading it takes longer...sorry...but it's okay if you cant...i love the way you write!
continue soon=)

thx kalee...i know writing it in hindi takes a bit longer.im trying my best to put both in.but after shubh returns from london...its gonna be a mixture of both.

i myself dont speak hindi.but im going to put in english now.cuz thinking of all the hindi words is a bit hard for me.............😆 😆

thx..............

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Esha

@eshaaax3.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Part 3:

Shubh went to the airport, with mahen.........

Mahenn: hey, do u know a gud hotel or place in India i can stay at?
Shubh: yup...
Mahen: tell me i need the adress......
Shubh: i know where it is.. u just come with me.....
Mahen: but tell me first......
Shubh: my house......
Mahen: no i cant.. plz.......
Shubh:......... no if's no but's..now come on the flight will leave in a bit.....

they get onto the flight..........
Shubh asks the 'flight attendant' what time the flight will reach at India.....
FA: ( in a british accent) the flight will land at India at 6 pm..
Shubh: thankyou...
FA: no problem...enjoy the flight ..........

7 hrs later....................

Shubh and mahen get off the plan and reach the airport at India.......

Mahen: tumhari parivaar kya tumhe pick karne aar rehai, ya ....
Shubh: u know what surprise means??
Mahen: yeah.what kindof question is that?..........
Shubh: ur so stupid, im gonna give em a surprise, idiot........
Mahen: nice,

shubh and mahen leeft for Rajasthan...............

At Rajasthan Haveli.......

Aastha, deepa, and Divz were fixing the clothes on the clothes line outside......
Deepa: divz.woh basket do plz......
Divz: yeh lo.........
Aastha was lost in thoughts.......
( thinks)
it feels as if aaj koi aara hai...koi aara hai..........

then u see shubh and mahen coming.....

u see shubh and mahen park the car.and get out

aastha turns around and ses shubh.................
Aastha stands, there happy and shocked( in a gud way)
Aastha: deepa, whats today?
Deepa: saturday , kyun?
Aastha: i know its saturday, whats the date?
Deepa: aaj toh 11 october hai...kyun........
Aastha: stupid look over there......
Deepa truns around and sees shubh...and this'guy'????/
Deepa: bhaiu .......!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Aastha ran to the house, up the stairs....
Am: aastha beta,....kya hua???samal ke.iss larki ko kya hua?
Aastha ran to her room.and wathched shubh walk.to the house from the balcony.............

Back outside:
Deepa: BHAIU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Deepa ran to shubh and hugged Shubh:
Shubh: woh..........u missed me.....btw where's sharad?
Deepa: yeah i did, um Sharad bahr gaya apni doton ke saat......
Shubh: aur Divz, uncle aunty, mummy papa. kahahn hai?
Divz: hi shubh bhaiya!!!!
Shubh: there u are, so .........where is everyone.......
Divz: mein abhi saaab ko bulathi hooon..........

Divz ran inside..........
Mummy, Papa, uncle aunttttty...Shubh bhaiya is here!!!!!!1

Everyone went outside.........
Shubh's mother took the 'aarti' ........
everyone went up to shubh, said there hi's. and hugs.....
Shubh took the aarti.and went inside...........
Sharad reached home as soon as possible......
Sharad: bhaiya!
Shubh: now u come...

they had their brotherly hug.......that sounds funny............😆

Shubh counted all the ppl in the living room...........besides him and mahen.....
Ek , do , teen,.......... saat..... ek aur member missing hai..Aastha kahan hai?

Precap....?????

guys i know this one was short..im gonna post another one later...ive to go now.ill be on in a couple minutes....

hoped u liked it!

Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 17 years ago

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mohini_agarwal

@mohini_agarwal

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

please update soon... and can you pm me when you update?

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giggling gurl

@giggling gurl

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

heyy that was kool... keep it up n post soon...
i hav put in [art 2 too... wil post another long part tonite... do read

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kmishra

@kmishra

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

yay...i cant wait till they get together...awesome update! cotninue soon

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Jus know i read ur 3 updates..bcoz i was busy in school work so was not able to be online..and the ff was awesome..continue soon dear..

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Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

loved it plz write more soon n plz write a longer update if posssibale =)

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Esha

@eshaaax3.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

guys no update today for either of my ff's. im wayyyyyyyyyyyy tooooooooooooooooooo busy...............

sorryyy...........

one question that bothers me is why do we get hw??

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