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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: greatpisces

oh the intro seemed good.......but i really hope that u wont kill swayam like ratna did.......or else ill stop following ur ff in future...lol.......



oh no no no... i am not planning on killing anyone so far... i told ya... nothing negatives
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cant wait for the next update!. this is so gud!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was really good..continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it plz write more soon can't wait for teh next part =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

cant wait for the next update!. this is so gud!!



heyy... thanxx... i havnt written the update yet.. wil do it in an hour possibly... wait up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zumra03

It was really good..continue soon.



thanx dear... it means a lawwttt...!!! sure wil cont soon... wil put in an hour or so
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sejal719

loved it plz write more soon can't wait for teh next part =)



thanx yaar... i was outa station thes days... wil update soon now
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: greatpisces

oh that was cooolllll......



thanx... but shubh is always kool
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx dear... wont make u wait long now...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART TWO




shubh landed in Mumbai... no one had come to pick him up... he never liked it... his family members knew wat to do... wat he liked. they always send his super hot n red sports car so that he could drive himself home... thats how he liked it...

prem drove himself home his mind wandering to the surprise his mom had told over the fone... wat could it be???
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at the ranawat household...

there was a hell going on... everyone were running hither tither, either doing something or getting something done... obviously there was going to be a party that evening... wat it was for??? shubh's homecoming??? of course... that and something else

swayam folded his arms and sat over on a couch refusing to partcipate in anything... his mom came over and asked, "swayam tum yaha bete ho??? arre kuch toh karo itna sara kaam hai..."

swayam: no mom... ek toh me ye sab hote hue nahi dekh sakta... aur main bhi madad karu??? hargis nahi

sulochana frowned: aise mat kaho beta... ye khushi ki baat hai...

swayam: yeah yeah

sulochana: ab ye mooh banana bandh karo aur waha jaake phool le aao

swayam: mom!!!

but sulochana pointed her finger in the other direction... swayam grumpily made his way towards the flowers. he had been grumpy about the whole thing after his parents had told him that along with the party, there was something else they had planned....
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shubh reached his house... he was overwhelmed to be back... watever it may seem of shubh, modern, trendy handsome... he was also the cute emotional guy beneath who loved his parents n brothers the most... he could never say no to his mother... he was the perfect son too...

he parked the car n got out... the lugguage would be brouth in by the house workers. it was already the 6 in the evening... he couldnt see a single light put on... he guessed it could be a surprise party.. he tiptoed in through the half opened door... but just as he had put his feet on, all the light came on with such blinding effect that made shubh close his eyes and thunderous applause...

before he opened his eyes, he was hugged by 3 pairs of enormous manly hands... he recognized each of the touches instantly, saksham, pratham, mahen...

shubh frowned inwardly, "wheres swayam bhaiyya"

the guys let go of him and shubh smiled brightly at everyone... it was a surprise party with a huge baner saying.."WELCOME BACK SHUBH"

he went and touched his parents feet and hugged his mom well enough to make her squeak though she had got emotional... he then spotted swayam waiting for him 10 feet away grinning at him...

shubh grinned back too and throw a big hug onto him too... :"i missed you bhaiyyaaa"

swayam hugged him back with such brotherly affection too..."i missed you too chotteee"

they pulled apart and shubh was sent upstairs to freshen up and change... as shubh got into his room, he spotted a black suit with black semi transparent shirt inside... he liked it in the first look... defenitely had to be swayam bhaiyya's choice..

shubh thought about the surprise... no the pary couldnt be the surprise... seeing everyone in very expensive and great attire made shubh think otherwise... had they planned somethng??? he looked bak at his outfit... some wedding plans coming up??? shubh grinned brightly... no wonder swayam bhaiyya was looking so grumpy... finally mom and dad had got the right girl for him toooo...

shubh whooped in joy!!! this was the best surprise he ever imagined... swayam bhaiyya... his brother who vowed to eternal bachelorship... finally getting married...


~~~to be contd...

keep readin to see if shubh is right about the surprise...



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