FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

shreya i... ur on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey ur ff is goin gr8 !!!!!!!!!!!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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thx everyone, ill post it as soon as i fix a couple of things in my room........

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Recap:
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Deepa: Bhaiu?? I know what ur thinking.

Shubh: deepa, mein kya kaoon, mein aastha ko propse karne chala, toh tab pata chala ki woh shadi karihe, mein aastha ko bhulne ki bohut koshish ki hein, lekin kya hua???? Aastha phirse meri zindagi mein aagaya??

Deepa: mein nahi janti ki bhagwan kyya chata hai, lekin bhaiu aab rana aur astha ki bareme kya kaare????

Shubh: mujhe nahi patha

Deepa: divorce???

Shubh: lekin deepa, hum yeh saab kaise kaarenge????

Deepa: sochna parega. Lekin ek baatth toh teek hai, aastha or rana ke beech kuch nahi hai……..

-Deepa whispers something to shubh.

Shubh: mujhe nahi pata ki meri behen itne smart hai??

Deepa: yeah yeah. But remember bhaiu, remeber it.

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UPDATE TIME:

Next Day:

Shubh is going to office, he sounds happy.

Aastha: tum office ja re ho?

Shubh: haan, swyam aur pap aage chala gaya, aur mein tho hamesha late uthi hoon, tho mein late office jaatha hoon.

Aastha: No, seriously,??? ( being sarcastic) you always wake up late……

Shubh: haha, very funny, tumhe kuch chaiya kya?

Aastha: oh ha, tum kya mujhe mandir mein drop kaarogi??

Shubh: ofcouse,

So shubh n aastha leave …

In the background ……

http://www.indianfilmsongs.blogspot.com/2007/09/bebasi-dard-ka-alam-baabul-get-this.html

Bebasi dard ka aalam, tum mujhe de do apne gham - 2
Khamoshiyan bhi do, tanhaaiyan bhi do
Bechaaniyan bhi de do, de do naa - 2

Bhigi palkon se churaa loongaa nami
Rehne doonga naa, kahin koi kami - 2
Tumko daaman na bhigone doonga
Ab kabhi tumko na rone doonga
Uljhane gham ki parchhaiyi
De do mujhe apni tanhaaiyaan
Gumnaamiyan bhi do, naakaamiyan bhi do
Viraaniyan bhi de do, de do naa

Tere hothon pe sajaa doonga hansi
Teri raahon mein bichha doonga khushi)- 2
Tum mujhe apna maanti ho agar
Yun khafa hoke na jhukaao nazar
Mushkilen apni majburi
Ho de do mujhe saari benoori
Pareshaaniyan bhi do, hairaaniyan bhi do
Nigebaaniyan bhi de do, de do naa

Bebasi dard ka aalam, tum mujhe de do apne gham - 2
Khaamoshiyan bhi do, tanhaaiyan bhi do,
Bechainiyan bhi de do, (de do naa- 2)

Shubh stopped at the madir and dropped aastha…

Aastha: shubh tum bhi chalo na……..

Shubh: nahi astha, mein …

Aastha: oof ho , aao na…

Shubh teekh hai

Shubh and astha go to the mandi…

Shubh's prathna :

Mein nahi janti tu kya chaati hai ma, aastha ko mujhe se door lekar, phirse wapas lekar aaiho astha ko, mein nahi janti tu kya chati hai, lekin mujhe ashirwad dejia take mein jo karne jaare hoon woh puri hojaaya, plz maa, mein kabhi tujhese kuch nahi maanga, lekin aaj mang re hoon, plz maadat keje

Aastha's prathna:

Maa, mein aaj teri saamne khari hoon. Meri zindagi iiss moor paar aya hai ki mujhe doosro se maadat maange ne hai. Kasie kismet hai yeh. Mein kabhi bhi kisse se pyar nahi kiia ,lekin jab hua, tab itna baara jhaatka lagaa, aab mein aur kuch nahi kar sakte maa, maa mujhe shkti deejay , plz maa, mujhe maadat kije

( I know crappy hindi and crappy prathnas, I know)

shubh was done with his prathna and stared at astha, her beauty , with her dupatta covering her head made her even more beautiful, mesmerized, he was…..

Aastha: shubh? Kaha khogaye??

Shubh: oh , um woh sorry, mein tumko ghar drop karke atthi hoon.

Aastha: nahi shubh, mein thora akela rehna chati hoon, so plz tum jao, mein taxi lekar chal jaonga….

Shubh: teek hai, bye, se you later

Aastha: hmmm

Shubh left and astha walked to the park , ( stupid, you could have asked shubh to drop u there…lol)

Shubh is in his cabin, and is thinking about ewhat deepa told him………..

Shubh: Shubh get ready , cuz its time for a little fun!!

Precap: rana will/…………

- Kya shubh aur deepa ka plan kaamyab hopayaga?

- what will shubh do???

- What will rana do??

- Aastha kab jaan payaga shubh ka raaz???

Paarye Babul Ka Aangan Chootey Na FanFic , Dosti, aur phir Pyaar, Ravivaar se Shaanivar , sirf IndiaForums par…….
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Sej

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

loved the part but hate the suspense lol

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: sejal719
loved the part but hate the suspense lol

aare yar, agar kahani mein suspense nahi, tho maza kaha se aathi hai????

thx

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

write some more.and it really awesome..

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aashni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

nciee update reli loevd it ab jaldi karo nahhh😳

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#119

awwwwwwww, thx guys, ill post the update soon, k.......

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#120

Recap:

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Aastha: shubh? Kaha khogaye??

Shubh: oh , um woh sorry, mein tumko ghar drop karke atthi hoon.

Aastha: nahi shubh, mein thora akela rehna chati hoon, so plz tum jao, mein taxi lekar chal jaonga….

Shubh: teek hai, bye, se you later

Aastha: hmmm

Shubh left and astha walked to the park , ( stupid, you could have asked shubh to drop u there…lol)

Shubh is in his cabin, and is thinking about ewhat deepa told him………..

Shubh: Shubh get ready , cuz its time for a little fun!!

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Shubh called deepa…

Shubh: deepoa tumko lagta hai ki aastha divorce kaaregi??

Deepa: bhaiu have you sen how miserable she is???

Shubh: yes, that's why I was thinking turning the tables.

Deepa: matlab??

Shubh: matlab yeh ki, aastha aur rana ko phirse ….

Deepa: HAVE U GONE MAD BHAIU!!!!!!!!!!

Shubh: calm down..

Depa: how can I calm down, aastha is sorta like my sis, and I cant see her going throught the same pain over a gain..

Shubh: exactly , we'll make rana's life miserable w/ the girl hes w/ and then hell realize that aastha's way better…

Deepa: what about you bhaiu??

Shubh: what about me deepa?? Ive moved on…..

Deepa: teekh……hai

Shubh disconnected the phone, and thught over what he just said…

Aastha….Aastha………Aastha…Astha……….

Shubh was busy as usual w/ office work and was thinking about how to get rana and astha back together( don't do it…..)

Kya karoon mein??

It was getting dark and shubh was getting ready to leave…

When shubh got home, he saw….

In the living room, aastha was crying…

Shubh rushed over to aastha, and saw that she was crying because of a movie!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hahahahahahahaah

Shubh: aastha r u srs??

Aastha: *sniff* ha, *sniff* kyun…

Shubh: nahi, bas aise, lekin tum kabse yeh sabaab.. luv or sad movie dekhna shuru kia??

Aastha: woh, jabse…

Shubh: oh umm aastha, tum kyaa kaarogi agar phirse rana tumhare zindagi mein aathi hai??

Aastha: mujhe nahi pata, agar woh saache di l se badaal gaya , then maybe, kyun??

Shubh: nahi baas aise….

Shubh was thinking on how to get rana back to astha, when

Shubh: idea!!

Aastha: tumne kuch kaha??

Shubh: idea !!!!!!!!!! idea, ive got an idea!!!!!!!!! And shubh left the room……….

Aastha stood there, with a akward expression on……..

Idea?? Shubh ko kya hogaya, what idea???

Precap: from now on, I wont give precaps, just read my "ADVERTISEMENT"……. lol

- kya shubh rana or aastha ko ek kar paayga

- kya aastha kush hoga

- kya hoga shubh ko?

Paarye Babul Ka Aangan Chootey Na FanFic , Dosti, aur phir Pyaar, Ravivaar se Shaanivar , sirf IndiaForums par…….

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