FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Shubh_Aastha
bechaara.............gift dene aaya to pata chala ladki ki kisi aur se shaadi ho rahi hai aur jab aakhir mein sab theek ho gaya tab pata chala ki gift ladki ke paas already hai!!!!!

hahah nice one!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

okay, whta happened to the pages?

i thought there were 13,, now there's 10, i want my 13 pages bac!!!!11

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

ok im bac, ill post the next update, if i can, and u guys are not going to like the next update, veery sad!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Update:
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Aastha: oh my god!!!, shubh what is wroung ewoth you?????

Shubh comes and sits besides aastha

Shubh: aastha I really love you, seriously, I do

Aastha: say it the proper way, you know wioth the ring and srtuff

Shubh now remeberd he had thrown the gift .

Shubh: wo '.wo'wo'.woh mein

Aastha: yeh dhoode re ho?

Aastha was holding the gift.

Shubh: how did you get this?

Aastha: mein nahi janti, aab lo

Shubh: wow, very eager

Aastha: shut up
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.......................... Bhaiya, bhaiya, bhaiya???????//

Shubh: kya hai ?
Swayam: get up, aapko papa ke saath office jaana hai>
Shubh: yeah yeah okay.
swayam left shubh goes to the bathroom to freshen up

after shubh comes out...

Shubh: thinks: wait.... im in in INdia, that means all of that all of that was a stupid sapna??? woh ekhi sapna, woh ekhi spana barbar mujhe dekhaiye deta hai everyday for the last 5 months, kyun mein aastha ko bhul nahi pai?? kyun, uski shadi hogayi, aur mein abhi bhi usko bhul nahi pai, kyun bhagwan, kyun?? aastha moved on, why v\cant i.....

(before you through your chapals, and hit me with the danda, IM SORRY, it was all a dream, aastha does get married to that stupid rana dont hit me , plz, pzl,)

Deepa knocs on the door
Deepa: Bhaiu? jaldi keeje bpapa wait karehe! jaldi keeje na.
Shubh: oh ha teekh hai, tum papa ko bolo ki woh aur swayam chale jai, i have other work so, mein mere kam katham kar kar aathi hoon
Deepa: teek hai

shubh didnt really have other work, he just neede, well, time alone

Shubh was just driving here and there, and he stopped at the traffic light
he was looking around and saw......aastha!!!!!

Shubh: woah!!!!!!!!! man??????? did i just see aastha or what?? oh, stupid shubh( dont call yourself stupid shubh!!) how can she be in india??, she lives in California!!
shubh reached the office.

After a hectic day at work:

shubh left office about an hour after swayam and "papa".
it was raining too.

Shubh was driving, and passed by the same place where he though ht saw aastha.
SHubh stops the car.
Shubh: okay , maybe i can see asstha everywhere, but not in the same place!! i gotta check!

szhubh walked to the place

SHubh: excuseme?
the woman looks up
Shubh: Aastha?????????/
aastha: shubh?
Shubh: aastha what are you, i mean tum tho cali... aur tum barish mein kyun bheeg rehiho???
( i know im know my hindi sucks)
Aastha: shubh its okay, plz, can you leaver me a,one?
Shubh: aastha? tumhe sardi laaag jagaya, chalo mere saath.
Aastha: but shubh plz...
SHubh: no buts
Astha: but
Shubh: NO BUTS!!!!!!!!!!!

shubh and aastha get into th car.

car ride is silent for 5 minutes

SHubh: aastha?, i thought you were in cali?? how come youre here and in this this "halat"
Aastha: woh, woh, woh, mein, mien, woh
SHubh: aastha, tum mujhe se kuch nahi chuppathe, aab kya hua, tum kya mujhe apne dost nahi maante?
Aastha: nahi shubh, woh darasal, woh
SHubh stops the car, and in front of him he sees..............

RANA n this girl???????
Shubh: aastha? isnt thtat rana??
Aastha just nods yes.
Shubh: abhi dekhati hoon, idiot, moron, samjthi hai kya apne aap ko?
Aastgha: shubh, plz shubh, no plz,
Shubh: aastha its obvious he doesnt love you, and he has no right to play with your emotions, plz aastha
Aastha: shubh, shubh, tumhe mere kasam!!!!!!
shubh stops midway, turns around
Shubh: but astha???
Aastha: shubh, i dont care anymore, he doesnt mean anything to me, and vice versa
Shubh: aastha, but... tum....
Aastha: shubh plz mujhe yehi drop karo, plz!
Shubh: nahi, aastha tum mere saath are ho.
Aastha: nahi shubh, mein tumhare esaan aab aur nahi le sakti, tum mere liye bahut kuch kiya ho, plz shubh mein chele jaonga, plz
Shubh: aastha, behes maath karo, chalo mere saath
Aastha just nods, teekh hai

precap: i wont tell you guys anything, just wait!!!!!

sorry guys about the delay.

i know you guys hate me becuz of the twist , but...

aage aage dekho......... hota hai kya!😉

hope you guys like ti!!!!!!!!!!

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Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

It was really good..cont soon:)!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

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thankyou so much!!!!!!11

ill update soon, got to finish school work, dont worry only like 3!

thanx!!!!!

Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

im sory, i didnt update yesterday, school work, and stuff, thanx for al the comments, ill update when i come bac from schhool!!

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Sorry for the delay guys , okay I sadi in my last update that its 5 months later, im changing it too 10, and I said in one of my updates that aastha knows that shubh wrote the letter, I changing that too.

UPDATE TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aastha: shubh, shubh, tumhe mere kasam!!!!!!
shubh stops midway, turns around
Shubh: but astha???
Aastha: shubh, i dont care anymore, he doesnt mean anything to me, and vice versa
Shubh: aastha, but... tum....
Aastha: shubh plz mujhe yehi drop karo, plz!
Shubh: nahi, aastha tum mere saath are ho.
Aastha: nahi shubh, mein tumhare esaan aab aur nahi le sakti, tum mere liye bahut kuch kiya ho, plz shubh mein chele jaonga, plz
Shubh: aastha, behes maath karo, chalo mere saath
Aastha just nods, teekh hai

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update:

aastha has her head leaning against the car, tears flow down, slowly………

shubh looks at aastha, and cant take the sadness, he makes his hand into a fist…..

song in the background plays:

http://www.indianfilmsongs.blogspot.com/2007/09/bebasi-dard-ka-alam-baabul-get-this.html

Bebasi dard ka aalam, tum mujhe de do apne gham - 2
Khamoshiyan bhi do, tanhaaiyan bhi do
Bechaaniyan bhi de do, de do naa - 2

Bhigi palkon se churaa loongaa nami
Rehne doonga naa, kahin koi kami - 2
Tumko daaman na bhigone doonga
Ab kabhi tumko na rone doonga
Uljhane gham ki parchhaiyi
De do mujhe apni tanhaaiyaan
Gumnaamiyan bhi do, naakaamiyan bhi do
Viraaniyan bhi de do, de do naa

Tere hothon pe sajaa doonga hansi
Teri raahon mein bichha doonga khushi)- 2
Tum mujhe apna maanti ho agar
Yun khafa hoke na jhukaao nazar
Mushkilen apni majburi
Ho de do mujhe saari benoori
Pareshaaniyan bhi do, hairaaniyan bhi do
Nigebaaniyan bhi de do, de do naa

Bebasi dard ka aalam, tum mujhe de do apne gham - 2
Khaamoshiyan bhi do, tanhaaiyan bhi do,
Bechainiyan bhi de do, (de do naa- 2)

When they reached home……

Shubh: aastha?

Aastha was quiet.

Shubh: aastha?? We are her, chale???

Aastha: haan, woh, yeah… chalo

Shubh opened the door…

Deepa: here, bhaiu…………. Her voice traled off

Swayam: aastha????

Deepa: aastha tum yaha??? Tum tho…

Shubh: plz, aastha tum jaa kar aram karo

Aastha nods Shubh: madhav kaka, aap plz aastha ko lejai??

Madhav kaka: jee

After aastha leaves…………

Deepa: aatsha yaha kya kare hai, woh to….

Shubh: plz, woh stupid moron rana hain na,?

Swayam: ya

Shubh: woh aastha ko dohka dekar kisi aur…..

Deepa: stupid rana, moron, idiot, ….

SHubh: okay deepa, you badmouthing him wont help anything

Swayam: so , what are we supposed to do??

Shubh: I don't know, can you guys leave me alon for some while??

Swayam: sure

Swayam and deepa leave.

Depa stops and turns around…….

Bhaiu???

Shubh doesn't say anything…..

precap: ??????????

hope you like it