FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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im starting an ff sice ive read that most of you are interseted in reading one, so here it is:

Dosti, aur phir.....PYAAR!

SHUBH RANAWAT: he is in his thrird year of college in the US, hes the coolest guy in school, and aal the girls fall flat for him!


AASTHA JOSHI: she is a girl from India, who came to the US to study. she is in her third year of college. she is caring and gorgeous!


DEEPA RANAWAT: shubh's younger sister, in her 2nd year of college, she slowly becomes friends with aastha, she is one of the coolest girls in her college!


Swayam Ranawat: shubh and deepa's yongest brother,he's really mischeavious.1st year of college


Amar: Aastha's cousin, 2nd year of college

Divya:
Deepa's best friend! 2nd year of college


so far these are the characters, as the story proceeds, ill add more characters!
ill need about 5-6 comments if you want me to update/ continue!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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can't wait to read the first update
two of my fav couples shubh-aastha and amar-divya
plz update soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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since im really bored im gonna update ven thiough i dont have 5 to 6 comments, her it is hope you like it!


❤️Dosti , aur phir....PYAAR!❤️

The plane had just landed at the new york airport.
A girl, about the age of 22, wearing this:
http://jpeterman.com/images/jpeterman/1836.jpg

takes out her phone and....
Girl: hello, amar tum kaha ho,mein kabse airport ke bahaar khari hoon, tum jaldi se gate 3 par aao.
Amar: tum gate 3 par ho, tumne to kaha ke tum gate 13 par ho
Girl: oh god, Amar, tumbhi na, i say something, and you hear something, jaldi se gate 3 par a jao plz!
Amar: teek hai mein athi hoon.

around this area a couple of guys were standing, ther and saying
Guy1: look over ther
guy2: i know what an item!
Guy3: let's go


the girl heard this and waz feeling very uncomfortable. the guys were coming closer to her andshe started walking really fast tring to get away
Guy2: hey where you going, you seem to be alone want a ride?
Guy1: come on we are not that bad come on

the third guy was going to go touch the girl's face, when the girl gave him a tight SLAP(😆)
now the other to guys forgot about politeness, and wanted to get to the girl, the girl was really scared, the guy#2 started to touch the girl's hair and face, when the girl gave him a tight slap too(😆)
Girl: Stupid, idiot, Get away from me!
Guy#1 couldn't take it anymore and started to touch the girl when...........someone punched him in the stomach...............who could it be?

precap: you have to read the next update im not telling whats happening next!


its a bit short but plz plz comment, i know, i know, its not tht good but plz comment


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Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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No no no dear.......its
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Shubh-Aastha and Amar-Divya.....what more could my heart desire???
❤️

Oh no , there is one more thing my heart could desire....no chance of SRK making a guest appearance in it , is there???

Naah........I think not.............😭

Neways , great job , well done , and keep going!!!!

Cheerio!!!😎




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Posted: 16 years ago
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well i might make shahid kapoor😍or ranbir kapoor😍 or hrithik roshan😍 as a guest appearance in one of the updates, im not that much of a HUGE fan a srk but ill try to!


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Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yep yep.....Hrithik/Shahid/Ranbir will work for me too..............just make sure Mallika Sherawat isnt in it 😉

Sorry if any Mallika fans are out here......!!!
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im really bored, and i hve no homework or anything so im updating again!

Recap: three guys are trying to misbehave with a girl when someone comes and punches one of them in the stomache.
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the girl heard this and waz feeling very uncomfortable. the guys were coming closer to her andshe started walking really fast tring to get away
Guy2: hey where you going, you seem to be alone want a ride?
Guy1: come on we are not that bad come on

the third guy was going to go touch the girl's face, when the girl gave him a tight SLAP(😆)
now the other to guys forgot about politeness, and wanted to get to the girl, the girl was really scared, the guy#2 started to touch the girl's hair and face, when the girl gave him a tight slap too(😆)
Girl: Stupid, idiot, Get away from me!
Guy#1 couldn't take it anymore and started to touch the girl when...........someone punched him in the stomach...............who could it be?

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this "SOMEONE" started to beat up and thrash the 3 guys. they ran away as fast as they could.

someone: are you okay
Girl:huh, uh yeah im okay, um....thanx.
Someone: no prob.

AMAR:
Aastha di, aastha di, your okay right, hey shubh, thanx man!
Shubh: you know her?
Amar: yeah she's my cousin, Aastha di, this is Shubh, my friend from college, and deepa's older bro!
Aastha: uh...hi..and thanx again
Shubh: hey, i already told you no prob, these ppl her r upto no good! so you better stay away from them.
Amar: okay come on lets go, deepa,divya, aur swayam humara intezaaar kara hai, lets go.
they got into shubh's car,(the red convertible)
they drove to their college.
Amar: Aastha mdi, this is Divya (divya wore this)http://img.alibaba.com/photo/11862802/Western_Clothing.jpg), this is Swayam, Shubh's younger bro( he wore a white shirt and dark blue jeans), and this is Deepa, Shubh's younger sister, and swayam's older sister.( she was wearing http://www.kerszbergevents.com/images/outfit/neu2/outfit_s.jpg)
Swayam, Deepa, Divya: Hi Aastha!
Aastha: hi guys!
Deepa, you're going to love it here in New york.
Aastha:yeah i hope i do
Shubh : Hey you guys get ready, we are gong out to dinner. be ready at 7 , k, come on Amar, and Swayam lets go, these girls take 5 hours to get ready!😆
Aastha, deepa, divya: Heyyyy!😆
its 6:45, and the girls are almost done getting ready
All three of them come out wearing: http://www.alight.com/dynamic/1011262801-p.jpg( its abit longer, and AAstha wears it in Blue, Deepa in Green, and Divya inRed)
the guys are wearing denim jeans, and a shirt (Shubh-black, Swayam-grey, Amar-white)

All six of them getinto the car, well they have to squish so, Shubh n aastha sit up front, while the other four have to squish in the basck.
Amar: shubh com eon im gonna be a pancake if i sit here, can i go sit in the trunk, PLZ?
Swayam: Bhaiya i think we should go in our own cars, like you and Aastha can bein your red car, amar and divya can go in Amar's (blue) car, and ill take deepa di in my (black) car,
Shubh: okay good idea, no one has a problem right.
all of them: No its okay.
Deepa: ab chale, im really hungry.
................and they were off to the Beautiful city of Manhatten(http://pix.alaporte.net/pub/d/17546-1/Manhattan+by+Night+from+DUMBO+1.JPG)

Precap: im still thinking!😊

hope you guys liked it , and plz plz comment!!!!!!!!!!!!

and yeah Shubh_Aastha i dont like Mallika Sherawat either🤢

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Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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more than 50 viewers, only 2 replies?😕come on i wont update if you guys dont comment/ or reply(unless im bored and have nothing to do )
leave COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz !!!!!!!!!1



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Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Boy o boy o boy , already alone in the car ...*heh heh*

I knew it was Shubh who punched them....

dear me , I want a guy exaaaaaaactly like him tooooooooo.....God must have spent extra time while making him.....
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i dont think anyone likes my ff😭, but im still updating😊

recap: everyone is going to thre restaurant in their own cars, shubh n aastha are alone in a car😉
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All six of them getinto the car, well they have to squish so, Shubh n aastha sit up front, while the other four have to squish in the basck.
Amar: shubh com eon im gonna be a pancake if i sit here, can i go sit in the trunk, PLZ?
Swayam: Bhaiya i think we should go in our own cars, like you and Aastha can bein your red car, amar and divya can go in Amar's (blue) car, and ill take deepa di in my (black) car,
Shubh: okay good idea, no one has a problem right.
all of them: No its okay.
Deepa: ab chale, im really hungry.
................and they were off to the Beautiful city of Manhatten(http://pix.alaporte.net/pub/d/17546-1/Manhattan+by+Night+from+DUMBO+1.JPG)
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now on with the update:

well, Shubh n aastha are in the car, and aastha really likes the views of new york!
Aastha: hey shubh , what bridge is this?
Shubh(thinking): this girl is so different she isnt like them, and she is pretty too... wait what am i saying...huh.....
Aastha: shubh, shubh? hello? (she started to snap her fingers)
Shubh: huh.. oh...im sorry what were you saying
Aastha: its okay, i was saying which bridge is this?
Shubh: this is the Brooklyn Bridge, u know in the movie KAl ho Naa ho Srk was waliking on this bridge(http://www.airninja.com/pictures/new-york-city/brooklyn-bridge.jpg) ( http://www.richard-seaman.com/Wallpaper/USA/Cities/BrooklynBridgeAtNight.jpg)
Aasttha: no wonder this bridge looks familiar.
Shubh: and now we are in times square ( http://www.picturecorrect.com/wallpaper/photos/cityscapes/times-square-1024x768.jpg)
Aastha: wow, wasnt like a song in jaan-e-maan or something shooted here, probably in the daytime right?
Shubh: yeah, thewhole movie was shooted here, and so was Kal ho naa ho, and K.a.n.k, and some other movies, so these places might be familiar.
Aastha: oh .

the whole ride went like that, shubh showing aastha around, and aastha asking and praisng

Finally they were at the restaurant

Shubh: we are here( http://kevinmcveigh.files.wordpress.com/2008/01/princess-plaza-and-fountains-at-dusk.jpg)
they got out and amar-divya, and swayam and deepa were already there (waiting for them).
Deepa: bhaiu, what took you so long?
Amar: im dieng her, im so hungry.
Aastha,: shubh was showing me around, so it took a bit longer
Divya: oh ok lets go i am seriusly hungry.
Swayam, Deepa, Amar, Divya: come on!

as they were walking to the enterance, aastha tipped over a rock and lost gher balnce (side note: she is wearing heels as well)
when she was about to fall, our hero, shubh goes and saves her.
shubh was looking at her, as aastha had her eyes closed
slowly she opened her eyes asnd looked into shubh's. they had an eyelock for about 3 whole minutes............when they heard...
Someone: uhummm....

Precap: im still thinking!

guys pl plz plz plz pzl plz plz to the 100th power, leave comments, if you dont then i wont know if you like it or not
hoped you liked it, its abit short , but neways, i hope you liked it

PLZ read and comment!!!!!!!!!!!


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Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago

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