FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32!

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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write some more..and i was very good.

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Update

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Deepa: aatsha yaha kya kare hai, woh to'.

Shubh: plz, woh stupid moron rana hain na,?

Swayam: ya

Shubh: woh aastha ko dohka dekar kisi aur'..

Deepa: stupid rana, moron, idiot, '.

SHubh: okay deepa, you badmouthing him wont help anything

Swayam: so , what are we supposed to do??

Shubh: I don't know, can you guys leave me alon for some while??

Swayam: sure

Swayam and deepa leave.

Deepa stops and turns around''.

Bhaiu???

Shubh doesn't say anything'..

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after a while shubh goes to his room.

Aastha's room, aastha stares out the window

Shubh stares out the window.

http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/2111/get_lyrics_of_Ya-Rabba.html

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil batatootata kyon nahi dard ka silsilais pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaanye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaanya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agardilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asarho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agardilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asarpyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil batatootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil kana hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil kadhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjisheinsaansein saansein tooti bandisheinkahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad haikisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad haiya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agardilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asarho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agardilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar koi na sune sisakati aanhon kokoi na dhare tadapati baahon koaadhi aadhi puri khwaisheintooti footi sab farmaaisheinkahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar haikahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hainya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agardilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asarho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agardilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asarho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil batatootata kyon nahi dard ka silsilaho o o o ho o o ona poocho dard bandon sehansi kaisi khushi kaisimusibat sar pe rehati hainkabhi kaisi kabhi kaisiho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o horabba ho o o, ho o ho rabba

aastha goes back to the bed, and tkes out the gift and note she found 10 months ago.

All my life I've wished for love this true.

I cherish every moment I have with you.

When you're near I can't help but smile

Because you are my reason for survival.

If I ever lost you I'd cry a river,

Just the thought of it makes me quiver.

When we are alone together,

I wish I could stop the time and live in that moment forever.

A thousand words could not express the feelings I have inside for you.

Please say you feel it too.

A: kaun ho tum???? whoever this girl is really lucky to be loved by someone so dearly.

Shubh's room:
Kyun??? Why.???? Jab mene aastha ko propse karne chala , it didn't happen, aur aastha meri zindagi se chalagya. jab mein aastha ko bhulni ki koshish kare hoon, tab aastha phirse agaya . kyun?? Bhagwan kya chata hai.

Aastha'S room

Mera kismet hai he aise.

Next morning:

Shubh wakes up and goes downstairs'

Person: hey swayam??? Wassup??

Swyam: long time no see???

Shubh: amar, divya, mahen, tum log yahan?????

Amar: oh hey shubh, we heard aastha di came here, so we cam from dubai, to see aastha di.

Aastha: divya , amar, mahen???

Divya: aastha di ( btw amar and divya got married, hence the 'aastha di')

So they talk and balh blah blah'''

Shubh goes outside to the lawn

Siits ther for a whi;le, and randomly starts wlking here and there'''..

Aastha:: shubh?? Tum aise yahan se wahan kyun jaa re ho???

Shubh: huhu, oh woh, um nothing'..

Aastha: look, sit here, I know you and the others care for me a lot, but plz I cant take this sympathy and stuff, plz shubh let me go'.

Shubh: aastha, tum agar phirse jaane ki baat ki toh phir mein''.

Aastha: teekh hai. Btw, why didn't you come to the wedding????

SHubh: ummmmmmmmmmmm''..woh'''' kaam tha isilye

Aastha doesn't seem convinced

- will aastha be able to know shubh's secret???

- - will shubh be able to hide it

- will aastha and rana, you \know get divorced???

- What will happen next''''''''.

Read to find out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dekhiye babul ka aangan chootey na, monday to thursday, 9:30 pe, sirf sony entertainment television par...............

i meant
read babul ka aangan chootey na fan fic , dosti aur phir pyaar, sunday to saturday, sirf india forums par...........................lol😆

Hope you liked it'

Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago

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Sej

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

lol loved both the parts and how u advertised it lol=)

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sejal719
lol loved both the parts and how u advertised it lol=)

thx, while i was writing it i saw the promo of bkacn ..... again( the one w/ shilpa;s rape and stuff)

and the " guy who does the speaking" says all that so i just wrote it, thnx for liking

read babul ka aangan chootey na fan fic , dosti aur phir pyaar, sunday to saturday, sirf india forums par

lol😆

thnx

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aashni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

sry cud nt comment on so mny updates ... was busy and alll read all udpates its ossum w8in noww wat wud happeen wth AS

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

thx for all the comments........ ill post the uipdate soon.........

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Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Recap:

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Aastha:: shubh?? Tum aise yahan se wahan kyun jaa re ho???

Shubh: huhu, oh woh, um nothing…...

Aastha: look, sit here, I know you and the others care for me a lot, but plz I cant take this sympathy and stuff, plz shubh let me go….

Shubh: aastha, tum agar phirse jaane ki baat ki toh phir mein…..

Aastha: teekh hai. Btw, why didnt you come to the wedding????

Shubh: ummmmmmmmmmmm..woh……. kaam tha isilye

Aastha doesnt seem convinced

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Update Time :

Aastha: Shubh, ur lying, why didn't u come??

Shubh: aastha, I was busy, with um… my flight… and stuff

Aastha: oh, ok.

Aastha thinking: why is shubh acting so, weird???

Shubh was about to leave….

Shubh: Aastha?

Aastha: hmmmm....
shubh: agar tum ko koi bhi akar tumhare samne bola ki woh tumse pyar karta hai, to tum kya karogi?

Aastha: at least there is someone who loves me, kyun? Yeh sawal kaha se aaya??

Shubh: nahi, umm just like that, chalo…..

Aastha( thinks): Shubh yeh saval kyun poocha??

Inside:

-Shubh, Aastha and everyone else is having their breakfast.

-Aastha didn't eat, and neither did shubh. Deepa saw this.

Deepa: bhaiu?? Aastha??/, why aren't you eating???

-Shubh left the table, he didn't want to say anything, he just, just wanted to be alone.

Aastha: yeh shubh ko kya hua???

Deepa: mein dekhti hoon…..

-Shubh was in his room, well in the balcony., that's iin the room

-Deepa came in.

Bhaiu?????

-Shubh didn't say anything

-Deepa walks over to shubh, and pputs her hand on his shoulder.

Deepa: Bhaiu?? I know what ur thinking.

Shubh: deepa, mein kya kaoon, mein aastha ko propse karne chala, toh tab pata chala ki woh shadi karihe, mein aastha ko bhulne ki bohut koshish ki hein, lekin kya hua???? Aastha phirse meri zindagi mein aagaya??

Deepa: mein nahi janti ki bhagwan kyya chata hai, lekin bhaiu aab rana aur astha ki bareme kya kaare????

Shubh: mujhe nahi patha

Deepa: divorce???

Shubh: lekin deepa, hum yeh saab kaise kaarenge????

Deepa: sochna parega. Lekin ek baatth toh teek hai, aastha or rana ke beech kuch nahi hai……..

-Deepa whispers something to shubh.

Shubh: mujhe nahi pata ki meri behen itne smart hai??

Deepa: yeah yeah. But remember bhaiu, remeber it.

Precap: none

- Shubh aur Deepa ka kya plan hai ?????

- Shubh aur Deepa faisla kia hai ki Aastha aur Rana ki divorce kaarega

- Kya woh dono kar paayga Aastha aur Rana ka divorce????