an Angel in disguise thread 4, Ariya ff| chapter 61 updated on pg 11 - Page 7

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Sameer got scared🤣😆


Virman always fight but it is cute😊


Samsha hugged each other☺️☺️


Arjun became friend of Ayesha , how sweet


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CHAPTER 60

A: what do you mean? She was at the camp with Shree and Sakshi

V: we had found a clue so we called her to check it but she didn’t come, so I went to the camp, Shree and Sakshi thought that she was with us but she didn’t arrive (Tensed)

S: we are coming to the camp site

R: what if she got lost in the fog? (Tensed)

Ay: we can only find out what happened when we reach the camp

S: let`s go

They reached the camp and they saw Shree was panicking and Virat was calming him down, Chotu was holding Shree because he wanted to go look for Liza and Sid was checking for her footprints

Sh: let me go, my fiancé needs me

V: superstar is here somewhere, let SAmeer and Arjun come, we will go together

Sh: she is your friend, aren’t you worried? We don’t even know if there are wild animals here and there is a ghost here

V: she is my friend and I am worried but going in the jungle while it`s foggy, it`s stupidity and someone else might get lost too

Ch: Shree, please stop getting agitated

S: what happened here? How did Liza get lost?

V: Sameer, Arjun, thank god, you are here. We found a payal a few meters ahead (he showed the payal, it was in a handkerchief), so we called her but at the time, there was no fog but suddenly there was a voice and the fog appeared and for a while it was like we got paralyzed, we couldn’t even move for a minute or so, then it passed very quickly and then Shree called and said if superstar was with us but she didn’t arrive here Sid: she had left before the fog and we weren’t that far away, maybe 5 minutes away, she is lost

Man: but how can that be? Something is not rightR: we have to go and search for her

Sh: let me go Chotu, I have look for her

Ch: don’t get crazy, you doing like this isn’t going to help us

A: Shree, don’t worry, we will find Liza and she will be fine. Wait, where is Sakshi?

They all looked around, but didn’t see her, they even looked in the tent and car but she wasn’t there

R: what is going on? First Liza and now A … SAkshi, she isn’t even feeling well

Sh: she was right here, but after Virat, Sid and Chotu came here, I haven’t even seen her since

Riya started pacing around in tension and Sid was getting angry on himself how he didn’t notice that Sakshi was also missing

R: she probably thought that she can find Liza. Couldn’t she even wait for us? She doesn’t even have a mobile or the walkie talkie with her

A: calm down everyone, we don’t have time to panic. We have to find them ASAP

S: I agree, panicking isn’t a option

A: Sameer, we have to go and look in the house while the rest look around here

Sameer nodded

Manvi suddenly shouted: sir

All startled looked at Manvi

Ma: Sameer sir, in my free time I had made a watch with some new features and I had given to Liza di to test it out but because of our sudden transfer and cases we forgot about it

A: and?

Man: it is a tracker, you can push the right side when you are in trouble and if you can`t push it, I can still track the person`s location

V: so, what are you waiting for?

Sh: hurry up

Man: let me first look for my tab

R: what is that in your hand?

Man: not this one, this is new, I need my older tab (After rummaging for a while she found her tab) found it, let`s go

Ay: when did you give it to her?

Man: when Riya di was missing for a while at the missing painting case, so I thought of a back up plan to track our members in case of emergencies

A: good job, manvi

Man: thank you sir

Manvi typed on her tab for a while and got a signal

Man: sir, it`s not that far from hereS: let`s go everyone

They all went together; they reached Liza in 15 minutes, she was leaning on a tree and her med kit was next to her

They all rushed to her

Sh: Liza, are you ok?

L: ofcourse I am ok but how did you find me?

Manv: di, the watch

L: oh

R: why are you here?

L: I was going to the place where Rockstar called me when suddenly I was surrounded by fog and I saw a girl wearing a white saree looking at me and indicating something with her hand as if she wanted me to follow her

Ch: kya? You saw a ghost? (Scared)

S: Chotu, stop getting scared and Liza, then what happened?

L: I fell unconscious

V: what? I thought you didn’t believe in ghost

L: I don’t believe in it but when you see something like that won`t you feel scared?

Ay: how come whenever the ghost appears, it gets foggy?

R: Liza, have you seen Sakshi?

L: yes, it was SAkshi who helped me get here; otherwise I was on the ground until she woke me up, she sprayed water on me so I could wake up

Sid: where is she now?

L: she went after the ghost

Everyone expect for Liza: WHAT?

L: she saw the ghost running away and she went after her but there is one thing

A: what?

L: she said that she didn’t see fog when she saw the ghost

V: how come? We all saw fogs surrounding this place

L: I don’t know but I have a hunch but I am not sure, I need to get back to camp but I think I sprained my hand and my feet a little that`s why I still haven`t move yet. It`s a good thing I remembered wearing Choti`s tracker watch

S: I think we should split up from here, Shree, Virat bring Liza and Manvi back to the camp, Ayesha and Arjun, Siddarth, Chotu and Riya and me, we are going behind Saksh

i A: okay

They all left to go there separate ways

Scene shifts to Shriza and Virman At camp

They reached the camp and helped Liza sit down on a chair; Shree got a sprain spray can, he sprayed it on her hand and feet and was now putting medicine on her wounds, because she got scratches on her hand.Manvi was getting a blanket from the tent for Liza when she bumped into Virat; she just ignored him and was walking away when Virat suddenly said:You still use the tab which I gave you for your birthday?

Man: so? Why should I throw something away just because of someone else`s fault?

V: you know that it wasn’t my fault

Man: so are you saying that it was mine?

V: that`s not what I mean

Man: let`s not discuss it now, I have other things to do

She left Virat who was looking hurt at her words

Scene shifts to the others

Ch: sir, look footprints R: it`s a good thing that Sakhsi wears small heels sandals They followed the footprints until it ended at the haunted house

A: I should have known that this is the place the so called ghost vanishes from here; there must a bigger conspiracy behind this

S: we need to find a way in

R: sir, look the door is open

Ay: what? When I, Arjun sir and Choti came here, the door was locked and was pinned by woods as if it hadn’t been open in many years, Sakshi is small in height to open the door and and isn’t too strong

Sid: we can ask the questions later. First we need to find Sakshi

A: well, for the first time I agree with you, Siddarth. Let`s go in

They entered the house, it was very dark and dusty but somehow lights where coming from the cracks of the windows, you could see a little. The house was very big and you could see three rooms and it had a second floor and stairs which where in the middle of the room, the furnitures were all decked with white tablecloths, it had dust on it and spiderwebs

A: looking at the furniture, it hasn’t been used in while. Sameer and Ayesha, you both go upstairs and Sid, you go in the left room and Chotu, you go to the right room, Riya, you come with me Sameer nodded and went with Ayesha upstairs and Chotu and Sid went to the different rooms while Ariya went to the biggest room

Scene shifts to Ariya

They entered the room; it was dark so they used their flashlights

R: it`s so dusty here (She coughed a little)

A: miss hygienic freak, we can not do anything about it. It will be like that if a room has been not used for a while

R: whatever sir

She bumped into something

R: aww, my foot

A: what is wrong, Riya? Are you ok?

He rushed towards her

R: I am fine but what was the object I bumped into?

Riya looked at the object with her flashlight; it was a cage full of snakes that were sleeping R: ahhhh, snakes (Screamed)

Arjun looked at the cage and was shocked

A: what in the world?Riya was still screaming so Arjun shut her up with his hand

A: Riya, stop screaming. You will wake the snakes up and we are in the middle of investigation and don’t forget we are looking for Sakshi

Riya nodded, Arjun let go of his hand

R: but, sir, what are the snakes doing here?

A: I don’t know but take a picture, so we can later find out why they are here?

R: ok

She took the picture, Arjun was looking around when his feet got entangled in the sheet which was under the cage, and he lost his balance and he fell on Riya who was taking the picture

He was on top of her, they had a mini eye lock, he was going to kiss her but Riya started sneezing, he stood up and helped her up

A: bless you

R: thank you, I have dust allergy but sir, it is weird that the living area was full of dust and spiderwebs but here it`s not that dusty and there are no spiderwebs here

A: kuch to choot raha hain, we have to find Sakshi ASAP, who knows where she is

R: I hope that she is okay

Scene shifts to Chotu

Ch: Sakshi, where are you? Come back so we can leave this place

He was searching when he found a photograph of a family, it was a man and a woman holding a child, from the clothes it looked like a girl

Ch: maybe they are the owners, oh wait, there is something written on it, (he read it loudly) our first picture with our daughter Sharon. Their daughter name is Sharon; let me keep it with me, this must have been her room.He put the picture in his wallet and kept on searching

Scene shifts to Samesha, they were on the second floor

They were trying to open the doors but they were locked

S: this is really frustrating, damn it. Why did Sakshi have to come here and that too alone?

Ay: she is a reporter, sir; she is really a curious person

S: curious? You mean nosey

Ay: haw sir, she is not nosey, she likes investigating stuff

S: then she should have been a cop instead of a journalist, and then I would have fewer worries

Ayesha rolled her eyes at Sameer`s remark, she was going to say something in retaliation when suddenly a rat ran up her feet

Ayesha screamed and hugged SAmeer in fear, Sameer patted her back after coming from the sudden hug attack from Ayesha

S: Ayesha, it`s just a rat

Ay: I hate rats (eyes closed)S: it ran away, its okay now Ayesha opened her eyes and looked at Sameer

Ay: really?

S: yes

They kept looking at each other until Siddarth called on the walkie talkie; they came out of the trance

Sameer answered it

S: yes Sid: Sameer, I found Sakshi, she is here with me

S: thank god. Where are you guys?Sid: outside the house, hurry up

S: ok, we are coming

Ay: thanks god, we found her safe and sound

S: we will be there shortly, did you tell Rawte?

Sid: yes, he, Riya and Chotu are coming

S: ok (they cut the talk) let`s go Ayesha

Ay: yes sir

Sameer started walking first and Ayesha was behind him, Sameer feet banged into smaller cages which were empty, they were behind a sofa S: aah, who put this here?

Ay: I don’t know sir, I don’t live here

S: I didn’t ask the question to you

Ay: is someone else here?

S: Ayesha, stop asking stupid questions

Ay: haw, I am asking stupid questions? You are one asking about these things to no one in particular. Because I am here that`s why I am answering

S: Ayesha, stop talking and check the cages

Ayesha huffed and examined the cages

Ay: it is weird, from the smell it seems that there were animals in it, but what kind, I don’t know. And some white stuff is in it

S: take a sample and give to Liza later

Ay: yes sir

She took the sample and Samesha left the house, not knowing that someone was watching them Outside Sid was holding Sakshi in his arms, she was unconscious. Riya ran towards them with Arjun and the others following after her

R: Sakshi, wake up

Sid: she is unconscious; we have to take her home

Ay: let`s hurry

they all left from there, in tension mode, they reached the camping site, and Shriza and Virman were shocked when they saw that Sakshi was unconscious

Sh: What is going on?

Sid: Liza, check her please

Liza nodded and Sid put her in the tent and went outside while Liza and Ayesha were in the tent. Riya was getting scared so she couldn’t go inside and was holding Arjun`s hand and Sid was pacing around while Virman and Choree and SAmeer were waiting with almost no patience, they were in a panic mode so they didn’t notice Ariya`s handholding

After a while Liza came outside and everyone started bomberding her with questions

R: Is A… Sakshi okay?

A: how is she?

S: anything happened?

Ch: tell us already

V: is she hurt?Sh: shh, guys and sirs let her speak

Sid was the only one who couldn’t speak and was shivering not that it was cold but he was worried for Sakshi

L: she is asleep

R: what? Asleep? Isn’t she unconscious?

L: before I went missing she told me that her headache isn’t over so I gave her another tablet and I just read the effect of the medicine, one of them is sleeping so it works after while

Sid finally left the breath that he was holding, the others were relieved

Ch: sir, it`s already morning The sun had come up in all this commotion S: let`s leave, we need to get some more information of the place

A: there is something wrong about this place, kuch to choot raha hain

They all agreed and hurriedly cleaned the camping site and the put away the tents. Riya asked Sid to put Sakshi in the car`s frontseat with seatbelt so he did it. This time Sid volunteerd to drive the car and the others agreed, they reached the Raizada mansion without stopping this time

Sid picked Sakshi up, he brought her in her room and put her blankets on her and left the room. Riya stayed a little bit longer wiping her hands and feet with wet wipes and left after that

SAjan and Arshi were already awake and had already talked to Samjun about SAkshi

Gunj+ Khushi: I hope that she is ok

Sam|M: she will be fine, I know it, and she is just not used to all these things in her new life. You don’t take tension, when she wakes up, you can meet her

Gunj: ok

ARnav nodded

Scene shifts to the team

Arnav told them that they can use the gym as their meeting room for the time being and Arshi and Gunjan went to work, Samrat was the only one who didn’t go because he was also part of the investigations. SAmeer told everyone to get fresh and meet him in one hour in the gym

One hour later

Everyone expect Sakshi were there

S: so, team, what did we find out?

L: sir, the payal had gun powder on it and had some traces of drugs but it wasn’t that much, Riya and Ayesha gave me the samples they had gathered at the house, they will be complete in a new minutes

A: and we found footprints leading inside the house but not one came outside

Man: and I think the place is bugged with a signal blocker that disables communication devices

Ch: I got a photo of the owners of the house in one the rooms (He gave the picture to Sameer)

S: hmmm, what do we know about them?

R: The owners’ names are Amar Rai Prakash and Vidya Prakash but they both died in an aircrash almost 3 years ago

Samrat came with some sandwiches and juice

Sam: here is food, you guys are probably hungry

Almost everyone took the food and starting eating

A: see, SAmeer, Samrat cares more about the team more then you

S: look, Rawte, this investigation is also important

But then his stomach grumbled making Sameer embarrassed and he took a sandwich to eat, looking at the white board that Samrat arranged for them. Choreeiya, Riya and Ayesha held their laugh but ARjun and SAmrat laughed at Sameer`s moment, Riya noticed that Sid wasn’t eating but looking at the door, she asked Sid

L: Sid, why aren’t you eating?

Sid: woh Sakshi…

Ay: Siddie, Sakshi is fine. You don’t worry

R: yes, Liza said that the tablet works for a few hours; she will be awake before you know it

Sid: ok

Samrat noticed the photo and said:Oh, I know them

A: you know them?Sam: yes, they used to own the land where the camping site is, and even own many properties until their death 3 years ago

V: and who owns them now?

Sam: their daughter Sharon Rai Prakash (he pointed to the young girl on the photo) but she and her boyfriend died in a car accident 9 months ago R: sir, which is when the ghost started appearing

Sam: after the passing, the land came in name of her uncle Vickrant but he lives in America for a while now, at least that is what I read in the newspaper

S: but why are there snakes and cages in the house? And why is the place being haunted by Sharon?

Sakshi came inside and said:She is alive They all turned around and saw SAkshi who was awake and was still in her yesterday clothes and had Sid`s jacket on

Riya and Sid went to her

R: are you ok, Sakshi?

Sid: are you hungry?

Sa: I am fine and yes I am hungry and also Sharon is alive

A: how do you know that?

Sa: I talked to her

Sh: when? Sa: when I followed her, she hurt her feet on a stone and she started bleeding a little, ghost don’t bleed

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Sakshi followed Sharon`s ghost

Sa: who are you? Tell me

Sha: stop following me

Sa: I can help you

Sha: everyone says that but they don’t, most of them disappear because of it, many think it`s an hallucination

Sa: I promise you

Sha: then come here in the afternoon time. They will not be here

Sa: kaun?

Sha: I can’t say anymore, I have to go

FB END

sa: and then she disappeared

Manv: where did she go?

Sa: I don’t know, smoke appeared and poof she was gone but weirdly when you all say that it was foggy, it wasn’t foggy, it was only smoke

R: how is that possible?

A: only one way, there was something mixed in the food that caused it. Think about it, only Sakshi didn’t eat the food and all of us ate the food from the dhaba

L: sir, when I went back to the camping site, I started checking the food and already put it for some tests, let me go check, it must be almost done She ran to check the tests

V: you know the small boy at the dhaba told us about trucks passing by their dhaba

Ay: that means only one thing, the owner is also in it

R: at the haunted place, most of the rooms were dusty and had spiderwebs but at some places it was clean and had no spiderwebs

Man: arjun sir, I got names of the snakes, it is very rare and it`s not usually found in forests

Liza came back and said:Sir, I have got the reports of the food and samples. She gave it to Sameer and Arjun, they both read the reports and both looked at each other and nodded

S: call ACP Khurana; we are going to solve the case today


precap: solving the case and shriza engagement

sorry for the delay,

thanks for all the likes and comments for the prev chapter

hope you like this one as well


stay safe, be healthy everyone

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Ho kya raha hai pehle liza fir sakshi liza mili to sakshi gayab aur jaha mili woh jagah kitna weird tha sakshi ne disclose kiya sharon zinda hai nice update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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