an Angel in disguise thread 4, Ariya ff| chapter 61 updated on pg 11 - Page 8

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CHAPTER 61

disclaimer: some scenes might be disturbing


They called Maan and they made a plan, they will meet up before noon at the camping place just before the haunted place

ETF arrived a few minutes before Maan and his team

S: before ACP Maan gets here, let`s secure the perimeter first

While securing the area, Maan arrived with his team, they greeted each other and went to the haunted place, Maan`s team surrounded the place in case the criminals try to escape and our ETF members minus Sakshi, Manvi and Shriza were going inside the house with Maan after making sure that the plan is perfect while Sakshi, MAnvi and Shriza would be waiting at the camper`s site in the van, where they will be assisting them from there, Maan had already called ambulances for emergency, they were on standby. Shree and Manvi had given a thermal imaging camera to Samjun so even it was dark in the house, they could still see

S: let`s discuss the plan again before we head inside

Maan: we wait till the criminals come outside with the evidence; my team will follow them to catch them in the act

A: I think it`s better if one of us also goes with your team, we don’t want any mistakes

Maan: you are right, but who will go?

V: I will go and Miss A can come with me, she and I, we both were trained for this kind of things

Ay: I agree, sir. MR V and I, we had a case like this one as an example in our academy

Sameer didn’t wanted Ayesha to go with Virat, he was going to say no when Arjun intervened

A: you two can go; we can handle things here, right Sameer?

S (Swallowed his anger): Yes, but keep us informed

A: Maan, tell your other team to listen to them, they are more expierenced in this field

Sid: you already told us that many of them are rookies and that`s why you brought them because you didn’t want anyone from the higher up to know about this mission until we are done incase someone would want this mission to fail

Maan nodded and told his team

Visha nodded and went to MAan`s team

R: Sir, they are coming out They saw four guys wearing masks coming out with crates and putting them on the ground and went back inside to get more; it took almost an hour before they were done with it

The first guy: you checked the place?

The second guy: why bother? People are scared of our bhootni (Laughed hard)

The third guy: so true, even you almost wet your pants because you were scared

The second guy: not true (He hit the third guy)

The third guy hit him back

The fourth guy intervened and said: stop wasting energy and get the pushcart, the trucks are waiting for us

The three guys nodded and got the pushcarts that where in the high bushes; they loaded the crates and pushed it to the other end of the jungle which wasn’t used since a while where trucks were waiting for them. Our team along with Maan and his team had followed them. A few people helped them in putting the crates inside the truck, they had guns with them

S: so that is why they are no tire tracks here in the jungle, they use carts and they wipe the cart tracks using a sweeper

They noticed the four guys going back in the jungle and followed them back; the four guys went inside the house

Maan: I have told my team to follow the trucks, they are now behind them

S: good, then it`s our work from here, we are going inside

Ch: but sir, we don’t know if it`s safe or not

A: that`s why Shree and Manvi gave us these cameras to help us, Chotu

Ch: oh, is Riya also coming with us?

A: why are you asking about that?

Ch: because Arjun sir, you said that Riya is still a rookie in shootings

A: she needs to get used to it and waise bhi auratki kabilyet par shak nahi karna chaahiye (and you should never underestimate the woman power)

He winked at Riya making Chotu, Sameer and Sid shock with his different behavior with Riya. They remember how Arjun used to scold Riya for everything but now he had simmered down and is now being playful around everyone at times. Riya ignored Arjun`s action by checking the camera, she is getting used to it now. Maan was amused with their reactions but he knew the mission is now the first thing what they should concentrate in

M: guys, we should go now, according to Sakshi there could be innocent people inside

Sid: that`s a risk we have to take for now, but we have to be careful

S: Rawte, you, Sid and Chotu go inside first, ACP Maan, me and Riya will follow you and the other members will follow

They all nodded and got inside, first Arjun and his team and Sameer and his team, they checked the whole house

M: no one is here, we saw them getting inside and no one came out, we are watching the whole house, there must be a secret passageway

R: Maan sir, we can use this camera to scan the walls

A: let’s have it then

Riya used the camera and got a reading on the wall next to a painting

R: sir, it`s the painting

Chotu moved the painting and saw a door which you could just push open

Sid: we need to be careful, one noise and it will be game over

They went inside, it was dark but there was some light that were flickering on and off, Arjun knew that Riya hated the dark so he held her hand secretly, Riya was behind him so no one noticed it. They reached at the end of passageway, they were standing behind a big cupboard so no one noticed them but what they saw infront of them made them angry

A person in his mid 50s was hitting a boy, while a girl was screaming to let him go, she was being held in chains, there were other people laughing at the scene beside the four guys

The girl: please leave my Swayam, chachaji. I have been doing everything what you want. Please leave him

The person: so? You are such a weakling, everytime I hit him, you are getting so emotional. Sharon, you should listen to your elders, because of your foolishness we almost got caught. This will teach you to obey my orders

He went to her and pulled her hair, she screamed in pain

The boy: don’t hurt her. Please, let her go

The person: arre wah, itna pyar? If I hurt her, you feel the pain and if I hurt him, she feels it. Poor my niece, so sad for you both

At the time the team attacked, the bad people couldn’t even react on time so the team won without many injuries, They handcuffed them and took them outside, outside the medics were waiting, Maan had informed them to come at the house, they had freed Sharon from her chains but she and Shwayam were unconscious, they needed urgent treatment so the medics took them to the hospital

Scene shifts to Visha

They were following the trucks in the suv when suddenly the trucks stopped

V: I think they noticed

Ay: I agree

The drivers got off and pointed their guns on the suv, they started shooting but no bullet came out. Visha and the other officers used this as an opportunity, got out and began firing to them, the guns of the bad guys started working after a while, a few of the members got hurt and all the bad guys were arrested

V: good job, Miss A

Ay: same to you, Mister V. Lets inform Sameer sir

V: ok

They called and informed them, Maan told them to meet them at police station and handover the criminals to the police, Visha reunited with the members after 30 minutes

M: thanks for all your help, for months we have been trying to get solve the mystery but thanks to your team, we finally found the proof

S: it`s our work, we were glad that we could help

A: any idea who the criminals are?

M: it`s Sharon Rai Prakash`s uncle Vikrant

R: her own uncle?

M: sometimes people we trust and love can break the heart

Ay: but why?

M: we will find out from Sharon, Vikrant isn’t opening his mouth and so are his minions, Sharon and her fiancé are awake now, I just got a text from the police guard I positioned at the hospital

Sid: so let`s go

They went to the hospital and went to the ward where Sharon and Shwayam were resting

Both were awake, were laying on their beds and were talking to each other

M: Miss Prakash and Mister Shekhawat? I am ACP Maan Khurana and they are the people who helped us with the mission (he introduced the ETF team)

Shar: thanks for saving us, we had given up hope (She held Sakshi`s hand, she was crying, Sakshi sat down on the stool next to Sharon`s bed)

Shw: we thought nobody would find us ever

M: I know it has been difficult for you all these months but can you testify now? We don’t want to force you both but we don’t have any other options, Vikrant and his underlings aren’t saying anything but we have enough evidence and with your testimony, we can lock them up for a long time

Shar: it’s alright, I understandShwayam nodded

M: so shall we start?

S: When did this all start?

Shar: after mom and dad`s accident, I went back to Mumbai for further study, I had asked uncle vickrant to take care of the house and the camping ground, he told me he would do it

Ch: but doesn’t he live in US?

Shar: he told me that he would come every once a month. But when I came back with Shwayam to tell uncle about my engagement, we saw that uncle and his helpers were loading snakes, scorpions and other animals in cages in trucks. Uncle saw us, we got back in the car, and we drove away but uncle followed us and hit the car from the back, we almost fell in the ravine but he got us out before the car fell in the ravine

Ay: he saved you?

Shar: only because if we survived then he would get in trouble

V: but he lives in America, how come he is still here?

R: fake passport, we found it while investigating in the house, he has been using it for a while

Shway: all the animals in the cages were rare species meaning that the camping should be stopped and the forest should turned into national park for the animals. These kinds don’t usually aren’t usually found in the forests

Shar: that was one of the reasons why I came back here, was to make sure that there were rare animals in the forest, Shwayam is a professor who studies about this, he told me about it when I saw some pictures of the animals and I told him that I saw a few animals in our forest. I was going to give the forest and the camping ground to the government if it was true

A: and what happened after the accident?

Shar: he locked us up and after a few weeks, he let me out so I could scare the campers and tourists as a ghost. When I refused, he threatened to kill Shwayam so I had to comply. I saw him using the animals to traffic drugs as well, he sold the animals to rich people and sold the drugs at their parties or clubs and maybe other countries. I heard him giving instruction to his helpers where they had to deliver

Maan: do you remember anything or anyone?

Shw: I remember they were talking about a dhaba owner who would tell lies and drug the tourists or any other people who were interested in buying the camping ground or the house

Maan: he has been already arrested and he already confessed that Vickrant paid him money to drug people to hallucinate and tell lies

L: the fog we saw was just in our minds and that made the place creepy and felt like it was haunted

Ay: only Sakshi saw nothing because she ate only biscuits and drank water that were given by Samrat jijju A: the only time Sakhsi saw the fog was because Miss Prakash had to disappear, we saw the fog generating machine in the basement

Shar: I just remembered a name actually just initials, uncle used to talk about someone named SK, he would call him boss

Maan, Sidaskhi and Virman looked at each other and nodded understandingly After getting more information from Sharon and Shwayam, the ETF team and Maan left from there. Maan left after saying goodbye to the team and left to continue the case and the ETF team went back to Raizada mansion

When they arrived, they saw ARshi and Sajan were waiting for them

Ar: we just saw the news, unbelievable

Gunj: it must have been hectic

Kh: you guys must be tired

Sam/M: freshen up, we will be waiting for you at the dinner table, you must be famished

Samjun nodded and told the team to come back after freshening up. After freshening up, they went to eat and after that they went to rest in their own room

Two hours later in Sakshi`s room,

Sakshi was awake and was lying on the bed when Sid knocked on the door

Sid: sakhsi, are you awake? May I come in?

Sa: come in (she got up and went to sit on the sofa)

Sid entered the room, he was holding a package

Sa: is something wrong, Siddarth?

Sid: no, nothing is wrong. I just want to give you something (He handed the package to her). Here

Sakhi opened the package and saw it was a mobile

Sa: mobile? But why?

Sid: so next time when you are lost, I can find you

Sa: but I am fine

Sid: but I am not, the time I couldn’t find you, I was miserable, it felt like I couldn’t breath (He paused knowing that he said a lot). Please accept it

Sa: ok, I will but ek problem hai

Sid: and that is?

Sa: how to use? I don’t know

Sid: let me show you He sat next to her and began explaning to her

Scene shifts to Riya

Riya was in the kitchen making coffee when Arjun hugged her from behind

R: Arjun? What are you doing? Someone will see usA: who will see? I already checked, everyone is asleep

Riya turned around and hugged him, she didn’t say anything

A: are you ok, Riya? Why are you silent?

R: nothing, just when Sharon said the name SK, it felt familiar like if I have heard it before. I couldn’t even sleep, that is why I am here to drink some coffee to calm my nerves

A: you should drink chamomile tea, it will be better for you, I will make it for you. You stand here and before you know it the tea will be ready

Riya nodded and Arjun began making it for her, Riya loved how Arjun was looking at her at times, smiling at her

A: here you are

Riya came from her dazed state and took the tea

R: thank youA: always welcome Riya took a sip

A: so how is it?

R: it is nice only one thing

A: what?

R: you forgot to add sugar

She added sugar

A: sorry R: Arjun sir and sorry? Now that is a big change

A: ofcourse, only for my girlfriend. Any problem?

R: no, I like it

They both laughed


precap: shriza engagement, Arjun helping Ayesha with Sakshi and Virat`s help

sorry everyone for the late update

i usually write my ff on my computer but for a while my computer is in repairs so i am using my sister`s laptop to write further

thanks for all the likes and support for the prev chapter

i hope you like this on as well

Edited by VirMan505 - 3 years ago
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brilliant chapter

loll arjun & his remark always shocks everyone😆

uff sameer wanted to go with aisha but couldn't say a loud😉

finally ETF & maan teams rescue sharon & swayam👏

poor sharon & swayam suffered so much bcoz of that monster vikrant😡

look like the teams getting into sikandar business

riya got nervous hearing sikandr name without knowing why?

glad arjun came to console her🤗

hope sameer & ariya will get to punish that monster sikandar soon

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