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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Awesome starting dear..
Like it..
But bhot confusion hai..
Ye aman ri ke pich kyu hai..
Wo already married hai ruk se..phir bhi..
N ruk ko bhi koi pro nahi..
Or ri ka behaviour bhi thoda bhot alg hai..
But thank god .. arj ruk ke plan mai fasa nahi..
N jaldi he.. Fiz ki entry hogi..
Waiting for that.. etf team reaction to see ri..wowww
Amazing n big one updated..
Love it..
Thanks for pm dear..
Updated soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Wow.. loved it..

you know what once both of your fiction gets completed.. I'm bookmarking them to read again!!

Hush thank god.. Arjun recognised fake Roshni urf Ruksar..

Now I want him to feel better in Fiza's presence.

waise what's the update schedule for both of your fictions, please tell na!

Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Amazing start
Ruksar has entered Arjun's life as Rosh
But Arjun knows that she is not Rosh
Chotu's words are so true
Ri is gonna be back in their lives
Can't wait for Riya aka Fiza to come in front of etf
Riya feels like this gangster world is not where she belonged to...something is wrong
Can't wait for nxt update
Continue soonish

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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Glad he didn't believe her
When he ll meet riya yaar???
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Awesome start
It's amazing n very interesting
Must say you are a fantastic writer
Very well written
Love it dear
Want to read more
Eagerly waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Amazing update
Loved it
Etf boys were sad as they remember riya as it was riyas birthday
Ruksaar entered in arjuns life as rosh but arjun doubts she is not rosh
Waiting for seeing teams intro with ruksaar
Thanks for pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Nice update
Loved it dear
Thanks for PM

Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
awsome update

love it..

oh everyone is missing Riya badly..

love the small rii..

faiaza is Riya I guess so..but the way ruksar loves her I have doubt..

ruksar has plan really big..

but Arjun rawte is not that much easy to make fool..

Sam thought Arjun moves on in life (oh I guess he loves Riya that's why he put her photo in his wallet..)

yah good move Arjun ,invite team for dinner ,so that team can investigate on their own way..

well atleast Sakshi toh bahot sare sawal puchegi..lol..

plz continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Amazing part 1 👏
Yeh kya kar diya...Arjun ke dono loves ki humshakal Sikandar ke saath hai 😆
Kya Riya hi Faiza hai?
Arjun recognizes that Rukhsar is an imposter 👏
Please update soon and pm me if possible
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Chapter 2 ~ When Heart Calls:


Hey guys!! I am back again with another chapter. Thank you all for your response. Love you all. I hope you like this chapter. Enjoy!!

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~Mumbai~


Rukhsar's POV:


I got up from the bed to look around the room. I am really feeling awkward here. I don't know why but its as if I am intruding in something very private. I can clearly see that Roshni put too much effort to decorate this room. But I am not normally this much disturbed. Something is changing here. Or may be something is changing in me. Why?? I don't know, but this world of Roshni is very simple and beautiful. I thought I love Amaan too much, but what about Roshni?? She is dead and her husband is still loyal to her.


I shook my head exasperated. I am distracting from my actual purpose here. I looked at the side table only to see someone's wallet there. Arjun was here some time ago, it must be Arjun's wallet. May be I can get something interesting there??


I opened the wallet only to look at it shocked. What the hell!! How is it possible?? His wallet has two pics. One of Roshni that I can see, but another one is of Faiza. Faiza?? How?? Did he know something about her??




Rukhsar: What the hell is this?? What is Faiza's pic doing in Arjun's wallet?? And I have never seen Faiza like this!!


I looked at the image tensed. When did Faiza dressed like this?? What is this going on?? Why am I feeling there is something else that I don't know. I can ask this about Arjun, at least as Roshni I have the right to know. He has to give me the answer.


Rukhsar: I have to ask Arjun about this pic. I am sure Faiza never met Arjun. Then how the hell is he carrying my sister's pic??


I looked at the pic taking deep breaths to control myself. I closed my eyes irritated. I don't want Faiza in all this. In fact I never wanted Faiza to get included in Sikandar's business. But that was her decision to involve herself in Sik's business. Even I got myself involved just to give justice to my parents. Their murderers deserved to be killed.


I won't let Sikandar use my sister, but first I have to find out what's going on here. What is my sister's pic doing in Arjun Rawte's wallet?? Ugh!! this is too frustating.


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Arjun's POV:


I was sitting in the living room sipping my cutting chai and looking at the news when the doorbell rang. I know my team is here. Sameer has gone mad thinking that the girl is Roshni but I hope anyone else can observe something fishy in her. I don't trust her a bit.


I shook my head and opened the door only to see everyone looking at me excited.


Shree: Good evening Sir!!


I nodded at Shree and called all of them inside. Sameer started looking everywhere curiously.


Sameer: Where is Rosh??


He asked looking at me confused. As if I really care about that imposter.


Arjun: Sleeping.


I said shrugging and sat on the couch again. He looked at me stunned. I know why. That lady upstairs is doing only two things since morning, eating and sleeping.


Sameer: Still??


Sameer asked looking at me baffled.


Arjun: Hmm.


I nodded at him tensed. I don't want to see that girl again. She may have the face of Roshni but there is no innocence in her eyes. Her eyes are the eyes of a hawk. She is observant, and calculating. Roshni was never like that.


Sakshi: What happened Arjun?? You are looking disturbed??


I looked at Sakshi startled. What the hell is her problem?? Does she has to interfere in my matters always??


Arjun: None of your business.


I snapped at her and looked away. I know she likes me but she is tracing a wrong path. She will only break her heart. I don't feel anything for her, I don't even consider her as my colleague. She is just a crime reporter. She is not a trained officer. No matter how much she tried, for me she can never be the part of ETF.


Suddenly we all heard that imposter's voice.


Rukhsar: ARJUN!!


She shouted my name coming down as if demons of hell are behind her. I groaned irritated looking at her again. Why the hell is she trying to irritate me?? Who is she?? Why is she here??


Arjun: What happened?? Why are you shouting??


I looked at her bored. At first her eyes shows anger and then she looked at me tensed. I looked at her hands only to see my wallet in her hands. What the!!


Rukhsar: What is this??

She asked showing Riya's pic to me in my wallet. Who the hell does she think she is??

Arjun: How dare you!!

I snapped at her snatching my wallet from her. She looked at me stunned and then started shedding crocodile tears. I looked at her disgusted.

Sameer: Arjun!!

Sameer shouted grabbing that imposter's shoulders reassuringly. Is he even serious?? He knows Roshni even more than me, then how the hell he can't differentiate between Roshni and this imposter??

Arjun: Who gave you the right to touch my wallet??

I looked at her gritting my teeth and everyone looked at me stunned. I know why. Cause they all know how much I love Roshni, and this is not how you talk to your loved ones. But what can I do when the lady in front of me is just lookalike of Rosh and is faking to be my wife.

Rukhsar: I...I didn't see it myself. It fell from the table that's when I saw the pic.

She said looking at me somewhat scared. Ah!! finally a genuine expression. I know her fear is genuine, cause my eyes must be spitting fire right now. I am feeling like a volcano who can burst any moment.

Sameer: Which pic are you...

Sameer said while looking at my wallet. Then he looked at me stunned.

Sameer: Riya??

He said softly and Rukhsar looked at Sameer confused.

Rukhsar: Riya? Now who is she??

She asked looking at both Sameer and me bewildered. I stiffened hearing her name.

Sameer: She is dead Rosh!!

Sameer said looking at me with some tears in his eyes while everyone apart from Shree and Chotu looked at Rathore shocked. Of course they have to be shocked. He never shed tears in front of anyone.

Rukhsar: What!! Who was Riya??

That lookalike of Rosh asked narrowing her eyes and looked at me as if she is trying to search something in my eyes. But I know she can't find anything. I am too skilled in hiding my emotions.

Shree: Riya was our colleague. She died 2 years ago by gulping a deadly virus. She saved whole Mumbai.

Shree said with tears in his eyes. Everyone looked at Shree stunned. No one knew about Riya in our team. She was our secret memory. A person all four of us cherished with our heart. Cause she deserved nothing less than that.

Rukhsar: Oh!!

That lookalike of Rosh looked down taking a deep breath. Sameer looked at that girl tensed.

Sameer: I think Arjun keeps her pic just to honour her.

Sameer said smiling at that imposter and I rolled my eyes at him. Yes that's true, I do respect Riya a lot but more than that I love her with all the pieces of my broken heart .

Rukhsar: That's good. Are you all sure she is dead??

That girl said looking at Sameer with a confused stare. I don't understand why she is making sure that Riya is dead??

Sameer: Yes!! We saw her die in front of our eyes Rosh.

Sameer said wiping tears from her eyes. I shook my head and left from there towards the guest room only to hear Sameer calling me.

Sameer: Arjun!!

I turned around to find Sameer looking at me tensed. I don't want to talk to anyone right now. No one can understand how I am feeling right now.

Arjun: Leave me alone for some time.

I looked at him sternly and went inside the guest room. I never knew when Riya became this much important for me. But her smile was my undoing. Whenever she smiled it felt like all my problems are solved automatically. The first day, when I met her, was the best day of my life. Her eyes was full of mischief, full of life, and now she is no more. But I don't know why I am feeling as if something is off here. The last day when she gulped that bacteria, she appeared different, as if I am not talking to Riya but someone else. Her eyes were too serious, there were no spark in them, just the feeling of inevitability and a strange determination. I am sure something had happened that day. But what??

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Edited by annie2248 - 7 years ago

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