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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

hey everyone
i know it`s been so long
sorry
i will try to update this month
sorry again

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Posted: 6 years ago
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yaar finally you are here

plss aur dealy math karna

plss jaldi new update karna

waiting for long time for this

plsss update it fast

plssssssss

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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

will be updating this week

sorry for the delay

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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: VirMan505

will be updating this week

sorry for the delay

it’s ok dear as long as u remember will be waiting😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#95

CHAPTER54 a

At the swimming pool Virat and Manvi were having anargument, Virat accidently hit a table and it fell on the ground, Arjun sawthat and went to them, Riya followed him

A: what`s going on here?

Man: sir, he is telling me that it`s my fault thathe got punishment

V: sir, you already know who starts it

Man: do not, you liar, you are the biggest Chep ever

V: you are the biggest bandariya, you know what thezoo called, and they are asking their gorilla back

Man: no, you just didn’t (angry)

V: yes I just did (teasing)

Manvi suddenly grabbed his hair and was pulling it,Virat was first stunned at first but the pain made him forget it

V: damn it, Manvi, leave my hair

Man: first apologize

V: never, Aww, it hurts

He tried to push Manvi`s hands away but she kept onpulling

Ariya were shocked to see the situation but afterhearing Virat`s screaming they got back to their senses

Riya went to MAnvi and started pulling her andsaying: Choti, leave his hair

Man: no nnever

Arjun went to Virat`s and started to help Virat withpushing Manvi`s hands away from him

With all the pushing and pulling they fell in thepool

After realizing they were falling, MAnvi let go ofVirat`s hair in shock

They came up as soon as they went in but ARjuncouldn’t swim well so he kept on struggling not to go down

Riya saw that and went towards him and helped him togo the edge of the pool and made him hold the bar

R: are you ok sir?

A: I am fine, Riya and you?

R: I am fine, sir. Let me help you

Riya went outside the pool first and then helped himoutside

Riya glared at Virman who were still in the pool,they wanted to help Riya with Arjun but Riya told them not to do anything

She left with Arjun while supporting him; she heldhis waist and his shoulder, she brought him to his room and said:

Sir, you change, I will be back after changing

Arjun nodded, Riya smiled and was going to leavewhen Arjun suddenly held Riya`s hand, Riya turned around

A: thank you Riya

R (showed her dimple smile): welcome sir

He left her hand and she went to her room

After changing Riya went to the kitchen and startedmaking tea for ARjun and coffee for herself

Scene shifts toSidakshi, Chotu, Shriza and Sajan

They were walking around the food stalls,after a while they decided to sit down and ordered pani puri`s

Chotu got a call from Ruksharso he left to talk to her; Gunjan suddenly felt a little nausues so she leftfor the washroom, Liza went with her too,
Shree went to buy water bottles

Sa: I am hungry, hopethe food arrives soon

Sid: is your fingerallright?

Sa: here (she showed herfinger) it doesn’t hurt that much anymore. Oh, Look the food is here (thewaiter put the food on the table and left) yummy

Sid: you can eat now ifyou want

Sa: let`s wait for theothers, it would not be right, sometimes it`s good to wait

Sid: ok

Scene shifts to Gunjanand Liza in the washroom

Gunjan began pukingwhile Liza was holding her shoulder, after a few minutes, she stopped pukingand washed her mouth

L: are you ok?

Gunj: I am fine, just alittle tired

L: are you pregnant?

Gunj: I think so but I amnot sure

L: did you try apregnancy test?

Gunj: I was going tobuy a few

L: A few?

Gunj: well, you can’tbe sure with the first one

L: that`s true, did youtell jijju?

Gunj: not yet, I wantto be sure before I tell him

L: I understand, butafter the test you do need to go to the hospital for further check up, youknow, so are you feeling better now?

Gunj: yes I know, let`sgo now, I am hungry

They all gathered atthe table and began eating

While eating, there wassome sauce on Sakshi`s lip, Sid saw that and wiped it with his thumb, they allnoticed Sid`s affection for Sakshi but the only one who didn’t notice was SAkshi, who continued eating

precap: new case, and someone from riya`s past and entry of a new character

hey guys, thanks for waiting for so long
thanks for all the likes and comments for the prev chapter, hope you like this one as well

sorry for the long wait
the new indiaforum is still new for me so need time to adjust


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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

Nice update dear if possible try to give little more lengthy ariya scene eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

Edited by ruhi1985sheetal - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
#98

Nice update.

Didn't read the story but this update.

It looks like Virman share a tom & Jerry relation.

Ariya scene was less.Hope it'll be more in upcoming update.

Thanks for PM and continue soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#99

Awesome update


Love it..


Riya save Arjun..


Oh so Gunjan is pregnant..


Ha ha.. everyone understands Sid is falling for Sakshi except her..


Waiting to read more .


Plz give long update next time..


Thanks for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Plz continues soon

Thnx 4 pm

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