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part 35

from that day masa ignore ri totally n close herself in her room..ri go to meet her..

ri - masa

ma - q aayi ho humare room mai..

ri - aap ko sach mai lagta hai masa arjun meri wajah se humse dur hai..

ma - haa hume lagta hai aisa..or lagta kya hai yahi wajah hai..

ri - thik hai masa fir ye wajah yaha se bahut dur chali jayegi...

masa turn her face n ri run from their cryingly..she tell all abt her decision to left ,.all get shocked..n ask masa to stop ri..

sam - masa ap aisa q kar rahi hai..ridz or riya jaa rahe hai.

ma - jane do unhe accha hai..kam se kam hume riya ka chehra to nahi dekhna padega..

sam - masa yakeen nahi hota ki aap aisa bol sakti hai..to fir humara bhi faisla suniye riya akeli nahi jayegi balki mai or aisha bhi uske sath jayenge..

ma - hum apko nahi rokenge sameer..par aap bhi hume nahi rok sakte..

he left..he come to ri with his luggage

sam - hum bhi tumhare sath chal rahe hai riya..

ri - nahi bhaisa ,bhabhisa

ai - tum humra pariwar ho riya tumhe kaise akela chod de

ri - pariwar hu mai bhabhisa or wo ma hai..chahe puri duniya chut jaye par ma ka daman nahi chutna chahiye..chahe koi kitna bhi tadap le par ki siski bhi aulad k karan nikalni chahiye..

sam - or ma jo kar rahi hai wo sahi hai..mai chup chap ye anyay dekhta rahu

ri - ma ne ek beta kho diya hi bhaisa.dusra mai nahi chin sakti..arjun se wada kiya tha sabka khushi ka khayal rakhuni..wahi kar rahi hu..unki ma ki khushi unhe de rahi hu..apko arjun ki kasam bhaisa ap nahi aa rahe

sam stop hearing promise of arjun..

ri - hum thik rahenge bhaisa..

sam - thik hai ye lo arjun k flat ki chabi..or hum roj milenge..mai jldi hi ma ko mana lunga..

ri nod n touch both samsha feet..then she go to masa room who is not there..she try to find her but she is nt anywhere ..she touch babasa's feet n both cry..he lovingly put hand on her head.

ba - kitne pyar se dulan bana kar laye the beta tumhe..or dekho aaj aise ja rahi ho is ghar se..hum apne aap ko kabhi maf nahi kar payenge..le lo apni kasam wapas ..rok lene do hume tumhe..mat jao beta.

ri - kabhi socha nahi tha baba sa ki jindgi mai itna pyar milega..akele kaha ja rahi hu mai..ap logon ka itna pyar or ashirwad le kar jaa rahi hu..yaha hume apne ma papa dobara mile.bhai bhabhi mile..or dur jane se rishte nahi tutte babasa..dekhna ek hum lautenge jab humare arjun laut ayenge..

babasa look at her tearly,.n give blessings n she left..he helplessly sit on chair,,

ri along with ridz left house,.their car drop them at arjun's house..masa is watching from room..tears are flowing continuously from her eyes..she sit on knee..

ma - hume maaf kar dena riya hum majbur the..jab pehli bar apse mile the tab hume bahut khushi hui thi.par apka arjun k liye pyar dekh kar dar bhi tha..sangeet wale din wo dar or bad gaya..apki pyar ki jid dekh kar..humne to usi din apna kaleja majbut kar liya tha jab arjun ko desh ko saupa tha..par is aurat par ma bhari pad gayi..apki ma riya..kuch hi mahino mai apne hume itna apna bana liya ki hum kab arjun se jyada apki ma ban gaye pata hi nahi chala..or kaise ye ma bardash kar leti jab log aap par itne ghatiya lijam laga rahe the..ye to shurat thi ..aage jaane kya kya kehte..or aap bhi yaha rehkar arjun se aage bad nahi pati..humari sewa karti reh jati.,hum apko apni jindgi jeete dekhn chahte hai riya.na ki ro rokar..roj rat ko apko akela rota dekh kar humar kaleja fat jata tha..kya jawab dete hum apne bete ko..hum bhagwan se prarthna karenge wo apko jeene ki or khush rehne ki wajah de..hume bharosa hai aap in sab se niklengi to jindgi mai kuch or accha soch payengi..aaj se hum dono ma beti ka vawas shuru hota hai..apka apno se dur or humara apno k bich..

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she pray to god for ri...here ri faint n ridz call dr..(ridz is also a junior dr but in panick state she call another dr)

dr come n check.ri also get conscious

dr - congratulations mrs rathore aap ma banne wali hai..you are two month pregnant ..

ridz get happy n riya shocked to react..ridz seeoff dr..her hand unknowingly go to her abdomen n tears flowing from her eyes..

ri - arjun humara baby..meri jeene ki wajah..

she smile between tears..

rid - di congratulations mai bahut khush hu..mai masi banne wali hu..

she hug ri,..ri also hug her back..

rid - mai bhaisa ko call lagati hu,,

ri - nahi ridz,.mai nahi chahti mera saya bhi ab us ghar par pade..hum yaha se bahut dur chale jayenge..

rid - di,..mai har waqt apke sath hu..or ap plz apna khayal rakho..

ri - jarur rakhungi ridZ apne or arjun k pyar k liye..

she put her hand on her belly ..

next day sam got resignation of riya..so he went to search her at arjun's flat but its empty n watchman give him key of flat.sam get shocked to know all this..

he n etf search for riya but no clue of her..they also go to pune where ridz is studying but ridz also leave it..they find them nowhere ..

sam - dammit ..ye kaise ho sakta hai,.itni efficient team or kuch pata nahi laga sake..

aisha put her hand on his shoulder

ai - chupne wali bhi to mamuli ladki nahi hai sameer..wo riya parth rathore hai..use dhundna asan nahi hoga

sam - nahi par mai haar nahi maan sakta..kya muh dikhaunga mai apne bhai ko..ki uski amanat sambhal nahi paya mai..jiddi hai dono ek se badkar ek..kya karu mai ab,.

he sit helplessly on chair n aisha also worried for ri-rid

they come home n baba sa come to them..

ba - sameer ap mile riya se ..uska phone off aa raha tha..ridhhi ka bhi..wo aayi thi na etf,,

sam don't know what n.how to say,.

aisha told him all thing..he numbly sit on sofa..samsha take him to his room..he see masa n glare

ba - sab tumhare karan hua hai malti..jis insan jo uske bete ki maut nahi tod payi tumhari jid ne use tod diya..pata nahi kaha or kis haal mai hongi humari bacchiyan..

ma - aap shant rahiye ,.apka bp

ba - bad jane do bp..hume to mar hi jana chahiye..par nahi hum jab tak humari beti ko wapas nahi le aate hum mar bhi nahi sakte..sameer aap dhund lenege na riya ko..

sam nod

ba - hume yaha nahi rehna..hume dusre room mai shift karwa do.

he go from that room.sam sigh.n shift his belongings to another one..masa left alone..

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she take out ariya pic..

ma - tum bhi humse naraj ho na arjun. or tum to humse kabhi naraj hogi hi nahi..

she lovingly crease ri's pic..

ma - khush raho beta..bhagwan tumhe khub acchi jindgi de..jaha na koi iljam ho na koi dukh..tumhe waisi jindgi mile jaisi humare bete ne chahi thi,,tumhari ye muskan kabhi kam na pade.,hum jante hai life mai kitni bhi musibat aaye ap ladengi..or jeetengi bhi..humara pyar or ashirwad hai apke sath..

some day passed but no trace of ri - rid..masa also disconnect herself from all..only doing her puja n some work in her room.

ai - yad aati hai na uski masa

ma - hume q yaad ayegi uski

ai - jhut mat boliye masa..kal maine apki sari batien suni jo shayad har roj arjun or riya ki tasveer se karti hai..

ma - aisha wada karo ye kisi ko nahi pata chalega..

ai - par masa sab apse nafrat karte hai..

ma - karne do humne kaam hi aisa kiya hai..

ai - par q kiya aisa masa

ma - to kya karte aisha..tumhe pata hai wo rat bhar roti thi..or subah uth kar hum sabki sewa mai lag jati thi..or log us bacchi ko kya kya nahikeh rahe the..kaise dekhte hum ye sab

ai - hum the na masa ..hum khayal rakhte uska..

ma - kab tak aisha ..ek din apka bhi pariwar badega jimmedari bhi badegi..hum ye nahi keh rahe ki aapka uske liye pyar kam hoga par fir bhi jab waqt badta hai to kuch na kuch to badalta hai..par ek akeli ladki jisne apna pati kho diya uski jindgi wahi tham jati hai..jo hum nahi chahte humari beti ki thame..yaha se dur rahegi to khud k bare mai sochegi..yaha to usne khud ko kaam or jimmedari si fasa kar din bhar nikal leti thi..par ye to khud ko dhoka dena hai na..qki rat ko jab wo akeli or free hoti thi sab use jeene nhi deta tha.na arjun ki yad na hi logon k tane wo seh paa rahi thi..,

ai - aap bahut acchi hai masa..

ma - pata nahi aisha bas itna pata hai ki us jiddi ladki ne aisa moh dal diya humpe ki kab bahu se beti ban gayi pata nhi chala..

aisha put her head in masa's lap,.n masa crease her hairs..

ma - wo kush rahegi aisha..apne arjun k liye..or humara pyar or ashirwad bhi to hai uske sath. aap bhi khush rahiye qki arjun or riya ap logon ko kabhi aisa nahi dekhna chahenge

ai - ye bat aap par bhi lagu hoti hai masa . wo dono sabse jyada dukhi apko dukhi dekhkar honge

ma - hum thik hai aisha..humare bacche khush rahenge to hum bhi rahenge.or apke hote hue hume kisi chij ki chinta nahi..hume yakeen hai ap ghar bahut acche se sambhalengei..

she give her keys of house..

ai - masa ye

she get shocked

ma - aap hi ka hak hai aisha..badi bahu hai aap is ghar ki..hum to bas apko apki jimmedari or hak saup rahe hai..

ai - masa riya or ridz kaha honge

masa sigh

ma - wo to pata nahi aisha ,par humari bacchi ek fighter hai wo har mushkil se ladkar jeetegi..uski jid use har manjil dilwayegi..

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BHOPAL

riya n ridz take a room on rent..ridz join a hospital as jr dr..n ri join a school as teacher..

she is four months pregnant now..she is checking some copies of students ..ridz come n put her arms around ri's neck..

ri - so miss mukharjee aaj badi khush lag rahi hai.

rid - wo to hum hai hi mrs rathod..aaj hum apki sonograpy cd jo laye hai..dekhiye humara bhatija/bhatiji kitni badi ho gayi..

ridz attach cd in her laptop n both watch baby .both has tears in their eyes..

rid - offo di ro mat na ..baby bhi royega...

ri - kya karu ridz arjun ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai aaj..wo hote to kitna khush hote..

rid - wo jahan bhi honge khush honge di..or khabardar jo mere baby ko rulaya..warna mai behan se nanad ban jaungi..bhulo mat mai arjun bhaiya ki bhi behan hu,.

ri smile n hit her..

rid - that's like my good di..ye lo apke liye chatpata chat layi hu..

ri take it n start eating..ridz smile at her ri too..

next day

riya is getting ready .she wore losse kurta with patiyala salwar n dupatta..she look at her mangalsutra n sindur..she sigh..she come to a wall where arjun's n their full family photo is hanging .

ri - chalti hu arjun..masa babasa bhaisa bhabhisa apna ashirwad banaye rakhna..

ridz also come after taking bath..

ri - ridz mai chalti hu

rid - di auto se jana bus se nahi..

ri - thik hai..

n she left

ridz - bas thode dino mai meri bhi degree complete ho jayegi fir itni paiso ki problem nahi hogi di..apne bahut kiya hai mere liye ,.par mai apko koi khushi nahi de payi..

she cry

riya come outside n check her purse..

ri mv nahi..mai roj roj auto mai paise nahi kharch kar sakti..abhi tak jyada tar savings ridz ki padai mai lag gayi..ab delivery or medicine k liye bhi paise chahiye or baby k liye bhi..

she put her hand on her belly

ri - baby aap mumma k strong baby ho na..mumma is sorry but abhi hume struggle karna hai..ap mumma ka sath humesha dena..

she clear her tears n board bus..but bus is full so she hold holder by one hand n put another hand on her belly for safety ..bus start with jerk..it give her pain..a tear drop from her eye..but she stong herself..she teach student n come at 2 pm ..she take her lunch..then her tution students come..she teach two batches. then take some rest..ridz always scold her no to do excess work but she is ri..very much stubborn girl.so how can ridz win infront of her..

at night ridz slept..she crease her hairs n kiss her forehead .she go ro terrace n look at stars..

ri - ma papa..fir se sab shurat kar rahi hu.fir se husla jutaya hai..par dar lagta hai.ki kahi fir sab kuch chin na jaye mujhse,.,

she cry n sleep there..someone put hand on her..she open her eyes slowly

ri - arjun

ar - ha shona mai tumhara arjun..

ri - tum aa gaye arjun

ar - mai to humesha se tumhare sath hu..to dar kis bat ka..jab tumhe yakeen hai mai aaunga to q dar rahi ho..mai humesha tumhe khush dekhna chahta hu..or tumne wada bhi kiya tha..to q tod rahi ho apna wada..khush raho riya ,apni jindgi ko khul k jiyo or meri bhi..aj se ye sochna tum arjun ki jindgi jee rahi ho...karogi na shona apne arjun k liye itna

she nod cryingly..

ar - i love you shona

but his vision n voice blurred n she get up all sweating ..

tbc,..

precap :- leap of three years...glimpse of ariya baby n their new life