Ariya SS::Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..(Completed)

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#461

ariya ko mila do.. mujhe pehlese hi pata tha ki abhi marne wale hai.. so aapko jo accha lage us soch ko hi rakh k ariya ko mila do...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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+ 12

Posted: 8 years ago

#462

Sonu choose one option which is logical and apt
I feel story should justify the title
To Kisi ka Dil to tootega hi
So keep one end and finish it on a positive note
Regards Goldie 😊

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aashi24

@aashi24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#463

I think You should go with 2-3 end n But last take ur decision N don't take tension

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Mariaakanksha

@Mariaakanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#464

I will just say only one thing.. go with the title dear..

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Ariya_1325

@Ariya_1325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#465

jaisa apko theek lge
But pls ab to ariya ko milado

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#466

hi dear

first of all its really very nice story

although its painful but i love this

you can write it as you find best

we believe you n like your writing

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Aliya Tarannum

@Aliya_786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#467

end me pls ariya milado na

thanks for pm

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ramshaasrar

@ramshaasrar

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#468

Jab story start nahi Hui tho tab tumne kaha tha ke ye happy ending nahi hogi...to tabhi pata chal gays tha ke ye ariya nahi hai...lekin ab tak is story main Jo suffer san se zyada Kara hai Wo Arjun ne hi Kara hai...riya ke pass meet bhi hai Jr Arjun bhi hai or Arjun bhi hai...or same as meet...n what about Arjun...aage tumhari marzi...writer tum ho jess tumhe apni story ke liye sahi lag raha hai aesa karo...

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#469

To be honest I love sad ending stories. But not many people like it. So if you have the many ending which differs from one another you should right it.

I had once done that with my one of the story in another forum. That story had one version of sad ending nd another of happy ending

But in the end its your decision to make.

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#470

you could write more than one version... I mean even I haven't seen anything like that yet but you know what they say... there's a first time for everything😉. Personally speaking I really wouldn't mind reading more versions.

Though I would prefer that if you have a sad version then post that first and then the happier one, I'd like the happier note to be end of the story.