Ariya SS::Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..(Completed)

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eshalli

@eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#441

Awesome update dear
Thxc 4r pm

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#442

oh god!! jeet has been hit!!

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Arpriti

@Arpriti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#443

Oh !!nooo!!! dii aap ki is story ka bhi end ho gaya

Aap ki stories mujhe bahu pasan hai

Aap ki stories hamesha real life se connet

rahati hai sayad isliye inhe read kar k hum

rote bhi khub hain par bina pade rah bui nahin pate

Abhi ka pate nahin kya hoga kya sach main

Abhi mar jayega pls use bacha lijiye na

Ab to hame Abhi bhi achchha lagata hai

pls pls update soon n thanx fir pm

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Ariya_1325

@Ariya_1325

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Posted: 8 years ago

#444

Kya ye last part hai
Abhi ko goli lagi hai
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm

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aashi24

@aashi24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#445

Nice update

Etf destroy sik business

Due to this sik kidnap arj(ju)

Abhi hit by bullet

Thanks for pm

Waiting for next part

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#446

awesome update

Arjun, Abhi aur Riya teeno ne Arjun ko ek hi story sunai

Sikandar ka sara dhandha chaupat

ab woh Abhi, Riya aur Arjun ke peeche hai

Arjun ko kidanp bhi kar liya

omg!!! Abhi got shot

aa su story pati gayi? aakli jaldi? aavu karwanu? aava cliffhangar par?

cont soon

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SahiraKapoor8

@SahiraKapoor8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#447

Last part??

It means jeet gonna die??

Plz cont soon

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Mariaakanksha

@Mariaakanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#448

Oh.. no.. please don't kill jeet.. I really love him dear.. His unconditional love for Riya.. please don't kill him.. warna i will keep on nagging u in ur conscience.. 😆. Kuch aur sochna sonu...

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#449

Note:-

Hey guys..

I m here to ask ur suggestions..

Actually now I m in huge confusion..how to end this story..

Mere dimag me almost 4-5 types ke way aa rahe he jis hisab se mein ye story end kar sakhu..par samaz nahi aa raha unn me se kyon sa choose karu..

Should I continue the one I thought for very first time..??

Or should I write all of them..??but how could i..??

Menas meine ab tak aise koi story nahi padi jisake alag alag 4-5 end kiye gaye ho..??should I write in them different epilogue naming them as version1,2..so on..

Any of the writer has did this before..??

Or should I give only one end ..?

Plz tell me ur opinion ..as its really matters to me..

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Sukannaya Chakraborty

@Arjunpremi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#450

Hi di.jaisa ap ko thik lage aisa ek option chuno.kahani adhuri pyass hai na to kisika dil e khoaies to adhuri hogahi .to on a good note story end karo.update soon.