#T2 ARIYA SS JID TERE PYAR KI part 33 on page 103 15/4/2017

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Posted: 8 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Ariya_1325
Awesome update
Superb
Arjun Riya ko uske mission k liye shadi k liye mana kiya
Riya Arjun k pyaar Ki jid dekh k Arjun b melt ho gaya
Very emotional update
Love it
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Posted: 8 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: etfr
Awesome update
Emotional yet lovely
Yeah I know what will happen.. though feel sad as after such an amazing happy life sad days came but without bad days there will be no value of good happy days.
I thought something like this only that arjun did this because of any dangerous case..
Riya took right decision.. atleast she would have good lovely memories with which she can stay on.
Superbly written
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hmm its really hard.to accept sad face of life but its true life has both sad n happy face

yeah ri was ryt at her place

marne k pehle jeena nahi chodna chahiy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: princessdivya
Awesome twist
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Posted: 8 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97
Awesome update dii
So mission ki vaja se arjun n shadi se mana kiya tha
Love ariya talk
Love sam arjun race
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Ab ki baar ki taraha zada late mat karna
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Posted: 8 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: Swadarsh
Awesome update
Ab kya hoga
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aage janne k liye next part ka wait kare

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Posted: 8 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: madmadona
Plzzz don't kill arjun yaar
He is so sweet n naughty in this ff
Oh god what's gonna happen next???
Plzzz make him come back safely after mission
Awesome update
Cont sooon

i can only assure u you will love it at end

yeah he is so sweet but something is goingto chnnge in their lifes

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Posted: 8 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: neelpari
amazing update
loved it
now i get the reason behind arjun's behavior
riya is really stubborn finally made arjun ready for marriage
samjun n ariya moments very nice
hope arjun return fine
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Posted: 8 years ago

#558

part 31

next morning

rathod family reach hotel for next functions of marriage ,,marriage timing is 1 o'clock in noon

they perform prewadding rituals n then send gooms n bride to get ready..

samjun sit in mandap n looking handsome ..they r waiting for their brides to arrived..first aisha come with sakli .she has wore a dark pink n orange color lenhnga n looking beautiful ..they make her sit near sam..after her riya come with ridz she wore red n golden combination lehnga n looking very preety .all eyes stop on her coz they are seeing her in makeup for first time..arjun lost in her like always..he give her flying kiss n she blush while all smile at his gesture ..

ridz make her sit near arjun n sit after them..pundit start rituals..

pu - gathbandhan k liye dulhe ki behan ko bulaye.,

sam - ridz..

ridz nod n standup .she tie gathbandhan of samsha n ariya..

ridz - iska matlab ye nahi arjun bhaiya mai apke jute nahi churaungi..

ar - what tum to meri behan ho na..

ridz- haa par sali bhi mai hi hu na..ek shreer mai do atma.ek meri di ki or ek arjun bhaiya ki..

she wink at arjun n he move his head in disbelief n ri smile..they follow all rituals .taking round around holy fire.,they samjun tie mangalsura n apply sindur on risha's partitions ..marriage get over n they take blessings of all..then they did post marriage rituals .

night 9:30

arjun has gone for taking position of tomorrow's departure . girls making brides ready for their wadding night n teasing them..they left them in their respective room.

arj's room

riya is sitting on bed n waiting for arjun to come..finally he arrived at 10:00 pm..

he look at his bride who is waiting for him ..he sigh n go to her,who is in veil

ar - shona..maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki aisa waqt bhi ayega..but dekho aaj humari shadi hui or kal mujhe jana hai. mai tumhari jindgi khushiyon se bharna chahta tha par mai hi tumhe gam de kar ja raha hu.

ri uplift her veil n look at him.

ri - arjun plz aisa mat bolo tum humesha se meri khushi ki wajah the ho or rahoge..or sach kahu to meri jindgi ki har khushi tumhari hi den hai.

ar - pata nahi kal k bad kya hoga promise me tum

she put her hand on his mouth

ri - shh..aaj nahi arjun..kal kya hoga i don't know..par mai aaj ka har ek pal jeena chahti hu..ye pal humara hai sirf humara..jise humse koi nahi chin sakta..mai sab kuch bhul jana chahti hu is pal mai.beeta hua kal aane wala kal sab kuch,.bas yad rahe to tum bas tum..

ar - no riya ..i think hume abhi rukna chahiye..i can't play with you for one night..

ri - arjun aisa mat bolo..or kuch galat mat socho..or mai aaj tumhe nahi rokungi..

ar - par mai aaj aage nahi badna chahta..just go n change..

he turn his face..riya cry n left for washroom ..it pinch his heart

ar mv sorry shona..par mai selfish nahi ho sakta..tumse shadi karne ka tumhe apna banane ka sapna maine dekha tha..par aaj wo sapna mai khud tod raha hu..mai nahi khel sakta tumhare sath..kal agar mai na laut pau to tumhare aage badne ka akhiri rasta band nahi karna chahta..

a lone tear escape from his eyes..he feel her fragrance in air n clean his tear n look at her shocked..

she has wore a black net saree with sleeveless n backless blouse..with long jhumkas n makeup .chudi in her hand n payal in legs..her mangalsutra n sindur adore her beauty more..she is coming towards him n he is loosing his control

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Posted: 8 years ago

#559

arj mv no arjun u have to control

ri mv mai bhi dekhti hu till when u can control

both look into each other's eyes..she come to him n trace his face

ri - arjun mai kal nahi nahi janti mai bas itna janti hu aaj jo pal hume mile hai wo sabse khubsurat hai or bas humare hai..or mai tumhari faltu ki jid mai inhe barbad nahi karne dungi..riya agar kisi ki hogi to wo sirf tum ho..or tumhare bad koi bhi nahi..aaj mai rang jana chahti hu tumhare rang mai ..bas tumhari ho jana chahti hu is tarah ki bas tumhara ehsas rahe mujhpar..tum dur hokar bhi mere pas raho..maine apni life mai bahut kuch khoya hai..tumhe nahi kho sakti mai..aaj hum ek dusre ko is tarah pa lenge ki koi hume na dur kar sake

ar - par

she put her finger on his lips n he close his eyes..she kiss his cheeks

he push her..she hold his hand n start singing..,

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan

(she hug his back tightly n he want to loose her hand )

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(he go away from her n she come before him again n hold his hand n look into his eyes,.)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(his eyes are showing his love n passion for her but his mind is controlling him..

she smile n sing)

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe

Main Khud Ko Chupaau Kahan

(she hide herself in him but he don't touch her)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(she look into his eyes n close his eyes with her hand n start kissing him)

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe

Main Khud Ko Chupaau Kahan

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(he push her again but she hug him again.)

Yeh Pal Hai Apna To Is Pal Ko Jee Le

( she look at him n tel him to live the moment)

Sholon Ki Tarha Zarah jal Ke Jee Le

( she kiss him again)

Pal Jhapakte Kho Na Jana

Chuke Karlo Yakin Na Jane pal yeh Paaye Kahan

(she has tears in her eyes she touch his cheek n convey her love)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(he can't see tears in her eyes..so he start drinking them..n she lost in him..she hug him tightly)

Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai

Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai

(he left her again)

Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin

(she hold his hand n nod no)

Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan

( she hug him again n very tightly)

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe

Main Khud Ko Chupaaun kahan

now finally he lost his control over her n her jid again win..they become one...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#560

late night

riya is laying on bed hugging him tightly ..he kiss her forehead

ar - bahut jiddi ho tum shona

ri smile

ri - akhir apne arjun ki shona jo hu..

ar - mujhe to yakeen hi nahi hota jo shona ek kiss k liye mujhe itna bhagati thi wo aaj itni bold ho jayegi..

she hug him due to shyness

ar - ohh hello madam ab ye shyness apko suit nahi karti jo apne kiya uske bad..

ri - arjun...

ar - par kya karu mujhe tumhari har ada pasand hai..

ri - i love you arjun,,,

ar -riya promise me agar mujhe kuch ho jta hai to tum tutogi nahi..apni jindgi humesha haskar jiyogi..or meri bhi..

ri - tumhe kuch nahi hoga..tum laut kar jarur aaoge mere pas.

ar - hmm..par plz promise me..

ri - ok baba promise ..but i know meri hasi uhi rakhne k liye tum ho na..

he look at her n smile n she too..

ar - tumhe pata hai.us park mai dekhte hi tumse dil jud gaya tha..par jab tum chali gayi to sab khali sa lagne laga..fir tumhe etf mai dekha to bas dekhta reh gaya..par tumhara gussa attitude or jid..par maine bhi soch liya tha ab tumhe khudse dur nahi jane dunga..

ri - jab tum mere pas aate the mujhse flirt karte the its was like tumhe pit du..par fir dhere dhere jana tum sirf flirty show hote ho asal mai ur r sweet n gentleman ..pata hi nahi chala kab tum mere dost or dost se pyar or pyar se jindgi ban gaye..

ar - insan chale jate hai riya,pyar kabhi nahi marta..mai hu or rahunga tumhare andar..

ri - aisi batien mat karo arjun..plz..

ar - ok..tumse ye nahi kahunga sabka dhyan rakhna qki wo to tum rakhogi hi bas itna kahunga tum meri jaan ka khayal rakhna..

ri - or tum meri..

he nod..

ar -ab so jao thodi der,,

ri -nahi.mai so gayi to tumhare sath ye pal kam ho jayenge..mai nahi sone wali. tumhare lautne tak yahi to meri takat banenge..

ar - or yahi to tumse dur rehne par meri saanse banenge..

they talk like this but they are tired so sleep took over them..ri's eye open first n she look at him..she is starring at him..he open his eyes

ar - kya dekh rahi ho...

ri - tumhe..jee bhar k dekh lena chahti hu tumhe ..bas ye aks dhundlal hone se pehle laut ana arjun..,

she start crying he clear her tears..he can understand her heart condition his is also same..but he have to be strong..so he think to change her mood

ar - kya tum bhi shona kal thik se dekha to mujhe puri rat

he wink at her she blush n hit his chest n hug him..he smile n hug her back..