#T2 ARIYA SS JID TERE PYAR KI part 33 on page 103 15/4/2017

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here is new thread of jid..actually first one is post by kashu n now she will not be available so I'm making new thread of it,


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part 19

ariya talk continue

ri - tumne jo carefree ladki dekhi thi wo rids ki behan thi jo har haal mai khush rehna chahti thi par ye riya koi hai or ise aisa is society ne banaya hai.

ar - matlab

ri - maine job new new join kiya tha . mere uncle ne meri marriage ek police officer se fix kar di. pehle sab thik laga par dhere dhere pata laga wo mujhse shadi meri job or earning ke liye karna chahta hai. or wo shadi k bad ridz ko bhi mujhse dur karna chahta tha..or uncle ka wo relative tha to unhone aisa kiya..us din se maine soch liya ki is duniya mai jeena hai to khud k faisle lene honge. maine wo rishta tod diya. ab bas mai or ridz hi family hai..

she rest her head on his shoulder n continue

ri - us din tum mere ghar aye the to tumhe humare secretary n unki wife ne mere bare jo bola maine suna

ar - par i know tum aise hi kisi se badtamiji nahi karogi..i know koi na koi reason jarur hoga.

ri - hmm..jab hum naye naye us society mai shift hue the. wo uncle bahut ajeeb behave karte the. sabke samne beta beta or piche se wo mauka dekh kar chune ki koshish karte the.pehle maine avoid kiya par jab ati ho gayi to maine unhe sudhar diya..or tay kiya ki khud ko aisa banaungi ki log mujhse dur rahe.

she now hold his arms , her head is still on his shoulder .both are silent.he entwined their finger n she too tightly hold his ..

sometime later

ri - arjun kuch bologe nahi

ar - kya bolu.sach kahu to maine apni jindgi mai koi itne hard moments jiye hi nahi. mai ghar mai sabse chota or sabka bahut ladla raha hu.maine jindgi ka itna beraham chahera nahi dekha hai. par aaj tumhari jindgi ko tumhare muh se sunkar laga jaise mai bhi tumhare dard ko mehsus kar raha hu,.sach kahu to aaj pata chala dard kya hota hai.

ri raised her head n look into his eyes..both have tears in their eye.

ri - arjun jindgi mai papa k bad pehli bar kisi se kuch mang rahi hu. kya tum mujhe wo doge.

ar - mang kar dekh lo .tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu

yri - mujhe chodkar to nahi jaoge na..ye dosti sada nibhaoge na

ar - i promise .or agar mai mar bhi gaya na to apna wada nibhne ke liye laut aaunga.or nahi bhi aya to bhoot bankar tumhare piche saaye ki tarah laga rahunga.

he said dramatically n ri smile n hit him lightly

ar - ahhh

ri - sorry sorry tumhe jor se nahi lagi.

ar - uhu..mai to majak kar raha tha..mard ko dard nahi hota

ri - acchaa .filmy dialogue hmm

she hold his ear n twist

ar - ahh dard ho raha hai shona chodo na

ri (laughingly ) q mard ko to dard nahi hota na

ar - ahh sach mai dard ho raha hai..hota hai hota hai mard ko dard hota hai.,

ri leave his ear..n he rub with hand.n make face,.

ar - bahut buri ho tum apne junior par koi aise julm karta hai bhala.

ri - or koi junior apne senior ko pareshan karta hai bhala.

ar - tum to meri shona ho na,,

ri - shona shona ka kya chakkar hai

ar - i call you shona because i

he look at her intentionally n she avoid

ri - accha wo chodo .bahut hua ab rest karo tumhare pair mai goli lagi thi

ar - lagi nahi balki chu kar nikli hai..mai thik hu

ri - nahi chalo bahut batien hui..thoda rest karo so jao
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ri - nahi chalo bahut batien hui..thoda rest karo so jao

ar - par

ri - par war kuch nahi.ab utho so jao

she take him forcefully to his room n make him sleep . he sleep n she left for some of her work. n at evening she come back n made light food for him .they spend some time together n then she make him sleep again n left for her home..

next day they join etf n she take care of food as good friend. arjun is feeling on cloud nine.

like this some days passes.ariya coming closer day by day.they are comfortable now with each other.ri smile n laugh with him but when they are alone.

one month later

all are sitting in conference hall n same is telling them about some case

sam - team hume jaldi hi ye case solve karna hai. n aap logon k saamne ek file hai ise acche se read kar le..riya tum or arjun ek or case hai wo handle karoge.uske liye tumhe shimla jana hai as a couple. or hume jaldi hi wo case bhi solve karna hai.

ri - yes sir

sam give them details n left..riya also take file n go toward her cabin

sak - wow arjun tumhara first outdoor undercover

ar - yeah cool na

sh - kya cool ye dekho case kiske sath hai riya mukharjee.

ch - i shappat bahut bore hone wala hai bhai.

li - or daant bhi khani padegi. jab sameer sir nahi hote to unki kami riya hi to puri karti hai.

ar - its ok guys. i can enjoy with shona also.

all - ohh shona..kya bat hai.

arjun move his head in disbelief n they happily chat..

next day

ariya get ready at their place. arjun take a car n go toward ri's apparent ..

he go there n find secretary is flirting with some new girl n girl feel uncomfortable . arjun make a video of them n then go to girl n save her tactfully .n go to ri flat.

ar - hi shona

ri (smilingly )- hi arjun..accha hua tum aa gaye. mai is type k uc par first time ja rahi hu..i know tumhara bhi first uc hai but plz hel me ..

she make puppy face

ar- okie bolo kya help chahiye..

ri - wo according to sir we are couple on honeymoon . but i don't have any dress which will suit.

ar - to shopping kar lo.

ri - hume abhi niklna hai.

ar - amm..okie chalo.mai sab dekh lunga

ri - sure

ar - haa baba chalo..are ek min tumhara phone do.

ri raised her eyebrows

ar - tum bhi na shona do na plz ,mai koi tumhare phone se terrorist activity nahi karne wala.

ri move her head in disbelief n give him phone n left for her room to pack her luggage .

arjun took society people number from that n send that video to all by his phone. which shows private number.ri is doing her packing n arjun teasing her. she cook food for both n they have breakfast . they are about to leave but her neighbors call her. she go with them to society hall n arjun also follow her but stop at door.

there all are discussing abt mms n disgust on secretary . they want to remove him from post. that girl also go against him..ex - secretary accept his mistake n ask sorry for that girl n ri also..

ri is shocked with what happened . she has to leave so she inform all n left.
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ariya in car

ri - thanks arjun

ar - kisliye

ri - tum jante ho mai q thanks bol rahi hu fir ban q rahe ho.

ar - koi bhi tumhare sath misbehave karega or mai chup baithunga impossible . use uske kiye ki saja sut samet chukani hogi. samjhi ya samjhau.

ri look at him teary eye.

arjun stop car at a mall.

ri - car q roki

ar - hume tumhare liye saman lena hai na.

ri - ohh yeah..

they come down n they do shopping .
arjun purposely bring her to a market which is cheep yet have beautiful collection . ri is touched by his understanding .then they go to a hotel n chnnge cloth.

ri wear a skyblue saree with sleeveless blouse but an overcoat over it (its cold weather).she left her hair n come out.her hairs are flowing with air. arjun is lost in her.

ri - kya hua??

ar (coming out of his lost state)- excuseme aapne shona ko kahi dekha hai.

ri is confused

ri - arjun

ar - are kahi se shona ki awaj ayi,

ri - ye kya pagalpan hai arjun tumhare samne hi to khadi hu mai.

ar - ohh tum shona ho mai to pehchana hi nahi mujhe laga koi asman ki pari utar ayi hai,.kaha chupa rakha tha ye andaj

ri blush hard at his comment

ar - omg shona ye red color sardi ka asar hai ya mera...

ri cover her blush n glare him.

ri - shutup chalo jaldi flight miss ho jayegi,

ar - after you mam

ri move her head in disbelief n move from there. but he call her again

ar - riya

she turn n look at him. n he come to her

ar - tumhe inki bhi jarurat hogi because you will play a married girl.

n he forward mangalsutra n sindur.

she look at him shocked but understand its imp for case. so she nod n take it from arjun n apply sindur n tie mangalsutara n left,.arjun still their

arj mv kitni pyari lag rahi hai meri shona. pata nahi wo din kab ayega jab wo mere naam ka sindur or mangalsutra pehnegi. or puri jindgi mai use bina dare dekhta rahunga.

ri - arjun kya hua .chale

ar - haa..aaya shona..

n he run toward her.they reach airport n take flight n reached shimla.

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they enter hotel n arjun smartly fix all the camera n device . n ri smartly intrrogate people arround them. they enter their room together

ar -.uff done..finally maine sare cameras fix kar diye n mai bahut tired hu.

ri - thoda rest kar lo..
ar - thankyou officer in charge

ri - go n take rest,

she throw bedsheet on him n he sleep n riya too take a sheet n sleep on couch after sometime. at night they are getting ready for a party arranged by hotel. they have to catch culprit in this party only coz someone's life is in danger.

ri is getting ready in black saree n a side bun n makeup adore her beauty,.arjun is starring her constantly when she was getting ready.

ri - kya dekh rahe ho arjun

ar - tumhe

ri - mujhe?? kya hua ?? main acchi nahi lag rahi.

ar - uhu tum acchi nahi bahut acchi lag rahi ho. but

he goes toward her n look at her intensively . she look into his eyes n start taking back steps.he take forward n she take backward step.
she strike with wall n he come closer.

ri - arjun

ar - shhh

he open her hair n

ar - aise jyada acche lag rahe hai.

n he left from there. riya is still affected by his closeness . she close her eyes n put her hand on her heart n try to calm down.

she control herself

ri - tu bhi riya..kya kya soch rahi hai..i have a case to handle

she also go outside arjun is waiting for her. he forward his hand n ri after thinking put her hand on him.

they enter hall n manager welcome them. they sit on their table n put eye on all.

(actually case is that someone is threatening the owner of hotel that they will shoot him in his own party.he is relative of dig so dig assigned case to etf.)

arjun is playing game on his mobile but in actual he is watching cctv footage..n announced for dance. ariya also come on floor.

they are dancing on floor n keeping eye on criminal .they are dancing near owner n his wife to protect them.suddenly arjun see a red spot on him n push him n shoot the man on his leg. but he wanna run but riya also run behind him..n arjun follow both.

ri catch the criminal but she is in saree so he docked her , ri give him back punch but he take his knife n about to attack her. arjun hold knife in mid n punch him. he kick him hard so much. n beat him badly. police come n arrest him.he accept he did all this for money given by manager of hotel.police arrest him also.

owner thanks ariya n left. riya see his bleeding hand.

ri - arjun khun ..chalo tumhari bandage kar doon

ar - chodo mera haath.

he jerk her hand.n ask him worriedly

ri - kya hua arjun tum aisa q behave kar rahe ho.

arjun hold her tightly by shoulder

tbc..,
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome part
Riya is slowly opening herself to arjun...
Arjun nicely taught lesson to appartment secretary...
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Fab awesome amez super fantastic update
Loveit
Cont soon
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Awsome update dear..

Ariya become close friends..

N Riya share her past with Arjun..

N she get comfortable n happy but only around him..

Arjun ne accha maza chakaya uss uncle ko..

Ab criminal ko pakad liya..

But Arjun get hurt..n why he throw away riya's hand..

Plz update soon

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congrats
Superb
Continue soon
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