Ariya ff- THE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE [Thread 2 UPDATED - PAGE 114]

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

amazing update

loved it

arjun lost in ri thought , he is thinking abt her all time

here it is very difficult fr ri too

omg ri expo very cute after told her abt arj actually love her

love samjun Friendship , arjun is taking care of aisha for sam n sam is of ri for arju

love smiya n arjisha bonding

update soon

thanks for pm

n sorry for late rep

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zubiya92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Wow

Awesome updates

Love it

Cont soon

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Shalvisharma97

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Nice story dii

Watining fir next part

So arjun is lost in ur ri

Humari rii hai hi asi

Sorry for late comment

Busy in exam preparations

&don't stop to pm me

Thanks for the previous pm's

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Suzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

NOTE

HI everyone

FIRST OF ALL WHO EVER CELEBRATE DIWALI

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY N SAFE DIWALI

N SECONDLY SORRYYY

I M SO SORRYYY FOR BEING VERY IRREGULAR N LATE

I M SORRY..VERY BUSY THESE DAYS

ND YES DON'T WORRY I DIDN'T LEFT MY FF INCOMPLETE... I'LL SURELY COMPLETE IT...JUST WANTED SOME ENCOURAGING N SUPPORTIVE COMPLIMENTS OR criticizing comments..I NEVER MIND..I WILL ACCEPT IT N IMPROVE MY WRITINGS N TRY TO REDUCE MY FAULTS HAPPILY..

ANYWAYS THANKS A LOT WHOEVER LIKED N COMMENTED..N FOR THEM I WILL WRITE.. EITHER LATELY OR FASTLY..

Thanks a lot

I will update next part till morning ..thank-you..for my support..n bear my bakwaas

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

happy Diwali to u too dear

plz update soon

i am waiting for your update, n you are writing it very well.

i loved it

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Suzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

I MEANS IN TWO OR THREE HOURS YOU WILL GET NEXT PART

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Suzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

PART 8 (a)

Recap--arjun n Riya lost in their eyes.. Arjun again lost her

Arjun n teams talk

Riya n Sam convo

*****

Somewhere in Mumbai

Time- 10:00 Pm

"Sikki I told you..you should be careful.look what happened.." a girl of mid 20s speak,entering in big godown like place which leads a big mansion through its basement..

She said to a man of 50s leading her to a mansion..who look little frustrated n damn angry on his loss..

He replied "what do you mean,'you told'...You also told me that you will took care of that deal but look I lost my deal my goods n weapon even my powerful n faithful men n guards..and you leave them and save yourself..and come to me and saying 'I told you na'..WHAT DOES IT MEANS WHEN YOU CAN'T DO THAT??" He shouted at last on her in frustration

A girl scared little and stop on her place scaredly looks down..sniff loud

Man also stop on his place 5-6 steps away from her..after hearing her sniff..look back n come to her n said while touching her shoulder

"I M sorry darling...tum tou janti ho mai kitna gussa Hun itne bade loss se... sorry sweetheart"

Girl look at him n hug him putting her both hands on his chest..not touching her chest or any front part except her hand n head..n said while sniffing

"Don't shout on me naa next time me n Bhai will definitely do the best deal without any loss..I told you na from your those faithful men someone was back stabber who told those police men..even after this much security they entered n seal the place.."

Man become serious and break the hug and ask her "come with me, we have to talk about this"

She look him, gulped as she feel his anger under his serious n straight face..then look behind to the main door of godown then watch then him again n said "wait Bhai told me he also wants to talk to you about this and next deal..he asked me to wait for him"

"Look think of the devil n devil is here gorgeous sis" said a man in his end of 20s entering from the side door of godown.. stepping towards them..

After side hugging his sister..he said little cheerful way raising his hand for hand shake "hey sikander jeej look here is your would be saala to help you"

Sikander look at the young man and said in serious tone "Dekho would be saale I M not in mood now..koi serious baat hai ya nahi"

Man took his hand back in disappointment n said " serious topic tou hai lekin yahan nahi kahi aisi jagah kisi ka darr na ho or koi aasani se naa aasake"

Sik look at him then take girl's hand and said "follow me" almost dragged her to the trapdoor of basement n followed by her brother.. sik open trap door n entered there followed by both bro sis..they look at each other then sik in confused expression

N then both smiled...

Edited by etfr - 8 years ago