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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6b
Fabulous update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone
I know I'm very bad writer with late update...but I'm so sorry...
Guys these days I was too busy bcoz of festival.. please forgive me... don't discontinue reading my updates n liking it n commenting it...I really need it..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: etfr

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Hi everyone
I know I'm very bad writer with late update...but I'm so sorry...
Guys these days I was too busy bcoz of festival.. please forgive me... don't discontinue reading my updates n liking it n commenting it...I really need it..

hey dear don't feel sorry it's happen sometimes
As it is big festivals for us it's family time dear
Enjoy with ur families dear happy dashera😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-7(a)
Morning 8:00
ETF reached to a big godown there they saw round of 50-55 goons..they all are armed with AK-47 and lot more weapons.. deal was going there..they hides themselves behind big boxes n Waiting for backup..which they called earlier before entering this place..Arjun n Shree hide together behind one big box n Ayesha Chotu hidden behind one box together..Liza n Sakshi were sitting little bit far off godown with Ambulance n Waiting to inform backup force..
Meanwhile, deal was going on..when they heard
"Boss ka order Kya hai madam.??.boss me kaha that apun ko ap ke order follow karne hai.."
"Dekho sikki ne kaha hai mai aj khud yahan lead karoon pichle dono deal ka itna bada nuksaan hua hai...sikki bohut gussa mei hai..bas adhe ghante ruko..fir maal load kardena .." a lady in her mid 20's with long curly hairs in black cut sleeves top n fitted jeans replied with bossy attitude..her back was at ETF
One goon ask "par madam adhe ghante ruk kar or khatra badhega..ap tou janti haina kisi ne ETF ko khabar di hai pichli dono meeting ki..isliye ab police aur alert hogyi hogi..tou abi.."
She cut him in between"maine tumse advise nhi maangi tou apni muft ki suggestions apne pass hi rakh...jaante hona mai kon hun..??ek baar sikki se kahungi or fir tumhari lash ka koi bhi hissa kabhi milega hi nhi..samjhe ya mai or samjhaoun.."
At her words ETF was shocked all turn n look at arjun..that's when arjun composed himself n give them 'what..??'look..trio shook their head in nothing slightly coming out of shock state..
"Ji madam ap gussa na karein apun ko ptaa hai ap boss ki hone waali ho apun ko maaf kardena madamji.. Agli baar aisa nhi hoga.." goon replied with horrified expression
Lady smirk at this ...n gesture him to go..
Then lady Turn n about to go when she feels something like she is started breathing after long time..she look here n there n then she saw behind big boxes there was one piece of tin which reflects some image..first she got panick n was about shout..but she smiled widely with relief n happiness which cause deep pit on her cheek instead..then she turn n shout
"Maal ko load krna shuru karo abi or Haan jaldi jaldi.." saying so she turn to go upstair but stopped n turn to look those big boxes n smiled at them then left the place..
Everyone started doing their job of loading n didn't noticed they were surrounded by ETF. Then one goon saw them n shout "police!!" At which every goon took their guns n start shooting ..then ETF n backup also starts fighting back..
After long time when shooting reduced Arjun said " Shree mai us tarf jaa rha hoon upar inki madam hogi uske through hum inke boss ko Pakadh sakte Hain..theek hai mujhe cover karo.."
Shree does whatever he was told n Arjun reached upstair he was about to enter the room which got opened just few second before..he heard loud
'BANGGG!!!'
Yes he heard gun shot sound very near to him..he composed himself n look at the way from sound came n saw same lady standing in front of him pointing gun at him.. before he could do something he again heard gun shot n thought may be he was been shot but then realized he didn't feel any pain then saw behind him one goon lay down on the floor in his own blood..Arjun was too shocked...he thought 'is she not with them or their boss or something else??'
He was about to speak but stopped when their eyes met...he lost in her eyes as if they are very much known to him..as if they belongs to someone very special n dear to him..
He heard himself saying almost whispering "Riyaa"
But to his disappointment face was covered with scarf..he was about to remove it...her phone rings..she comes out of her lost state n move away from him..n she again shot another goon who is pointing at Arjun's head and jumped down from window which leads out of the street before he caught her..Arjun look down at street where she was running towards a taxi n before sitting in taxi...she turn n look at him ..taxi zoomed out of his sight ..after few minutes he comes out of his lost state n look around...move his fingers through his hair in frustration n says "Damnit!! Mere haath nikal Gyi..Kya hogya hai mujhe??"
Then he composed himself n move in n out of the room in search of some clue which lead them to their main boss..
Then rest team also come up n saw him searching so they too start their work..n then one leader of backup force came up n tell them that everyone is under arrest n some were killed..one lady may be their Boss's Fianc is successfully escaped...n all goods (drugs n illegal arms) were in their hands..
Everyone took breathe in relief..n start off to back to their office..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update riya lost in arjun...
Arjun ke haath se riya nikal gayi...
Anyways thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update..

Etf ko ek aur success mili sik ke khilaf..

Arjun lost in Riya..

Plz continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Riya kisiko bhi chakma desakthi hai.. akhir kyun na ho.. Arjun ki Riya hai.. aur Sameer Rathod ka student..😊 .. Thanks for PM.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting update
Loved it dear
Hmmm so Riya ka game on hai
ETF ne Siki ke consignment bhi pakad liya
Riya sabse bach ke nikal to gayi
But Arjun shayad pechaan gaya hai
Let's see Riya is Siki ki band kaise bajati hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
omg he again lost her
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
eww riya got engaged to that monster sik 🤢
but I understand she did it for arjun so he can kill that monster 🤗
arjun was lost in riya's eyes as his heart knew she is riya 😉
wow riya killed those goons who tried to kill arjun 👏
poor arjun arjun once again lost the chance to get riya 😭
continue plz

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