ARIYA SS- PYAR DOSTI... Epilogue updated 7/07 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sur1911

All parts awesome dear

Loved it
You are writing very well
So ariya meet n riya feel jealous of shreya n arjun
Now shree is with arjun
Arjun know about ariya n eager to meet his baby n sis
Update soon
Thanks for pm

PS - sorry for late reply


Thank u so much di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
I hope arjun ja plan susecfull ho jaye...

Riya kisi se mil ne gai par kise..?

Kahi karan to nahi...?

I think. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Shot 5 (last part)

Riya:kyun bulaya tumhe kya batana hai???
Karan:Riya jo bhi tumhare aur Arjun ki jindagi mein huva uski vajah sirf mein tha
Riya:oh ab usne tumhe bhej di
Karan: nahi Riya baat ko samjho

He tells everything to Riya...
Tears starts flowing from riyas eyes
Riya:karan sach mein... Tum ne aise kiya... Pata hai roshni ko tumhe bahut pasand tha... Jab tum ne Arjun Se yeh kaha ki tum kisi Aparna Se pyaar karthe Ho usne roshni ko samjhaya magar tum chi...
Yehi pharak hei tumme aur mere Arjun mein...
She turns
Karan:Riya pls mujhe maaf
Riya: nahi karan Tumhe maaf karne ka haq sirf mere Arjun ko hei karan..
She gets on to the car... Karan falls on to his knees and cries...
She gets stuck in the traffic jam... There Arjun Shree and Shreya
Abhi has arrived
Abhi: any ways Arjun all the best mein manta hoon tum ne galat ki hai but tum ab apna galti Maan rahi Ho... Aur har ek ko second chance Milna banta hai...
Arjun smiles...
Shree: kaise bhi karke aaj Raat tak hamara plan work out hona jaroori hai Varna Riya mujhe yahaan Se pack kardegi...

Shree's phone rings
Shree:chottu ka phone
Chottu: Shree mere se ek badi galti hogayi yaar
Shree:kya huva??
Chottu: yaar meinne galti Se Arjun sir ke bare mein rosh ko batadi aur voh ro rokar apna bura Haal kar rahi hai... Rihaan bhai bhi ghar me nahi hai...
Shree: chottu tu bhi na koi bhi baat tere pet mein nahi rahta na... Achcha tu ek kaam Kar video chat pe chal...
Chottu: haan ruk
Arjun:kya huva Shree??
Shree: sir vo rosh...
Arjun:kya huva choti ko???
Shree: ek min sir...
Video call...
Rosh:bhai... Crying
Arjun: rosh choti kya huva bas rote nahi...
Rosh: sorry bhai Apke baare mein ne pata nahi kya Soch...
Arjun: shhh... Rosh Dekho aise rote nahi... Aise Haal mein yeh teek nahi hai... Ab jaldi aasoon pocho...
She does it..
Arjun: good girl ab suno... Dekho meinne kaam hi Aisa kiya hei.. Haa ek baat hai jisse mein dukh hoon Tumne ek baar bhi mujhse nahi mili... Karan ki baat man gayi...
Rosh: holding her ears.. Sorry bhai...
Arjun: it's okay...
Background: mamiii
Rosh: dekhiye aapki Beti bhi aagayi...
Arjun:meri Beti...
Ariya: mami yeh koun hai???
Arjun Rosh together: aapki papa...
Ariya: aru ke papa...
Arjun: haa my princess Arjun crying
ariya:papa aap ro kyun rahe Ho???
Arjun:kuch nahi beta...
After daughter papa talks
Arjun: teek hai beta mein baad mein baat Karta hoon
Ariya: aap kayi jaa rahe Ho??
Arjun:kyun beta???
Ariya:voh aap new dress Pehne Ho...
Arjun: haan aapke mamma ke saath bahar
Ariya: haaw aap aru ko chodkar jaa rahe Ho???
Arjun:smiles princess Apko jaroor lekar javoonga vaha aakar
Ariya:sachi mein
Arjun: mucchi bye beta
Ariya : bye papa...
He recieves a message
Riya: I'm sorry Arjun...
Tear comes out of Arjuns eyes reading the message
Shreya:kya huva and sees the msg
Shreya: omg yeh to great hei ri ne sorry msg bheji hei...
All claps
Arjun calls Riya
Riya doesn't take his call
Riya comes home runs and hugs him
Riya: sorry Arjun really sorry... Mujhe maaf kardo
Arjun: it's okay my Bachcha even I'm sorry meinne tumhe shayad achcha Tarah Se toond bhi nahi paya aur sakshi ke saath
Riya: shhh... Karan ne Sab bathadi hei...
After some time they break the hug...
Shreya: ri yeh Abhi he mera husband
Riya: hi Abhi
Abhi: hi
Riya: Tumne apne rj ke saath Khoob nibhaya
Shreya:
😆
And Hugs Shreya
Shree: chalo guyz the dinner plan is still on
Riya: haa chalo
Shreya: oh app kaha chali app dono yehi raho..
Abhi: chalo guyz


Arjun: sorry Bachcha
Riya: sorry too my baby...
And hugs him... Arjun suddenly breaks the hug and goes some where leaving a confused Riya..
Arjun comes with a decorated thali
And sees mangalsutra and sindhoor
Takes the candle lights it and takes the phera holding her hand tightly
Ties the mangalsutra kisses her forehead
Puts sindhoor and tears comes out of her eyes and Arjun wipes it off
And takes her in his arms for a passionate night to make her forget the pain he has given her...


The end...

NOTE: so this is the last part... Want an epilogue comment fast...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Guyzz epilogue ready... If any one wants I'll post it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome story n ending
Finally ariya reunite
Shreya is much batter friend then karan
Aww rosh arj n ariya talk so cute
Yes ofcouse we want epilogue
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sur1911

Awesome story n ending

Finally ariya reunite
Shreya is much batter friend then karan
Aww rosh arj n ariya talk so cute
Yes ofcouse we want epilogue
Update soon
Thanks for pm


Yeah di will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb ending
Want epilogue


Yeah will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
EPILOGUE - after 2 weeks US
Arjun has shifted to US and is the chief of intelligence. Though he has forgiven karan... He couldn't be the best friend of karan eventhough he was the reason behind Riya coming back to him

Arjun Riya and ariya in home after a break
Ariya is Arjuns lap not ready to leave him
Arjun: aru beta chalo ham change karte hein
Shree: sir yeh lijiye
Arjun: kya hei??
Rosh: bhai janab ka Sagai hai Preethi ke saath
Arjun: achcha tu sudhar Gaya
Shree:sir...
Arjun: congrats Shree hugging him
Shree: thank you sir
Chottu: Shree khana ka section mein dekloonga
Arjun:chottu khana khaana nahi serve karna hei
All smiles...
Rihaan: Riyu Arjun
Both go..
Rihaan: Riyu Arjun, Shree ke Sagai Se Pehle tum dono ek trip pe Ho aao Swiss ka tickets hei yeh
Rosh: aur aru ko yahan chod do
Riya: par rosh Abhi Abhi tho aaye hei hum
Rihaan: hamein kuch nahi Sunna
Riya: looks at Arjun
Arjun:achcha teek hei par office
Rihaan: chief Abhi bhi mein hoon Arjun bas paternity leave mein thoda aur vaqt hai...
😉
Rihaan: yeh lo tickets aur ha Swiss mein ab bahut tand hei sweaters le Lena
Riya : ji
Riya is doing packing
Arjun is making his princess sleep in his arms after she slept he makes her sleep on her bed and switches of the light kissing her forehead and comes to room and hugs Riya from behind
Riya: mmm Arjun packing Karne do na
Arjun: bachcha honeymoon hein vahan dresses ki kya jaroorat
Riya: haawww Arjun aap bahut naughty Ho Gaye Ho...
Arjun: tumhaara pasand jo hoon and looks Into her eyes...
And takes her to the bed in his arms ...and have a passionate night...


Here is the epilogue
Hope u like my first story
Do comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Very nice epi dear
All fine now happy family
Write more stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nice SS read all d parts in a go luvd it awesome

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