ARIYA SS -SAATHI KHUSHI OR GAM KE part 14 on pg 102 16/12

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Originally posted by: Swadarsh
That's so awesome, update...
Ri ko kya ho gaya, xora ki wajah se, multiple sclerosis...😭
Thnx, 4 PM...
Plz... Plz... Plz...
Update soon...

thanks dear

yeah ri has diagnosed multiple sclerosis

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Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Part 12:-

Ariya get married..

Love Riya n avi bond..she is missing him very much..

Thanks for pm

N sorry for late comments

thanks dear

glad u like avi n ri bond

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Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Part 13:-

Awsome update..

Love it..

Omg Riya having side effects of exora..

Plz continue soon

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N sorry for late comments..

thanks dear

yeah she has side effectof xora

its okie don'tbe sorry

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Posted: 8 years ago

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please update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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di pls update do na

apne kaha tha jaldi dogi

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manasvi..

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part 14

riya is shocked because of sudden hug of arjun.she feel his fast heartbeat n trembling lips on her shoulder.

ri mv arjun sir is afraid or he is crying .omg kya hua

ri - arjun..sir

arjun control himself

ri - arjun sir kya hua ..aap thik to hai na

ar - hmm mai thik hu..tum kaisi ho

ri mv kya sir mere liye pareshan hai,itna .par q .kya hua

ri - mai to acchi hu bas thoda chakkar aa gaya tha.

arj - dekho riya jo mai bata raha hu use dhyan se sunna

n he take her hand n hold them in his both hand .

ri look at him enquiringly

ar - ri.i..yaa... tumhe multiple sclerosis diagnose hua hai

ri smile at him

ri - ye kaisi disease hai , aur aap bol to aise rahe hai jaise mujhe cancer ya aids hua hai,

ar - riya multiple sclerosis unse bhi dangerous disease hai. iska koi particular treatment nahi hai,

tear start flowing from her eyes n she try to snatch her hand from him.but tightened his grip ,

ar - shh.riya rote nahi. tumhe kuch nahi hoga hum har koshish.karenge,tumhe kuch nahi hoga.

she hug him cryingly n he put his hand in her hairs n try to calm her down,

after some crying

ri - sir ,main aise nahi mar sakti, abhi to mujhe papa ko thik hote dekhna hai, unke upar laga kalank mitana hai. avi ke katil ko saja dilwana hai, abhi to is jung mai aapka sathi banna hai mujhe,

ar - riya plz control urself. mai chahta to tumse ye chupa sakta tha par i want you to fight . tum ladogi na ri ,apne liye apne parents k liye avi k liye, mere liye

ri look at him with teary eyes. he see fear in her eyes.

ri - mai haar to nahi jaungi na sir

ar - hum jeetenge riya.hum jarur jeetenge mujhpe bharosa hai na,

she nod.

ar -.to bas. don't worry sab thik ho jayega.

they both returned home.

after that day arman shilpa arjun n ariya parents use their contacts n try to find better treatment . ri is getting treatment but she is in so much pain.

here arjun is hell worried for riya n searching for clues.

like this one month passed

now ri closed herself in her room.only when arjun or arsh come she feel some boost otherwise she feel scared n alone,both parents try to cheer her but no change in her. she feel so weak .she has problem in walking.

( its all symptoms of multiple sclerosis . weakness,chalne mai problem hona, patients ka dar jana, ajeeb khayal man mai ana n many more.)

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scene etf

arj mv kya karu aisa ki riya thik ho jaye use bachane k liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu kuch bhi. roshni ko pehle hi kho chuka hu ab riya ko nahi kho sakta mai. par kya karu mai, aaj fir khud ko bahut bebas mehsus kar raha hu. aisa lag raha hai waqt or jindgi hath se chuti ja rahi hai.

he close his eyes n listen to knock on the door he ask to come

sak - arjun ye lo tumhari chai..

he move his head in denial n ask her to take it

sak - accha arjun chai pee kar to batao kaisi hai

ar - sakshi ise le jao abhi mera mood nahi hai. leave me alone

sak - uff arjun tum or tumhare mood swings . par aaj to had ho gai tum apni cutting chai k liye mana kar rahe ho

ar - sakshi just go i don't want it ,tumhe ek bar mai samjh nahi aata

he rore at topmost voice,she get afraid n run from there.

outside shreetu n aisli are moving their head in disbelief

some hour later etf got a case

its a case of murder of a woman.she found dead in her flat. etf is checking all things in flat properly . all are doing their work .

mr rai (victims husband )- plz sir meri sujata k katil ko pakad lijiye. jisne bhi ye ghinona kam kiya hai wo bachna nahi chahiye

sam - don't worry mr rai hum jaldi hi katil ko pakad lenege

ar - are you sure mr rai aap chahte hai katil pakda jaye

mr rai - ye kaisa sawal hua.ofcourse mai chahta hu

ar - to apki chahat puri kiye dete hai ye hai katil or ye katal ki wajah.

he point toward mr rai n then a file in his hand

ar - chotu arrest him

etf room

sam - q mara apni wife ko

mr rai start crying

mr rai - sujata ko ek uncurable disease ho gyi thi. wo bahut takleef mai thi .mujhse uska dard nahi dekha gaya or maine use

he start crying n all feel so bad for him

arjun come n start beating him.sam n chotu held him back

sam - ye sab kya hai rawte

ar - chodo mujhe,

sam - rawte

mr rai - mr arjun apke liye mai katil hu par maine ye sab majburi mai kiya

ar - majburi mai kiya . kya kabhi tumhari patni ne tumse kaha ki wo ye dard seh nahi pa rahi , kya usne kaha ki wo marna chahti hai nahi qki uske liye jindgi sabse pehle thi wo marne se pehle har pal ko jeena chahti thi. or ye bat unki dairy se sabit hoti hai.

mr rai feel afraid as his secret is going to be out

ar - to apko kisne hak diya unki jindgi chinne ka . asal bat to ye hai ki aap ek bimar patni ki jimmedari uthate hue thak gaye the. ap unke upar apni life or paisa kharch nahi karna chahte the. shame on you. shadi ka matlab sirf rasme nibhana nahi hota .kuch wade kuch kasme hoti hai jinhe nibhana hota hai. wo tum par vishwas karti thi tumhare liye apna sab kuch chod kar aayi thi. or tumne use kya diya dhoke ki maut. disgusting .

chotu ise le jao warna mai kya karunga mai nahi janta.

arj glare mr rai n he gulp his saliva seeing his anger.

sam - rawte control urself. hum cops hai or hume kanun hath mai nahi lena chahiye

ar - i am not sorry to beat a man like him sir. qki aise log insaniyat k liye ek daag hote hai or kanoon insaniyat ki raksha k liye banaya gaya hai..aage aapko jo thik lage sirrr

n he left.sam also left angrily

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sh - baba re baba aaj arjun sir roj se jyada gusse mai hai

sak - haa aaj arjun ne apni cutting chai bhi nahi pi

ch - kuch to chut raha hai..

he act like arjun.. n they hear shout

ar -ab kya aage kam karne ke liye aap logon ko invitation dena padega.jaldi kam par lagjao warna sys

sh - samjh gaya sir

he glare

sh - i mean yes sir

n he run from there n chotu sakshi follow him.

ai - sir are you ok

ar - mujhe kya hua hai..mai thik hu.,you go n do your work

she nod n left. he too go to his cabin n sit on seat

arj mv damm , aaj mujhe kya ho raha hai apne emotions control hi nahi kar paa raha. khud par gussa hai ki riya k liye kuch nahi kar pa raha hu or apna sara gussa in becharo par nikal diya.

he close his eyes to calm down.he come out of cabin n see all are working . they looked so much tired .arj call someone

15 min later

a boy come with coffee n sandwiches .all felt relief to see that things , they eat like hungry people n arjun look at them n smile

ar - pagal hai ye kaun kahega etf k kabil officers hai.

he left for his cabin

sh - wow ab bahut better feel ho raha hai.

ch - mujhe to laga tha mar hi jaunga bhuk se but thank god.

sh - thanks yar jisne bhi mangwaya par kisne mangwaya

all move their head in denial

sak - humne nahi to kisne

sh - rathore sir ne to nahi

ch - rathore sir to commissioner office gaye hai

li - fir ??

ai - arjun sir ne

all shocked

ai - comeon guys wo dikhte khadus hai but we all knw he is caring.

all nod

arj's cabin

arj mv dekho riya tumhare sath ne mujhe kitna badal diya.mujhe or behtar insan banaya hai. or mai hu jo tumhare liye kuch nahi kar pa raha.

he feel restless . he took his key n left for his home

he reach home n enquirie about ri. his aayi tell him abt her condition

arju go to their room

she is sleeping on bed look so pale n weak. he enter n she open her eyes

arj -riya kaisi ho

ri - bas is jindgi se ladne ki koshish kar rahi hu..iske siwa kuch yad nahi,

ar - riya himmat mat harna hum koshish kar rahe hai.

ri - aap hote hai to lagta hai ki sab thik ho jayega..ap chale jate hai to himmat bhi chali jati hai, bahut dar lagta hai ,kuch samjh nahi aa raha kya karu.

ar - mai tumhare sath hi hu riya . jab mai nahi hota tab bhi..har pal tumhare sath hu .

ri - aap plz aaj ruk jaiye .

ar - hmm mai aaj kahi nahi jaunga.

ri - shotti.

ar - shotti..tum rest karo par

ri - pura din wahi to karti hu,ab mujhe apse bat karni hai

ar - accha apko humse bat karni hai..

ri - hmm

ar - thik hai par pehle dinner

ri - no mera man nahi hai

ar - riya plz mere liye

ri - ok

he bring dinner for her n ri take it with him.

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ri - ab bat karen

ar - hmm

ri - okie to aap mujhe apke roshni k or arman bhai k bare mai bataiye

ar tell her abt their relationship , friendship

their happy n sad day. both ariya laugh n cry on his story. she sleep on his shoulder .

he clear his tear n make her sleep on bed.

next day

arjun go to hospital to ask drs abt ri condition .

ar - dr plz kuch to boliye

dr - dekhiye in reports ko dekhkar to lag raha.hai ki aapki wife roj maut ki taraf ek kadam bada rahi hai.

ar - dr aaj keh dia dubra mat kehna..

he is shouting on dr but arman interfere n take him out.

ar m - arjun smbhal khud ko. isme dr par q chilla raha hai,wo apna kam kar raha hai bas

ar - wo kam kar raha hai.,wo kam kar raha.hota to meri riya thik ho jati

arm - arjun sambhal khud ko

ar - kaise sambhalu khud ko ammy kaise ye jante hue ki fir se meri jindgi mujhse chinne wali hai.

he hug arman

ar - i luv her ammy i luv her . plz use bacha le plz .kuch bhi kar

arm - arjun ro mat ,tu tut jayega to riya.ka kya hoga . sach kahu to mai bhi khud ko bahut bebas mehsus kar raha hu. aisa lag raha hai mera dr hona koi matlab ka nahi. roshni ko khoya to sab achanak ho gaya. par riya ko roj maut k kareeb jata dekh kar mujhe bhi bardash nahi ho raha, sirf kehne k liye behan nahi kehta usko.

ar - mai kuch bhi karunga .use kuch nahi hone dunga kuch bhi nahi.chahe mujhe jo bhi karna pade mai karunga. or agar kuch nahi kar paya to uski jitni bhi life hai usme hi use sari khushiyan dunga jo wo deserve karti hai.

scene shift

he directly go to his home

ri - are arjun sir aap .mujhe laga aap etf chale gaye

ar - nahi mujhe kuch bat karni hai tumse

ri - ha boliye

ar - riya i want to , means mai is rishte ko aage badana chahta hu

ri look at him shocked

ar - riya

ri - hmm. mujhe laga maine kuch galat sun liya

ar - bilkul sahi suna hai tumne.i want my husband right

ri expression changed from shock to anger

ri - arjun sir aap pagal ho gaye hai..kuch bhi bol rahe hai

ar - kuch bhi nahi bol raha , or isme galat kya hai hum married hai koi galat kam karne ko thode hi bol raha hu

ri -sir aap jaiye yaha se

ar - riya tumhare pas kal tak ka waqt hai soch lo..or mera faisla tay hai.,tum wife ho meri .n i have right on you.samji ya samjahu

he left n she numbly sit on bed,

tbc..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#670

yeepiii today i'm first
nice update
riya is in pain
arjun feel he is nothing do for riya
arjun confess he loves riya in front of arman
arjun give shock to riya
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waiting for next part

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