Ariya mini ss 'Gehra Ishq' Pt 5 Pg 18 03/03/17 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Nice update dear
N my fav.song tu hai ke nahi ...
Update soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
awesome update.
I loved it.
continue soon..
thanks for PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Amazing update..
Loving this new Arjun total kid..
He is pampered a lot by Rathore..
And team became just like kids with Arjun around..
Arjun is in love with who?
Wonder what's going on between Arjun and Purab?
Waiting for riyas entry..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update dear
arjun is so cute n sam nice bro
samjun bond so nice
who is the girl arjun love hope its riya
update soon
when riya enter in their life
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2:-

Awsome update..
Love it..

Arjun is in love..

Purab khanna aur Arjun ka cold war..?why.
?

Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

N sorry for late comments..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Ariya mini ss "Gehra Ishq"
PART 3



Purab Khanna bohot acha he by nature bhi or apne kaam me bhi or sabse friendly bhi he but but but...

Inki ek problem he or wo he Arjun Dhamsingh Rathore

Na inhe arjun pasand he or na hi arjun ko ye

Case ke saath saath sabko in dono ki cold war se bhi deal karna padta he including sameer too..

One fine day

Arjun kisi case ke silsile me bahar he n baki baki sab bhi details nikalne or culprit ko pakadne ke liye gaye hue he

Choree ek saath he, sameer ke saath aayesha he or arjun sakshi n purab ek saath he

Sab apne apne kaam me lage hue he

(sry guys me case n all describe nahi karungi becoz mujhe wo aata hi nahi he)

Arjun suv drive kar raha he n purab passenger seat par betha he n sakshi wo back seat par n nonstop bate kar rahi he arjun n purab bhi uske saath baatein kar rahe he

Kyuki tension nahi he ab case solve ho gaya arjun n purab ke karan criminal ko local police ko sop ke ye log ETF office lot rahe he

Sakshi : oh thank god ye case jaldi khatam ho gaya

Arjun : kyu kya hua sakshi itni khushi case solve hone ki he ya kuch or baat he

Sakshi : sahi kaha tumne case ki khushi nahi aaj jaldi ghar ja sakungi na isliye khush ho rahi hu

Purab : kyu sakshi esa kya he ghar par

But sakshi kuch jawab de ki tabhi ek zor ka jhatka lagta he

Wo zor ka jhatka kisi or chiz ka nahi arjun ne ek dam se break mara uska hota he

Purab : dimag ke saath saath ab kya aankhe bhi kharab ho gayi he teri"sarcastingly"

Hearing purab's comment sakshi just rolled her eyes n think ki ye fir se shuru ho gaye

But to her utter shock arjun koi reply nahi deta

Purab or koi comment pass kare ya kuch or ho isse pehle arjun says

Arjun : tum log jao"while hastely removing his seatbelt n his eyes wo opposite road par tiki hui he"

Sakshi : are par tum kaha ja...

Sakshi ki baate khatam bhi nahi hoti n arjun dorte hue waha se chala jata he

Sakshi : unbelievable what happen to him

Purab : chodo use hum ETF chalte he ise to ese laphandargiri karne ka shok he"with this he move towards driving seat n left from there"

Arjun wo dor raha he apni aankhe idhar uthar ghuma raha he jese kuch dhundh raha ho wo ek ek chehre ko dekh raha he

Kabhi time ho gaya but no use

Disappoint ho kar he seat over a bench jo road ke side me lagi hui hoti he

Arjun manme : tum yaha mene mene socha me tumhe kabhi nahi mil paungi par nahi janta tha ki tum yaha milogi mujhe I am so happy par par mene fir tumhe miss kar diya how could I ab kaha dhundhu me tumhe kese pata lagau me tumhara

While thinking all this he move his hand into his pocket or usme se ek paper nikalta he

He open it n care it with smile over his face

Arjun : miss beautiful eyes nahi janta ki tum kon ho tumhara naam kya he tum rehti kaha ho kuch nahi janta me tumhare bare me tum dikhti kesi ho mujhe wo bhi nahi pata me sirf itna janta hu ki mene Kolkata me ek ladki ki sabse khubsurat aankhe dekhi jise bas me dekhta hi reh gaya un aankho me masumiyat saaf nazar aayi mujhe or kab wo masumiyat or un aankho ki khubsurati mere dilo dimag me bas gayi mujhe pata hi nahi chala I starts to see ur eyes everywhere uthte bethte sote jagte mujhe bas tumhari aankhe nazar aane lagi kab me tumse pyaar karne laga pata hi nahi chala pehle lagta tha ki ye mera attraction he un aankho par fir un aankho ke owner ko dekhne ki curiosity samjha but nahi ye pyaar he me tumse bohot pyaar karne laga hu miss beautiful eyes I just love ur eyes aaj hum itne karib the par par mene tumhe firse miss kar diya

Tabhi call from bade bhaiya n he left from there with fallen face

Ghar pahuchta he sam uski class lena chahta tha is tarah achanak u bich me gayab hone ke liye but one look at his fallen n sad face sam change his mind n caring n concern brother inside him come out

Sam : kya hua mogli

Arjun : umm nothing bhaisaab me fresh hoke aata hu

Sab kuch kahe isse pehle arjun apne room me chala jata he

After taking bath arjun wardrobe ke samne khada he apne drover ko open karke usme se ek file nikal kar dekh raha he ek ek page ko bade pyaar se cares kar raha he with lots of love

Tabhi sam use dinner ke liye bulata he n arjun deny ki use bhuk nahi he but sam ke force karne ke baad arjun thora sa khata he

Sam ko clearly pata chal raha he ki uska mogli kahi khoya khoya sa he aaj uski ye chuppi sam ko pasand nahi aa rahi he roz ghar me dhamal macha rehta he arjun ke masti se but aaj sab shaant he

Or arjun wo to bas apni miss beautiful eyes ke bare me soch raha he ki aaj itne karib hoke bhi nahi mil paya use itna wait karke bhi bas thori der se chuk gaya wo uska pyaar uske aankho ke samne tha but he missed it

Arjun khana jaldi se khatam kar sone chala jata he n like always sam use dekhne jata he ki wo comfortable he ke nahi

Sam arjun ke hairs cares karta he uske forehead par kiss karta he n then uska blanket thik karta he

Wo wapis jane hi wala hota he ki tabhi bed ke niche pencil giri hui dekh he bend down to pick it pencil uthate hue sam ko bedsheet ke niche se kuch white white paper type chiz use nazar aati he

He slowly pulled it out n open it

Wo paper par ek incomplete drawing bani hui he dekh ke lagta he ki aankhe bana raha tha arjun par shayad banate hue use nind lag gayi isliye its incomplete

Sam ek bare paper ko dekhta he or ek bar arjun ko wo paper fir bedsheet ke niche rakhne wala hota he tabhi uski nazar paper ke back par padhti he

Waha kuch lines likhi hui hoti he jo arjun ki feelings baya kar rahi he

Thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..
Thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..

Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha

Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan...

Sam paper ko wapis apni jagah rakh kar waha se chup chap chala jata he

One week later

Sab conference room me bethe he siwae sam ke sab apna apna work kar rahe he arjun or purab bich bich me ek dusre ko angry glare de rahe he ye dekh kar baki sab

Shree : uff yaar ye dono fir shuru ho gaye

Chotu : or nahi to kya pata nahi kya problem he dono me

Sakshi : dono me koi problem nahi he chotu dono ke bich kuch problem he

Aayesha : stop it guys rathore sir aa jaenge or unhe ye shor sharaba bilkul pasand nahi unhe disiplane pasand he

Choree : wah kya baat he rathore sir ko kya pasand he kya nahi tumhe bada pata he aaesha"said teasingly"

Idhar inki khusur pusur chal rahi he arjun purab ki glaring ke saath ki tabhi ACP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathore ki entry hoti he conference room me

Rathore : team

Sakshi : koi case he sameer kya

Rathore : tum mujhe kuch bolne dogi to bataunga na

Aayesha : aap bataiye sir"while eyeing sakshi"

Rathore : thanks aayesha

Hearing this others pass teasing glance towards aayesha

Rathore clear his throat n says

Rathore : team mere ek dost ke ghar jana he

Sakshi : oho sameer to jao na ye humse puchne ki jarurat nahi mana ki hum sab ETF ka part he but personal life me permission lene ki jarurat nahi or wese bhi ETF ke chief tum ho
Hearing sakshi's talks sam is ready to blast n baki sab apni hasi control karne me lage hue he but ek shaqs apni hasi control nahi kar paya n he starts to laugh wo or koi nahi humare ETF KE CHIEF ACP SAMEER DHAMSINGH RATHORE KA BHAI SENIOR INSPECTOR ARJUN DHAMSINGH RATHORE HE

But seeing sam's angry glare arjun stop

Rathore : miss sakshi me janta hu me yaha ka chief hu or mujhe permission ki jarurat nahi me yaha tumhari permission nahi mang raha mere dost ki maa lapata he unke ghar me shaadi he hume unki maa ko dhundhna he wo bhi aaj ke aaj shaadi shuru hone se pehle hume waha undercover jana he we are going there as guest okie so team move u all get ready n come here only yaha se hum sab saath venue par jaenge

All : yes sir

With this sab apne apne ghar chale jate he to get ready or fir wapas ETF me milte he

All are at sam's frnds house

( Guys case hum jante he ye wahi case he show wala me describe nahi kar rahi hu bas jo mujhe dalna he wo add kar rahi hu )

Sab log unka pata lagane me lage hue he apne apne tarike se

Sab etfians ek dusre se connected he sab bluetooth ke zariye ek dusre se touch me he sam sabko instruction de raha he n sab bhi apni apni finding n apne apne shaq express kar rahe he

Sam : dekho yaha bohot log he jo karna he hoshiyari ke saath karna normally behave karo participate in functions okie team

All : yes sir

Sab dhundh rahe he or arjun wo bhi kaam me laga hua he but aaj use na jane kyu esa lag raha he ki uski miss beautiful eyes aaj uske bohot karib he

Aaeysa, liza n sakshi ladkiyo ke saath dance karti hui sabpe nazar rakh rahi he n chotu shree purab ye log bhi

Tabhi arjun par spot light padti he or use gana gane ko kaha jata he

Wo hua u ki waha singer aane wala tha for singing but ye log arjun ko samjh lete he arjun galat time par galat jagah ja kar khada ho jata he or confusion ho jati he

Arjun ko stage par dekh etf bhi ruk jati he or arjun ke taraf dekhne lagti he but thought to refuse but sam ishara karta he to continue

Arjun nod towards sam n close his eyes use aaj apni miss beautiful eyes ki bohot yaad aa rahi he isliye uski yaad me kho kar he starts to sing

Arjun starts to play guitar, guitar play karte hue uske face par apne aap ek pyari si smile aa jati he or aae bhi kyu na wo apni miss beautiful eyes ke bare me jo soch raha he

Thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..
Hmmm... Thodi-thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari...

(ye lines sunte hi sam arjun ki taraf dekhta he ek dam se n seeing arjun lost he understands uska chota bhai kiske khayalo me duba hua he)

Uske honthon pe muskurae
Haaye duniya meri
Ho.. chakhna bhi chahu
Rakhna bhi chahu
Sabse chupake use.. haaye
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak to dikha
Ho.. ho...!
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chahe badle me le le tu jaan
Who hu wo...

Yaaron me kese kahu, kya hua?
Hosh he ab kahin he kahin yeh hawa
Phirta hu khudko bhulae huve
Yaad meri mujhe toh dila go zaraa
Bematlab sa, jeeta raha tha
Ab mill gayi he wajah... haaye

(arjun sirf un aankho ko yaad kar raha he sab bada kho gaye arjun ki voice uske song me but etf wo apne kaam me hi he n feeling wonder arjun ko itna acha gata dekh arjun ke bhi aankh kaan khule he wo bhale hi khoya he apne pyaar ke khayalo me but his sences are still on work)

Yun toh ye dil, haan phisalta nhi
Moam ki battiyo pe pighalta nhi
Naina who he na
Haan sitare he dau
Chaand dil me kabhi bhi nikalta nhi
Jalna bhi chahu, bujhna bhi chahu
Me un charaago tale.. haaye

(wo aankhe unki innocence unki sachai unki achai uski chamak arjun ko sab yaad aata he)

Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak to dikha
Ho.. ho...!
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chahe badle me le le tu jaan

Claps ke saath arjun ka gana finish hota he or isi ke saath sab fir kaam par lag jate he n inki mehnat rang lati he or case solve ho jata he

Sam's frnd thank sam n his team n request them to attent whole function

Sam apne dost ka maan rakhta he or sab ruk jate he ab sab freely enjoy kar rahe he

Chotu khane par tut padta he shree uski ke saath he ladkiya bhi apne apne me mast he purab ko kuch kaam aa jata he to wo waha se chala jata he sam apne dost ke saath busy ho jata he ab bacha arjun

Uska to mann sirf apni miss beautiful eyes ke paas hota he to wo uske bare me sochte hue idhar udhar ghum raha he

Tabhi...


Here is the update guys do tell me howz it
Love u all
Ramya
Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Hii ramya finally u updated
Its really nice one dear
Loved it
So arjun purab cold war jari hai but reason kya hai
Arjun lost in her beautiful eyes thought
We know its our ri .
Yup her eyes too beautiful
To arjun ko sirf uski ankho se pyar hua even usne ri ka face bhi nhi dekha
Sam care for his mogli so much
Ab jaldi ri ki entry karo
Update soon
N adv thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Ouch Arjun couldn't find his miss beautiful eyes
So Arjun met her in Kolkata & madly fall in love with her
Sam also got know there is girl in Arjun life
Uff Arjun & purab Cold War
Wow Arjun sang beautiful song
Hope Arjun will meet his beautiful eyes
Look like Arjun found his lady love
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awsome update..
Love it..

So Arjun just saw her eyes n fall for her..

I hope they will meet soon

Plz continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
wow beautiful awsm update thanx for the p.m conti soonish

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