Ariya mini ss 'Gehra Ishq' Pt 5 Pg 18 03/03/17

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I COME HERE AGAIN TO EAT UR HEAD GUYS BUT KYA KARU YE STORY MERE MIND ME BOHOT SHOR KAR RAHI THI N ME BOHOT IRRITATE HO GAYI ISLIYE I PENNED IT DOWN YE MINI STORY HE FF NAHI HE BUT AB KITNI MINI REHTI HE YE ME NAHI JANTI YE AAPKE RESPONSE PAR DEPEND KARTA HE SO PLZZ GUYS READ IT N SHOWER UR COMMENTS N LIKES THEY MEANS ALOT TO ME OKIE NOW FULL STOP TO MY BAK BAK N HERE U GO WOHOOO...

Ariya mini ss "Gehra Ishq"

~PART 1~

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PLACE : ETF Building's Conference Room

Waha sab present he choree, sakesha

Ye 4ro shanti se paper work kar rahe he liza apni lab me he

Shanti se isliye becoz waha unka boss ETF ka chief bhi present he ACP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathore

Rathore waha previous case ki file padh raha he tabhi phone ring hota he

After calls end

Sab rathore ki taraf dekh rahe he but rathore kisi soch me he

Aayesha : sir koi case

But rathore koi jawab nahi deta

Aayesha again try this time little loudly

Aayesha : SIR

Isse rathore present me aata he or aayesha ki taraf dekhta he

Aayesha : koi case ?

Rathore take a deep sigh n say

Rathore : nahi koi case nahi he its new joining

All are doing khusur pusur like kon hoga ya kon hogi, kis post par khadus to nahi n all

Rathore : TEAM"scold them"

All : sorry sir

Rathore : wo bas kuch hi der me hume join kar rahe he commissioner sir khud aa rahe he unke saath yaha they are going to come any moment

Sakshi : kon he wo sameer

Rathore : Arjun DR

Isse pehle koi kuch aage puche ya kahe commissioner ki entry hoti he conference room me

Commissioner sir ko dekh kar sab khade ho jate he

All (including rathore) : Good Morning sir

Commissioner : good morning team

Baki sab curiously dekh rahe he but commissioner ke saath koi nahi he to wo naya joining kaha he

N rathore wo tense hoke dekh raha he or commissioner ko questioning gaze de raha he

Commissioner : mujhe lagta he aap sabhi ko beth jana chahiye kyu sameer

Kisike kuch samjh nahi aata but commissioner sir ki is baat se sameer ek dam se chair par beth jata he ek bhigi billi ki tarah

Sab use stare kar rahe he aayesha kuch kehne wali hoti he ki tabhi toofan ki tarah koi sameer par pounds karta he n in a second sameer chair sahit jamin par

Voice : LADDOO...

ETF to ye sab muh khol kar aankhe badi badi karke dekh rahi he or soch rahi he ki ye kon he jo ACP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathore par is tarah kuda kon he ye jisne ye himmat ki

Rathore : urggg stop it u n get up from me

Wo person uthta he or rathore ko bhi madat karta he khade hone me

Rathore while dusting that persons cloths

Rathore : r u mad agar lag jati to tujhe

Person : hahahaha mujhe kese lagegi tu hena mujhe har bar bachane ke liye laddooo

Rathore : pagal he tu bilkul pagal"said while caressing that persons hair"

Person : oww don't spoil my hairs bhaisaab "with pout"

All ETF team : BHAISAAB

Isse rathore or wo person present me aate he or bakiyo ki taraf mudte he

Rathore : umm oh team ye he humare new joining

Commissioner sir : hmm or apni traning khatam karke aaye he janab or aate hi ETF me posting mil gayi"with proud look n caresses that persons hair"

Person : offo aap logo ki mere hairs se kya dusmani he jise dekho unke piche pada rehta he"said wid cute pout"

Baki sabke face par smile aa jati he n rathore or commissioner they starts to laugh at his cute pouting face

Person : bhaisaab mamashri plzzz

Commissioner : okie okie sameer beta ab tum mere Mogli ko nahi chedoge samjhe

Person : mamashri"warning tone n with this dat person turns his face to other side"

ETF team to shocked he aage hue scene ko dekh kar unke chief itne free or commissioner sir wo bhi dono kisike saath mazak kar rahe he inhe to humesha serious or khadus ki tarah dekha he but aaj ye koi or hi lag rahe he unhe (team ko)

Commissioner : okie sameer is notanki ko me tumhare hawale karta hu ab mujhe jana he ek important meeting he"while checking his wrist watch"

Rathore : ji sir I'll take care from now on

Commissioner starts to left the conference room tabhi piche se koi unpar jhapatta he

Commissioner : ufff mogli ab me buddha ho raha hu ab is tarah kudna band karo mujhpar

Person : ooho mamashri abhi kaha se buddhe ho gaye aap abhi to jawani aayi he"he said cheekily while pecking commissioners cheeks"

Commissioner : arjun behave ye office he"said angrily"

Arjun's face fall down

Commissioner : awww mera mogli bacha sorry mene gussa kiya na m sorry"while holding his ears"

Arjun again peak his cheeks n showed him his tongue

Commissioner : kuch nahi ho sakta iska"with this he left from there"

Team ko to ye sab digest nahi ho raha wo sab abhi bhi shocked he

Arjun fir sameer ke paas jata he, n hugged him tightly rathore also hug him back

Arjun : bhaisaab I missed u

Rathore : I missed u more jun

Kuch der baad dono hug se bahar aate he team ke curious faces dekh kar rathore says

Rathore : team ye new joining he Senior Inspector Arj..

Sakshi : haan sameer hume pata he ye Arjun DR he but tumhara or commissioner sir ka koi close relation lagta he inse

Rathore : me wahi bata raha hu sakshi he is Senior Inspector Arjun Dhamsingh Rathore

Team wide open mouth ke saath khadi he

Rathore : he is my younger brother or ab tum ye pucho ki commissioner sir se kya relation he so wo bhi bata raha hu wo mamashri he humare humari maasa ke bhaisa

Arjun : hello everyone mera intro me khud deta hu mene abhi kuch months pehele hi apni training khatam ki he or training ke baad Kolkata me meri posting hui n now m here in ETF with u all"with his charming smile"

All smile towards him

Sameer : or arjun ye he aayesha encounter specialist, shreekant/shree technical expert, chandrakant/chotu commando, sakshi journalist

Tabhi liza bhi enter hoti he CR me

Sameer : or ye liza he forensic expert this are our team members

All : hello welcome to ETF

Arjun : thanks u

Tabhi rathore ko call aata he

Rathore : team case

(sorry guys I am not into this case n all mujhe nahi aata ye sab isliye me case par concentrate nahi kar rahi hu)

Sab case ke liye nikal jate he sham ho gayi he case bhi solve ho gaya all thanks to arjun n uski intelligence sab bohot impressed he uski sharpness se sameer bhi bohot proud feel kar raha he

Sab ETF office me he

Rathore : team its getting late aaj ke liye kaafi he u all can leave now

All node their heads n went

Ab samjun bache he

Sam : kya chalna nahi he tujhe mogli

Arjun : uhu..

Sam : or wo kyu bhala

Arjun : mene aaj case solve kiya na

Sam : haan or uske liye I am very proud of u

Arjun : sirf proud meko wo sondesh khana he market ke paas wali us shop ke"said cutely"

Sam : kya!! Are par abhi late ho raha he wo band hone ko he

Arjun : tujhe khushi nahi hui mujhe yaha dekh kar laddoo

Sam : ye kesi baate kar raha he I am very happy mamashri ne jab naam bataya to me bohot surprised tha u kaho shock me tha ki tu Mumbai aa gaya he mujhe pata hi nahi tha me to soch raha tha kit u kolkata me hi he

Arjun : surprise than a tere liye

Sam : surprise ya shock

But arjun ka fallen face dekh kar sam says

Sam : chal tere aane ke khushi me sondesh khilata hu tujhe tere favorite or wo bhi teri pasandita shop se

Arjun : par wo to band hone wali hena

Sam : band hone wali he hui to nahi na kyu don't u know me"n wink towards arjun"

Arjun grin at this n both the brothers left to celebrate arjun's arrival

So here is the part one do tell me guys howz it m very eager to know ur views over this one

love u all

ramya

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INDEX



PART 2 # https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135777704">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135777704">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135777704
Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow superb update
Love Arjun's character here
Love the bond between SamJun
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update..
loved Sam Arjun bonding..
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome story dear
arjun ka character oh my my
sameer bhigi billi hehahaha
so samjun bhai bhai
loved their bonding
sameer ladooo
wow cute name
update soon
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Awesome update
Love this samjun
Arjun entry n character interesting
Update soonish
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
love it
arjun's entry was superb
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hope riyas entry to b soon
Anyways loved Arjun in this different from hot headed cop
Continue soon 😊 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum start!!
Lol arjun is so childish n crazy n cute...
Completely different from his original personality...
N without his signature 'Samjhe ya samjaun'!
Waiting for riya entry...
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww samjun
loved this arjun
loved samjun-com sir bonding
awesome start
cont sooon

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