Ariya ss 'MITWA-Ishq Pe Zor Nahi' PT 21 PG 88 11/01/19 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
I just hate rosh
But I love Arjun ...n what ever relation he has with Niti its quit cute...but what abut Riya if rosh is arjun's wife so why he did that with Riya...n plzzz next part update soon dear...n thnx for pm
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Awesome part...
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amazing update
superb story
hmm...aww niti
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Awesome update.,so arjun is married to rosh thats bad & he had started feeling for riya,continue soon
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Awesome update
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roshini s also there
what's happening here???
awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
I just love the part ohhh Arjun Riyu ko soch kar bhi hass leta hai aur Rosh ko dekh kar bhi kuch nahi hota.

Kash yeh Niti Arjun ki beti naa ho. Rosh aur kisi aur ki beti ho jisse bs Arjun se sahara diya ho.

Niti cute hsi Riya ke sath parfect hai.

Please please update sooonnn

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Ariya FF "MIRWA-Ishq Pe Zor Nahi"
PART 6





Roshni ke jane ke baad arjun uhi khada reh jata he kuch der but tabhi niti waha aati he while calling him

Niti : baba... baba...

Arjun close his eyes for a second n again place a smile on his face

Arjun : sambhal ke beta

Niti : no baba abhi jaldi kijiye chaliye jaldi jaldi

Arjun : are niti give me a second let me..

Niti : no baba its our time chalo lets do masti

Arjun ko khichte hue niti use waha se le jati he both eats their snacks n play many games

Arjun n niti dono video game kher rahe hote he ki tabhi

Niti : baba

Arjun : hmm"his whole concentration is on game only"

Niti : baba

Arjun : haa beta

Niti : baba lets go out

Arjun remote niche rakhta he n niti ki taraf dekhta he

Niti continues seeing his full attention over herself

Niti : baba chaliye na kahi bahar ghumke aate he

Arjun : kya baat he beta aaj ese achanak bahar ghumne ki kese sujhi tumhe humesha to jab me ghar pr hota hu to tumhe me sirf tumhare liye chahiye hota hu mujhe ek minute ke lite bhi kahi jane nhi deti or aaj khud bahar jana chahti ho

Niti smile sleepishly n says

Niti : baba please

Arjun : kaha jana chahti ho

Niti : umm bab wo ri ke yaha

Riya ka naam sunte hi arjun ke dil ki dhadkan tez ho jati he

Niti : baba please mana mat kariyega chaliye n see wo akeli rehti he unhe bhi company ki jarurat hogi apni family se dur he wo lets see na ki wo thik he ya nahi

(Jo ladki apne baba ka time, apne baba ko bant nhi sakti thi jab bhi arjun job se jaldi aata sirf or sirf niti ke saath waqt bitata niti ka kehta tha ki wo waqt sirf papa beti ka he uame kisi or ke liye jagah nhi he but aaj wo khud hi riya ko shamil karne ja rahi he apni duniya me riya ko invole karne ja rahi he bina jane bina samjhe)

Arjun kuch react hi nahi kar pata bas chup chap betha rehta he riya se milne ki khushi uski aankho me saaf nazar aa rahi he but use samjhne ke liye niti abhi bachi he or arjun wo abhi apni feelings pehchan hi nhi pa raha wo to ye bhi nhi samjh pa raha ki use riya ka khayal itna sukun kyu deta he riya uske liye itni khas kyu ho rahi he

Dono papa beti riya ke ghar ki taraf nikalte he

Niti to bohot khush he riya se milne ke liye uski khushi arjun saaf dekh pa raha he n wo bhi apni beti ke liye khush he but wo riya se kese milega use samjh nhi aa raha jese jese riya ka ghar nazdik aa raha he arjun ke dil ku dhadkan te ho rahi he n at last they are in front of her house

Dono SUV se nikalte he n ri ke ghar kee pas pahuchte he

Niti : baba pehlee aap

Arjun : are par ni..

Isse pehlee arjun apni baat puri kare he sees ki niti usje piche chup rahii he

Niti : baba ring the bell m hiding me unhe surprise dungi so dont tell her ab khade mat rahiye jalldi kijiyye

Ab arjun ke pas koi option nhi hota n he ring the bell dil me uske bohot ajib feel ho raha he use riya kese react karegi use yaha dekh kar kya sochegi uske bare me bas yahi sab chal raha he uske mann me

At last he rings the bell

Kuch pal me door open hota he or fir sab kuch tham jata he

Kuch der pehle ri apne room ki safai kar rahi hoti he but uska mann wo to sirf arjun ke khayalo me hota he kese subah usne ye janne ke liye call kiya tha ki wo thik tarahcollage paguch gayi ya nhi din me pick karne bhi aaya arjun ki aankhe use gaal lal kar rahi he use samjh hi nhi aa raha ki ye kesi feelings he kya ho raha he use wo kuch nhi samjh pa rahi har bar sochti he ki arjun ke bare me na soche but kab uske bare me sochne lag jati he use pata hi nhi chalta

Riya apne khayalo me hoti he ki tabhi door bell ring hoti he

Riya door open krtii he wo jesse saans lena hii bhul gayi ho bs ek tak un aankhho me dekhti rehti he

Both ariya are gazing in eachothers eyes its seems like etenity but in reality its just few seconds

Dono ek dusre ko dekh kr bohot khush he

Isse pehle dono mese koi kuch react kaare

Niti shout : SURPRISE... "With bright smile"

Is shout se ariya apne dreamland se bahar aate he

Niti ko dekh riya sari awkwardness bhul jati he or uske saath khud bhi bachi ban jati he

Riya : OMG OMG U HERE"with smiling face"

Both rini hugs each others n arjun wo in dono ko itna excited dekh khush ho jata he

Dono hug se bahar aate he ri invite them in

Niti to bedhadak andar aati he but arjun wo hesitate kr raha he

Riya : aap andar nhi aaenge mr. rawte"said slowly with eyes down" plzz come"sais while directly looking into his eyes

Ab arjun mana nhi kar pata n went inside with riya

Niti pure ghar me ghum rahi he har nok n corner dekh rahi bilkul bhi hesitate nhi karrahi wo

Arjun ko samjh nhi aa raha ki wo niti ko kese roke becoz its not dere house riya kya sochegi uski is childish act se uske mind me ye thought chal hi raha hota he ki uska jawab bhi mil jata he use

Riya : its ok i dont mind ye niti ka bhi ghar he"with small smile"

Arjun ek tak ri ko dekhta he ri thori concious ho jati he n use ye bhi samjh aata he ki actually she answered his unsaid doubt unsaid how ?? Arjun ke bina kahe wo uske mann ki baat kse jaan gayi

Her thought brokes from mobile ring

Its arjun's mob ek case aaya he n arjun ko jaana he

Arjun : wo actually hm its case i have to rush

Riya thora sad ho jati he but she herself dont know y

Riya just nod her head in acknowledgment

Niti apne house tour se wapas aati he n apne baba or ri ko ese chupchap khada dekh kar kehti he

Niti : kya hua baba ri what happend

But dono kuch nhi kehte n niti apne baba ki khamoshi samjhkar

Niti : case hena baba

Arjun : hmm i have to go but

Niti : but??"confusingly"

Arjun : mujhe urgently commissioner sir ke office jana he i dont know what to do tumhe ghar drop karne ka time nhi he abhi or waha jald se jald pahuchna he

Riya : to aap jaiye niti yahi rahlegi mere saath"said suggestively"

Niti : of course baba me ri ke saath hi reh lungi u dont worry n kal campus hum yahi sse saath chale jaenge

Riya : haa bilkul u go without any worry m here to take care of her"ansuring him"

At this arjun nod his head n left from dere

Arjun ke jane ke baad niti n riya bohot masti karte he

Fir niti ko bhuk lag jati he n riya make dinner from them khana khake niti ri ke room me TV dekhte hue so jati he n riya wo used utensils wash karne ke baad niti ko check karti he ki if she comfortable or not den she comes to hall n wahi book le kar pashne beth jati he

Raat ke 11 baje hote he ki tabhi door bell ring hoti he

Riya ek bae ghadi ki taraf dekhti he or jaldi se door ki taraf doudti he mano jese janti ho ki door pr kon hoga use ek pal ke liye bhi ye nhi lagta ki agar koi harmfull person hua to kya hoga

Wo jaldi se door ke pas janti he n door open krti he n as expected uske samne arjun khada hota he

Dono bhul hi jate he ki wo door pe khade he itni raat me tabhi arjun ko kuch yaad aata he or uske chehre ke pleasant expression blank ho jate he

Riya bhi arjun ke face pe change dekh leti he n try to say something

Riya : ji w..

But arjun stops her in mid

Arjun : time kya hua he riya"little angrily"

Riya get scared seeing his anger

Arjun : itni raat me tum bina kuch soche samjhe door open kar diya koi bhi ho sakta tha is waqt laparwahi ki bhi haq hoti he riya kyu open kiya is taraf se door

Riya kuch nhi kehti sirf floor pe uski aankhe gadi hoti he

Riya se koi jawab na pa kar arjun or gussa aa jata he n his anger he hold her from her shoulder n shake her little

Arjun : look at me answer me riya"angrily"

Riya arjun ki taraf nazare utha ke dekhti he n kwhti he

Riya : i... i...iii... mujhe pata tha ki aap ho"slowly"

Ye sunte hi arjun ka gussa gayab ho jata tha or wo sari feeling jo uske pehle din riya ke liye mehsus ki thi wahi sab fir se feel hone lagta he

Arjun : Riya..."says huskily"

Dono ek dusre ki aankho me kho jate he

Kuch pal baad riya apni aankhe arjun se churati he n dono present me aate he

Arjun clear his throat n says

Arjun : wo me umm i thought niti yaha reh rahi he to aubah school ke liye uski uniform usee jarurt hogi me wahi dene aaya hu bas

Arjun riya ko niti ki uniform n bag deta he n jane ke liye mudta he

Riya says while holding arjuns hand

Riya : stop

Arjun ki to dil ki dhadkan riya ke ek small touch se hi badh jati he or wo wahi ke wahi ruk jata he

Riya arjun ka haath pakad ke bina kuch kahe use le kar dinning area me aati he n make him sit on dinning table

Arjun to jese khoya hua he bas riya ko use lead karne de raha he

Jab riya use chair me bithati he tab wo hosh me aata he n confuse hoke kiya ko dekhta he

Arjun : riya?? "confusingly"

Riya koi jawab nhi deti bas chupchap plate me khana serve karne lagti he

Arjun firse riya ka naam pukarta he but response same rehta he that is no response wo apne km me lagi hui hoti he so arjun uska haath pakad leta he to make her stop her work

Riya arjun ki aankho me dekhti he n kehi he

Riya : i know apne khana nhi khaya hoga ab tak to pehle khana kha lijiye fir chale jana nhi rokungi tab"said slowly"

Arjun chup reh jata he uski ye baat sunke or kuch react nhi kar pata riya arjun ki khamoshi ko denial samjh leti he

Riya : kha lijiye plzzz

Arjun's heart filled wid emotions seeing her care his throad get chocked with feelings isliye wo nod se jyada kuch keh nhi pata

Riya use dinner serve karti he n arjun bina kuch kahe chupchap khane lagta he

Arjun ko kuch kehne ki jarurt hi nhi padti n riya use serve karti jati he arjun saalo bad pet bhar ke khana khata he

Arjun : bas riya or kitna khilaogi m full seriously

Riya : hmm

Arjun : acha to ab me chalu

Wo sari awkwardness jo ab tak thi dono ke bich ese gayab ho gayi jese saalo se jante he ek dusre ko

Riya : aap bethiye me chai le kar aati hu aapke liye

Arjun : how...

Riya just smile n left towards kitchen

Arjun : niti??

Ye sunke riya ki smile or badh jati he

(actually arjun ko khane ke bad chai pina pasand he yahi baat niti ne aaj baato baato me riya se kahi)

Riya chai bana rahi he n arjun ghar ko observe kar raha he jo pehle nhi kar paya tha pura ghar ek dam neat n clean he isse hi pata chalta he ki riya kitni hygeinic freak he fir uski nazar drawing room waha tea table par kuch books shattered he isse samjh aata he ki riya padhai kar rahi thi yaha fir wo hall ki window ke pas ja kar khada ho jata he after so long he"s enjoying himself this sweet weather n silence jiski ek apni hi alag bhasha he

Riya : ummm"clear her throat to gain his attention"

Arjun turn hota he n take tea from her

Dono silence me apne apne bevrages lete he ek dusre ki aankho me dekhte hue

Chai khatam hoti he riya apna haath aage badhati he to take tea cup n arjun placed it in her hand still eyelocked up with eachother

Riya put tea cups down ki tabhi light chali jati he or riya ek dam se dar kar arjun ko hug kar leti he

Arjun : shhh me huna yaha riya dont worry m here"trying to consoul her n hug her back"

Dono ko pata mhi chalta or kab wo dar n consouling desire me badal jati he dono ke face ek dusre ke close aane lagte he riya's breath gets heavy firstly from fear n after dat from arjun's closeness

Dono ki saanse ek dusre me mingle ho rahi he dono ke nose apas me touch ho rahe he dono ke lips bas ek inch ki duri pr he jo apas me samane ke liye tadap rahe he n at last ye tadab dono sehi bardash nhi hoti n dey ended up kissing eachother

But its not a long kiss or a passionate one its a small soft n sweet kiss

Tabhi

Niti : ri r u awake"she called ri from inside only"

Niti ki voice ke sath light bhi aa jati he n ariya bhi present me aa jate he

Dono ki halat kuch kehne layak nhi hoti jo awkwardness kuch der pehle khatm ho gayi thi wo firse resurface ho gayi

Arjun : i.iii... i.. should leave door lock karlo

Isse jyada or kuch nhi bol pata wo na sorry na hi kuch or riya ko kese react karna he use bhi samjh nhi aata bas wo motionlessly door tak jati he use close karti he or wese hi motionless ho kar room me chali jati he niti ke pas bed par let jati she cares niti's hair n kiss her forehead n lay down beside her

Dusri taraf arjun wo bhi kese ghar pahucha wo bhi nhi janta he also lay down uske samne wahi scene ghum raha n hw was cursing himself how could he ?? jo kuch pehle hua kya wo kam tha jo ek bar firse usne ye kar diya kya sochrahi hogi wo ki me kis tarah ka admi hu har waqt uska fayda uthata aya hu

Both spent sleepless night in eachothers thoughts this is wrong totalky wrong...







Precape same as part 5

M sorry guys me bohot gayab rehne lagi hu aap sabko bohot pareshan krti m so sorry guys plzzz bear with me

So here is part 6 do tell me howz it m waiting for ur reviews

Love u all
Ramya






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Amazing
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Awesome update,loved ariya & ri-niti moments continue soon

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