Ariya ss 'MITWA-Ishq Pe Zor Nahi' PT 21 PG 88 11/01/19

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I know guys meri 3 stories chal rahi he or me ek or le kar aa gayi but what to do guys me rok nahi payi khudko ek thought mind me aaya or me bhi aa gayi aap sabke paas apni new ariya story leke hope jese aap meri baki stories ko pasand kar rahe he ise bhi karenge okiee so here we go...


Ariya ss "MITWA-Ishq Pe Zor Nahi"


Prologue


Its night time

We see ke ek gaadi chali aa rahi he but achanak se wo gaadi ruk jati he

Us gaadi me se ek aadmi bahar aata he

Man : dammit ise bhi abhi kharab hona tha"he said angrily"

He try to mend it but andhera kafi he or andhi tufan bhi aa raha he so wo thik se dekh nahi pata

At same time at some other place

We saw ek ladki apne luggage ke saath ek bus stop par khadi he

Its very late to waha koi bhi nahi he siwae us ladki ke

Tabhi waha do gunde type ladke aa jate he wo ladki un logo ko dekh dar jati he

N without waiting for a second the girl starts to run with her luggage

Seeing her running wo gunde bhi uske piche bhagne lagte he

Bhagte bhagte wo ladki waha aa jati he jaha wo aadmi apni gaadi thik kar raha he

That girl saw that man's back n a relief wash over her face

She immediately went towards that man

Hearing some sound at his back he turns but us aadmi ko kuch samjhne ka moka hi nahi milta or ek soft body uski baaho me hoti he

Jab wo ladki us aadmi ke paas jati he she immediately hug him out of fear

Wo aadmi us ladki ko kuch kahe isse pehle he saw that 2 goons

Use sari picture samjhme aa jati he ki kya ho raha he

That man to those goons

Man : koi pareshani he"with anger n his glare"

Dono goon ye aawaz sun kar dar jate he or jab us aadmi ka face dekhte he to unki hawa hi nikal jati he

Koi kuch kahe ya kare isse pehle wo dono goon waha se bhag jate he

The girl is still in that man's arm

That man : wo log chale gaye he

She immediately left him n says

Girl : he devi maiya aaj aap inhe nahi bejhti meri madat ke liye to mera kya hota thanku devi maiya isiliye to I love u so much muhaaa...

Wo aadmi amusingly us ladki ko dekh raha he

That girl see that wo aadmi use dekh raha he so she says

Girl : ohh silly me thank u aapne meri jaan bachai agar aaj aap nahi hote to pata nahi kya ho jata"said with fear"

Man : daro mat ab tum safe ho wese tum itni raat me esi sunsan jagah kya kar rahi ho or wo bhi itne saman ke saath"he ask her while raising his eyebrows"

Girl : wo me aaj hi Kolkata se aayi hu yaha nayi hu rasta bhatak gayi thi fir jake ek bus stop nazar aaya waha bus ka wait kar rahi thi but bus to nahi aayi wo dono aa gaye unse bhag rahi thi ki aap mil gaye once again thanku but meri ek baat samjh nahi aa rahi

Man : kya

Girl : wo dono aapko dekh ese ek dam se kyu bhag gaye jese koi bhoot dekh liya ho"with confusion written all over her face"

Uske face ke expression dekh us aadmi ke face pe smile aane lagti he but he controls n reply

Man : unke liye to bhoot hi hu me

Girl : kya matlab

Man : myself DCP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE

This is it for now do tell me guys ki kesa tha n one more thing guys agar meri story kisike bhi os ss ff se match ho rahi he to its just an coincident if any one have any kind of problem with my story do tell me m waiting for ur reviews

Love u all

Ramya 😊




INDEX


PART 1 # PAGE 5

PART 2 # PAGE 8

PART 3 # PAGE 11

PART 4 # PAGE 15

PART 5 # PAGE 22

PART 6 # PAGE 26

PART 7 # PAGE 32

PART 8 # PAGE 35

PART 9 # PAGE 38

PART 10 # PAGE 41

PART 11 # PAGE 43,44

PART 12 # PAGE

PART 13 # PAGE 51,52

PART 14 # PAGE 57

PART 15 # PAGE 61

PART 16 # PAGE 66

PART 17 # PAGE 72

PART 18 # PAGE 75

PART 19 # PAGE 81

PART 20 # PAGE 84

PART 21 # PAGE 88

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manasvi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow new story
don't worry ramya we are ready to read more n more
nice start
riya Kolkata se mumbai n direct arjun ki bahon mai he h
arjun amuse at her
arj is really bhoot for goons he he nice one
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super concept
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Sounds interesting nd promising

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Awesome concept
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Interesting start 👏
Wow... DCP Arjun suryakat rawte
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Superb start 👏
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting

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Originally posted by: sur1911

wow new story
don't worry ramya we are ready to read more n more
nice start
riya Kolkata se mumbai n direct arjun ki bahon mai he h
arjun amuse at her
arj is really bhoot for goons he he nice one
update soon
thanks for pm


thank u didu
this means alot😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krits67

Sounds interesting nd promising

Continue soon



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