ARIYA SS ZID Tere pyar ki part 11 on page 34 14/11

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Hi
I am bringing my second story that is
ZID tere pyar ki.
Hope you will like it.plz do read n tell me
Should I continue or not
This will be joint ss by me😊n mini di( sur1911)

Thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome kashu
New story on Ariya
Do continue soon
We all are always ready for new Ariya stories
Jaldi se update do 😃
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Character sketch

Acp sameer rathod - acting chief of etf. He is same as show .but no past.age 30

Sr insp Aisha kapoor - she is sr insp n arm n drug specialist of etf. Same as show .age 28

Sr insp Riya mukharjee - she is head of research dept and an uc specialist. Very well in gun handling. She has two personality one is herself n other is which she pretend. Her personality Reval as story progressed.age 26

Shreekant sen - he is tech expert n head of it dept of etf age 27

Chandrakant patil - he is commando of Etf. Same as show. Age 28

Lisa dcruz - forensic expert of etf .same as show. Age 26

Sakshi anand - crime journalist of etf .same as show. Age 26

Arjun or Asr - not a part of etf. No sad past as show. He is funloving n free spirit guy. Always crack jokes n healty flirt. Rest reval leter.age 27
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New ariya story. ..

Please jaldi se start karna. .

Kyuki ham hamesha ariya story read karne ke liye taiyaar rehte he.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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always ready for ariya stories
cont sooon
and awesome cs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cs mei arjun ko na dekh kr mai tu maar hi gyi thi šŸ˜‰
But thanx GOD last mei bata dia 😊 .
Nice concept.
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Nice cs kashu
Do update soon
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Originally posted by: sur1911

So update first part kashu


Yeah aaj hi dungi.you know na I am lazy bone.
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Part 1

Etf premises
Time 9:00 am

Sabhi log kam mai lage hai kal hi ek critical case solve kiya hai usi ka paper work kar rahe hai.

Shree chotu Aisha n sakshi apna apna kam kar rahe hai.itne mai riya enter hoti hai.

Ri - good morning every one

Sh - riya .tu kyu aai aaj tujhe to kal goli lagi thi na.

Ri - ohh shree tum bhi na humara to kam hi khatron se khelna hai. Or chot or goliyan to lagti rehti hai. Isme chutti lene ki kya baat hai.

Ch - par riya

Ri - ohh come on chotu.kaam karne

Sak - kitni rough n tough ho tum riya .

Ri - humari job hi aisi hai sakshi kya karne.

Ai - mera to ho gaya mai chali coffee lene. Kaun kaun lega

All - mujhe bhi chahiye

Ai - OK.

Kuch der mai sabhi apna kam complete kar lete hai. Or chit chat karte hai.

Sameer rathod enter

All - good morning sir

Sam - good morning

Ai - aapki meeting kaisi rahi sir.

Sam - acchi thi. So team as you know mai yaha ka acting chief hu. Kuch hi dino mai hume etf k new chief parth shakti join karne wale hai. N I'll be second in command


All - par q sir . humari team kitna accha to kar rahi hai apki leadership mai

Sam - thanku team .aap logo ka ye kehna hi kafi hai. Par etf ka chief additional dcp hi hoga .protocal hai. I hope ap new chief ko bhi aide hi support karenge. Or mai to hu hi.

All - yes sir.

Ch - are yar new chief

Ri - hmm rathod sir is nice chief

Sh - pata nhi WO kaise hinge

Ai - WO to unke ane k bad hi pata chalega

Li - ab rathod sir se high rank hai to koi aged or strict hi hoga. I mean jab rathod sir hi itne strict hai to.

Ch - matlab hum to gaye

Sak - Jo bhi ho aane do unhe hum bhi dekh lenge kaise hume pareshan karte hai.

Sh - ya unity is strength

Ri - shut up guys .hum yaha kam karne aate hai netagiri karne nahi. We are cops not teenager student.

N she left

Sak - yar iski problem kya hai. Ye itni professional q hai

Sh - or hasti to aise hai jaise govt ne sare tax isi par lagaye hai.

Li - hmm .sahi hai. Ise bas kam kam or kam hi sujhta hai.

Ch - 6 mon se humare sath hai.par hum use thik se jante bhi nhi bat bhi nhi large

Ai - Jo bhi bolo guys apne kam mai perfect hai.

All - yeah

At evening.

Sam - team there is another news .dcp parth nhi aa rahe hai. Ayenge bhi Ya nahi kuch keh nhi sakte. But kal se Hume new inspector arjun sr join karne wale hai.

All - OK sir

Sam leave
Sakree - wow no new chief .great n HiFi

At parking
Sam - Aisha Lisa chalo tumhe mai drop kar deta hu.

Shreetu - chale sakshi.

Sak - ya chalo.

All left.

Riya bhi apni bike se nikal jati hai.

Next day

All again in conference room .but aaj sab batien kar rahe hai .or riya sabko sun rahi hai.

Itne mai bahar se chikhne ki awaj aati hai sab waha jate hai

Waha riya ke department ki girl bani ko ek ladka waist se pakad k khada hai. Uski back in logon k samne hai. Wo dono khade hote hai.

Gi - thanks apne mujhe bacha liya warna mai to gir hi jati.

Man - ohh u r welcome Darling. Or agar mere hote hue tum gir jati to lanat mere hone par.

Gi - ohh you are so sweet.

Man - that's u also.

Sabhi use khade hokar muh kholkar dekh rahe hai . etf premises mai flirt.

Ri - excuse me who are you.

Man - hello beautiful lady. Kitni shoni ho tum ohh I'll call you shona.

Ri - you mind your language. Pehle batao kaun ho aap

Man - new posting .or bande ko arjun sr kehte hai. Asr for short.

Ai - ohh so you are new joining

Ar - yes mam .n straight himself.

Ri - bani yaha khadi hokar kya ghur rahi ho. Go back to work

Ba - ye yes mam.

Itne mai rathod

Ra - so insp arjun right

Ar - yes sir insp arjun reporting on duty sir. N salute him.

Ra - welcome to the team arjun. Let me introduce all. Ye aisha hai sr ins n arm n drug splt.

Ar - hello mam. Ai - hii.

Rat - ye chotu hai commando.

Ar - hii chotu. Ch - hii

Ra - shree tech exp

Ar - hey buddy . sh - hii

Rat - this is sakshi crime joun.

Ar - hii beautiful. Sak - hi asr

Ra - ye hai Lisa forensic exp

Ar - ohh hi gorgeous. Li - hii

Rat - or ye hai sr insp riya research dept head n uc specialist

Ar - hii shona.

Ri - excuse me .its riya only riya.

Ra - so feel comfortable arjun. Team inhe kam samjha do.

Sak to Lisa - kitna hot n handsome hai na kitne sal ka hoga.

Li - mujhe kya pata

Ar - 27 I am 27 year old.

Sh- ohh. I am also 27.

Ai - arjun apka cabin ready hone mai time laega .to rathore sir ne kaha hai aap riya k saath cabin share karenge .qki uska cabin bada hai.

Ri - par Aisha

Ai - rathore sir ka order hai riya.

Riya gusse mai apne cabin ki taraf jati hai par uska leg slip ho jata hai. Arjun use bich mai pakad leta hai.

Ri - tumhe kya bimari hai sabko pakadne ki

Ar - mai to help kar raha tha.

Ri - ab chodo bhi mujhe

Ar - OK.

He leave her n she slip on flore. But next sec she lift herself up. Sab apni hasi control karne ki koshish kar rahe hai.

Ri - you. Dekh lungi tumhe mai.

Ar - jab bhi tum chaho shona. Waise mai 24*7 itna hi handsome lagta hu.

Riya pair patakti hui gusse mai nikal jati hai.

Kaisa hai..pls tell me
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Nice update
Thanks for pm

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