New ss Kuch Panne Jindgi ke. part 13 on page 33 4/12 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nooo...diii

Please. ...Please. ...stop mat karna. ..

Manufacturer ke sath past me kya huva vo janna he abhi hame. ..

Baki story ki update bhi chahiye. ..

Please ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part7
Nice update

Thank god before wrong happen

Chotu saw the reality of nehal

Good friendship

Sorry for late
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii
I have just read this story and it is awesome
Plz discontinue mat karna and update the nxt part soon
The story is really vry interesting
Akair manu ka sath kya hua h aur sam ne aise kya kiya h jiska karan manu ki life spoil ho gayi h...
Waiting for ur nxt update
Send me pm also
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 13



manu cut call. she is very happy that sam call her. she think he want to spend time with her like childhood that's why he call her.

she get ready n run toward fort.

man - offo ye kunwar ji bhi na hume yaha bulwa liya .ye koi jagah hai milne ki bachpan ki tarah denu kaka k khet mai mil lete, khair jo bhi ho hum to aaj khub sari bt karne wale hai. are hum to pahuch bhi gaye.

she smile

ma - kunwarji kunwarji ,,kahan hai aap hum aa gaye..sahil sahil..

but here sahil is laying on floor unconscious . vikki wear sahil jacket n run from upper floor. manu only see his back.

ma - ohh ye sab is bandar ka plan hai humse chupan chupai (hide n seek) khel rahe hai..par hum bhi manasvi hai asani se dhund nikalenge.

she smile n go in that direction.

ma - sahil ,kunwar ji dekhiye ab majak mat karo yaha kitna andhera hai. hume dar lagta hai.

suddenly someone pulls her. she get afraid.kunwar ji.

vik - yaha koi kuwarji nahi hai.q sahil

jo - hmm..(he hummed as sahil)

vik - or aaj tum humari ho..

he try to force her ..she cried n try to protest alot. but they are very strong. she get a stone n hit one of them with it. n then other one n run ..

she is in bad condition she is crying, breathing hard n reach her house. her baba get shocked to see her like this. whole village come to her house bcoz many people see her running in bad condition . all get tensed n come to her house.

all ask her what happened . she cryingly told them all things. sam parents get angry on sahil. his mom hug manu j she cry more. n get faint.

at fort

vik - jojo bhag yaha se

jo - ek min

he take same stone n hit sahil with that .

vik - ye kya.

jo - are us ladki ko lagta hai sab isne kiya. or uske hisab se isne sahil par attack kiya. samjha tu..

both smile evilly n left place.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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after some time some villagers reach fort n find an unconscious n injured sahil there. all boil with anger n take him with them,

sahil gain conscious n find himself between panchayat of village. he feel pain on his head.

sah - aahh

he see toward his parents who is glaring him. he don't understand what happened.

sarpanch ji - dekhiye rathod sa jo apke bete ne manu k sath karne ki koshish ki hai na wo bahut galat hai. agar koi or hota to jinda nahi chodte..

sah - maine kya kiya??

dam- shut up sahil aaj tumhari wajah se hum kisi ko muh dikhane k kabil nahi .

sun - or bechari chori manu uska tune ye hal kiya. sharam ave hai manne thare ko apna beta kehte hue.

sah - par ma

sar - chup ek dum .ab ek hi rasta hai tumhare pas tumhe manu se shadi karni hogi wo bhi aaj rat ko. nahi to tum yaha.se jinda nahi ja paoge. manu jaan or maan hai is gaon ki.

n all go back to their home. preparation of marriage start

sah - damm ye sab unka dono ka kam hai .sale mujhe fasa kar chale gaye. or bechari mannu

bua - are mare ladeshwar ya wakhat us chori par daya khane ka nahi hai apni soch. tu karna chav hai ya byaah

sah - what bua sa mai abhi sirf 20 ka hu or shadi no way..

bua - to mahri bat man ,bhaisa bhabhi sa to thari sunne koni wale tu aisa kar sameer ki madad le. par ha use sach mat batana.

sah - matlab

bua - matlab hum use ye kahenge tune manu ko nahi manu ne thare ko bulawaya tha.or thare par humla kiya or khud ka hal bigad liya or rote hue aa gai.

sah - par ye galat hai manu acchi ladki hai. usne jhut nahi bola

bua - thare pas eki rasta hai ladeshwar ya to khud ko bacha le ya wa chori ko

sah - thik hai bua sa. par kuch gadbad to nahi hogi na.

tu chinta mat kar thari bua sa hai na sab sambhal lewengi..

she hug him..sometime later sam come n as per plan sahil n bua instigate him against manu. he get angry on manu so much for hurting sahil like this n scheming against him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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sam - sahil abhi mamla garm hai hum kuch kar nahi sakte. tu aisa kar bhag jaa yaha se.

sah - bhaisa

sam -tu chinta mat kar mai yaha sab sambhal lunga.tu ja bas.sahil tune koi galat kam to nahi kiya na

sah - nahi bahi sa sach mai maine manu k sath kuch nahi kiya apki kasam

sam nod n help him to run from there.

at evening.

all present at mandir of village n manu is with tara standing in bridal attire .but she is not in sence.

sar - sahil kaha hai

sam - sahil chala gaya yaha se . usne kuch galat nahi kiya . or bina kisi galti k wo saja nahi bhugtega samjhe aap.

dam - sameer ye apne sahi nahi kiya

sam - baba sa ap apne bete ki jagah is ladki ki bat par yakeen kar rahe hai.

manu look at sam with so much hurt. that she become this girl from manu for him.he is accusing her for what happened .

n he fought with all for sahil n justified him n accusing manu. she hurt beyond limit .she faint bcoz its unbearable for her.

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sam - maine uski life barbad kar di ,use us bat k liye itna bura bhala kaha jisme wo khud victim thi. apni maut k waqt sahil ne bataya ki usne jhut kaha tha or uske doston ne kis tarah ye sab kiya. or mai apni hi najron mai gir gaya.wo ladki mujhpar itna trust karti thi ,mujhe har dukh mai sabse pehle pukarti thi or maine kya kiya use nark si jindgi jeene ko chod aya or apna sapna pura karne mai lag gaya.maine use dhundne ki koshish ki pata nahi wo kaha hai kis hal mai hai. wo us hadse k bad kabhi gaon nahi ayi to kisi ko kuch nahi pata.kaha hai wo arjun kaha dhundu use..

he cry n arjun put his hand on sam shoulder . their phone ring n its a case so both come in cop mode n go for case.


two days later

from two days they were hell busy in a case n after that case they are honoured with medal today.all are so much happy.

somewhere in city

kamal - us arjun ne humare political carrier ko barbad kar diya , humare bete ko jel pahuchaya ab uski saja use milegi.gupta sab intjam ho gaya hai na

gup - ji sir

kam - ha ha ha ab ayega maja. arjun rawte bahut pyar karta hai na apni biwi se. ab kya jawab dega use or khud ko..

scene shift

etf enter in hotel all dressed in black suit n white shirt. all looking handsome atlast riya enter in black saree looking so beautiful . her heel stuck in carpet n she is about to fall but one pair of arms catch her in mid. she look at him in his deep black eye, who is showing concern for her. he make her stand n she thanks him.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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shreetu take ri with them

sh - wow ri aaj fir tere arjun sir ne tujhe girne se bacha liya .

ch - ri i shapat kya romantic scene tha.

ri - chup karo koi sun lega, or tum log jante ho na ye possible nahi. wo roshni se pyar karte hai aaj bhi. or.unka pyar bahut gehra hai. tumhe pata hai us bandage k nice kya hai roshni ka nam or us par chaku se kat diya gaya hai.

sh - sacchi mai ,

ri - hmm..sir unse bahut pyar karte hai. you know what ,wo jitna unse pyar karte hai na uska ek percent bhi mujhse karen to mai jindgi bhar koi dua na mangu. par aisa nahi hoga i know. par fir bhi mai unse kuch nhi chahti. bs wo sukun se rahe chahe wo sukun unhe roshni ki yado se milta ho.

they are talking abt their life n here some one spike arjun drink . n waiter ask him to come reception . he follow him. waiter run from there. n suddenly phone of reception start ringing. he wait for someone to pick but noone is there. so he pick it

ar - hello

smeone cry on phone

os - plz plz help me room no 308

n phone get cut.he rush toward room no 308. but till than he get unconscious bcoz of drink.

here in party four of them search foe him

sam - ye arjun kaha gaya.

waiter - sir wo arjun sir ko koi phone aya or wo chale gaye ,unhone kaha unhe phone na kare

they think may be he goes for some info.

tbc...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update di.
Naive manu blinded by love.
Sahil's friends are so cheap. Disgusting.
Really cunning minds sahil ko bhi fasa diya.
Poor manu. The panchyat should have been more careful and they must have listened to sahil once before passing judgement.
OMG yeh bua toh dangerous hai.
Loved sam's parents for supporting manu. But sam ...even he did the same mistake. Its pathetic that the persons who r not at fault were getting punished for a crime they didn't do. But now this guilt is eating him up from inside. Thank god arjun is there to support him.
What the hell r kamal and his gang planning now??
Gud that arjun and riya are coming closer. Riya's love is so unconditional but it seems arjun is getting attracted to her each passing day.
Hope etf candle handle kamal and protect themselves and sam and manu meet each other.
Yeh sab kya hai?? Why did they spike arjun's drink?? His dignity is in grave danger, it seems.
Thanks for updating di. Lovely story with lots of twists.
Will wait to see what happens next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
oh my manu victim ke bajay kudh hi criminal ban gayi
sameerneuspar vishwaas nahi kiya
ab yeh kya arjun par bhi jhootha ilzaam lagane ki taiyaari mein hai log
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome updated
loved it
hmm what r kamal n gang gonna do wiz arjun
plz cont soon

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