New ss Kuch Panne Jindgi ke. part 13 on page 33 4/12 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it .so sweet she is so rough n caring he is
saman bonding n relation is so nice
but he always blast on her n she always take blame on herself
but he can't see her in pain but unfortunately he himself give him that
his ma also praise n adore her so much
so he is coming after 5 year
both are excited to meet each other
pls update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
baap re baap sameer ka gussa
arjun se bhi zyaada hai😆
lekin yeh sameer aur manasvi ki love story mein sahil kaise mara?
cont soon
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part11
Superb update
Love it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updated
loved it
hmm loved mansi
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww manasvi loves sam
wondering what he did with her
oh gosh samjun's gussa uff kuch nhi ho sakta
awesome update
cont sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 12



that evening sahil come bansipur with his two friends jojo n vishal by open jeep.

They are passing throw a beautiful lake n see two girl are running one is chasing other n the one who is running first tease second one n laugh whole heartily

Trio lost in her smile n beauty sahil admire her n his friend eyeing her with lust.

They here their fun fight

Beautiful girl - tara pakad kar dikhao hume or le lo jijaji ka gift wapas.

Tara - chodungi nahi tujhe manu ki bacchi ,de mere shikher ji ka gift .

Manu - khud le kar dikhao warna ye humara hua

Tara face fall n she sit on lake bank with sad face. Manu com n forward her gift

Man - hum to majak kar rahe the tara ye lo.

Tara smile n both hug n left

Sah - omg ye to chuhiya manasvi hai, mujhe nahi pata tha badi hokar itni khubsurat ho jayegi.

Vis - tu janta hai ise

Sah - haa meri bachpan ki dushman cum dost hai

Jojo - badi khubsurat hai yar or uski awaj to

Sah - control dost hai meri wo kuch aisaa waisa mat sochna or agar bhai sa k aage usse kuch bola bhi na to single piece mai nahi jaa paoge.

Vi - tere bhaisa ki gf hai wo

Sah laugh - bhaisa ki gf to unki aane wali wardi hogi, kisi ladki e hone chance kam hai ,haa par wo or manu bachpan se close friend hai ,or bhaisa use lekar bahut caring or protective hai . kabhi kabhi to mai bhi usse jalne lagta hu mere bhai saa ka attention mujhse divert kar deti hai.

Jojo- ohh chal ek ek cigarete ho jaye

Sa h - jab tak hum yaha hai no smoking n drinking samjhe tum log

Vijo- ok baba

( sahil is not a bad guy just his company is very bad , even he don't know how much his friends are devil)

They reach haweli n all welcome them.

Sahil n manu collide with each other

Saman - sorry

N see each other n sahil recognize her

Sah - no sorry galti teri thi chuhiya urf bhutni

Manu also recognize him n glare him

Man- nahi hum bhi sorry wapas lete hai galti tumhari thi bandar

Now both smile to each other n smile turn into laugh.

Sah - kaisi hai manu

Man -hum to bahut acche hai tum kaise ho,

Sah - accha hu or ab to tu bhi hai tujhse ladunga to or accha ho jaunga

Both smile n left for their work n vijo stare her from top to bottom


At night all are sleeping , manu is sitting near window of her room which is facing street . she is waiting for her kunwarji to come ( manu dadaji n sama mama house is side by side n he has to pass her house before going to his house_)

At 2 o clock his sam come with his bhaisa who went to receive him

Manu get very happy

Man - offo amrish bhaisa samne se hatiye na hume humare kunwarji ko dekh to lene dijiye

She request slowly but they enter haweli n she only see his back

Man - shivji ye galat bat hai aapki hum kunwarji ko dekh bhi nahi paye
she pout n lay on bed n sleep after some time

next morning

she quickly finish her work n get ready n left for marriage house , but today just to see her kunwarji

she is looking beautiful in pink n light green lehnga chunni.

Asha - manu aa gayi tu accha hai kab se tujhe dhund rahi thi , ja or maharaaj ji ko aaj kya banega bata de , ek tu hi hai jo un maharaj ji acche se sabki pasand samjha sakti hai, or haa sameer banna bhi aa gaye hai na to unki pasand ka bhi banwa lena

Manu with extra smile - ji kaki sa

She go to kitchen n tell majaraaaj ji to make all dishes specially sam fav dishes

She is searching for him but he is no where
Sulochna see her n smile

Su - lado sameer ko dhund rahi ho

Man - haa kakisa dekhiye na humse mile bhi nahi ,lagta hai wo bhul gaye hume n she pout

Tabhi

Are bhala mai apni mithi ko kaise bhul sakta hu.

She turn n see him looking at her with smile, she look at him n her smile bigger

Man - kunwar ji aap aa agye , kaise hai aap, or apki ips ki padai kaisi chal rahi ahi, delhi mai kaisa lagta hai aapko, are aap kuch bol q nahi rahe

He just looked at her amusedly n she looked at him confused why he is not talking with her.

Sam - ab tum hume bolne dogi to hum bolenge na mithi

She lightly hit her head with her hand n make sorry face

Man - sorry hum bhi na kunwarji pure pagal hai,aap boliye

N they talk more n moe then busy in marriage prepration

Next day

Sahil n sam talking with each other manu come with food for them

Sah- kya bat hai manu tu to badi samajhdar ho gayi humare liye khana layi

Manu - tere liye nahi pagal kunwar ji k liye

Sah - par mai bhi khaunga samji tu bandariya ,

N they start fight n sam shout n both laugh n sam move his head in disbelief.

Just then come one collide with manu n she hit on floor

Sam angerily - tum dekh kar nahi cahl sakte the

He run n give his hand to manu

worker- mafi sa galti ho gayi hum jaldi mai the

Manu - koi bat nahi bhaisa aap jaiye

He left immediately

Sam - manu tum thik ho

Man- hum thik hai kunwar sa ,ahaa

She cant walk properly n yell in pain, he pick her n make her sit on khat (bed)

Sam - lao dikhao mujhe

Man - nahi kunwarji aap humare pair nahi pakad sakte

Sam - or aisa q

Man - bas nahi ,hume accha nahi lagega

Sam - comeon mithi mai tumhare pair ashirwad k liye nahi chu raha balki treat kar raha hu ab or ek shabd nahi

She quite bcoz he told her warningly ,he twist n turn her leg n now its fine

Man -are waah kunwar ji aap to jadugar ho ye to theek ho gaya

Sam smile n left n she is lostly looking at his back

Next nignt

Marrige is happening, manu is happily doing all work n all look at her affactionately , sam look at her admireingly n friendly love, sahil has attraction toward her n two people look at her with lust in their eyes.

All are busy in maarriage ritual n enjoying. All praise mansvi but here is one person who don't like her n that is sam's buasa.

Buasa - ye ladki na mare liye khatra hai.sameer ko kaise dekhti hai or sameer bhi ise ghana manta hai .or bhabhisa to kaise lado lado karke ghumti rehti hai,isse pehle wo sameer k liye ise pasand kar le mujhe kuch karna hoga qki sameer ki shadi mahre jhet sa ki beti rupa se hi honi chahiye tabhi meri dono taraf ijjat bhi rahegi or sab meri sunenge bhi. Or rupa us ghar ki badi bahu banegi to sameer bhi meri mutthi mai rahega or sahil to waise hi meri mutthi mai hai .

Next day vijo take sahil with them to a fort n forcefully make him drink

Vi - mujhe lagta hai sahil tujhe manasvi se pyar ho gaya hai

Sah - nahi bas attraction hai yar (in talli tone ) or waise bhi wo dost hai meri

Jo - par kitni khubsurat hai or dost ko gf banane mai kya harj hai ,sab tujhse jalenge agar teri itni khubsurat gf hogi,le thoda or pi

They make him drink more n more n he lost his sense n they instigate him to call her

Sahil call her

Sah - mannu

Man- sahil tu, or teri awaj ko kya hua

Sah - kuch nahi , tu yaha aaja kile par kuch bat karni hai

Man - dekh mai nahi aa rahi ,jo bhi bolna hai yaha aa fir bat kar lenge

Sah - wo bhaisa tujhse akele mai bat karna chahte hai

Man - kya sach (happily)

Sah - hmm. jaldi aa unhe fir amrish bhaisa k sath jana hai

Man - hmm bas 10 min mai aayi.

She cut call happily.but she is not aware that sam left with amrish for some imp work.

She happily getting ready ,sahil sit on floor not in sense n vijo smrik evilly.

Tbc...

Precap :-last part of sam fb , what happen with manu n how sam ruin her life for which he is guilty..

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
imp note

hello everyone

I am very disappoint with your response on my some stories. so I decided not to continue them bcoz I think you are not liking them including this one so here is list

kuch panne jindgi ke
humsafar
gharana
Hume ana padega duniya mai dobara
ariya the love saga.

I am going to give last try to these story I will continue only them whom receive atleast sufficient response. I have already give update of humsafar n kpjk
today I'll also give update of gharana n hapdmd .

if I get proper response on them then I'll continue otherwise I'll discontinue them. sorry but now all depend on you .I'll accept your response as your decision

thanks

PS - buddies who regularly response on my all story plz don't include yourself in this . I am very greatful for all your support. n my heartily thanks to you.

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
plsss don't discontinue the story...I love to read them
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice love it thnx for pm cont soon hey plz don't discontinu yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update di..
continue soon..
thanks for PM.
don't discontinue your stories..

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