Ariya SS:: Manmarjiyaa completed on 21/02

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Hello everyone I'm starting this new ss on Ariya which is completed with me...
I'm posting first part today rest depends on your response...
guys do leave your feedback and hit the like button if you find it worthy ...

Story line:: Sakshi is in love with arjun...where arjun thinks his cousin karan and bade papa r resposible for Roshni's death along with sikander...

So in his revenge he was spoiling Riya's life by hurting her making plan with sakshi who is riya's stepsister...

Riya was getting married to karan as he loves her when arjun and sakshi hurted riya to fullfill their motive without anyones notice breaking her...

now story progress with how arjun comes to right path with riya besides him...

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PART 1

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Nafrato Me Mili Tu Mujhe Iss Tarah...
Dil Ye Sabhal Na Saka...


"Aaah!" He groaned loudly clutching his head frustratingly.

"No...No...You can't be affected by her tears. NO Dam It!"

Picking up flower vase he flunked it towards wall breaking it into pieces.


The images of her crumbled on road crying hysterically cursing him were making him restless.

From the time he came back from Mukherji Mansion he wasn't at peace. His mind kept him reminding of her state that was because of him.

He was responsible for her state. Instead of feeling happy over his success of finally breaking her spirit, her courage the feeling overpowering his senses was of guilt. He was feeling guilty.

The great Arjun Rawte who had stopped feeling anything except sheer hatred after losing his best friend because of his so-called family, after years was feeling something. For a mere girl who was his target whom he was using for taking revenge from those who were reason of his agony.

He was like burning fire who knew only one thing...that is TO BURN... burn everything coming in your way until you consume it or it consumes you!

After Roshni he was only breathing for making Karan and his bade papa's life hell.

He wanted them on their knees, defeated, helpless, the way he was in past without any fault. Only mistake he did that he loved someone extremely. He loved her so much that he forgot difference between right and wrong.

He loved her so much that he became blind in his anger to hurt an innocent life. He dragged someone who had nothing to do with this and punished her for others deeds.

"You wanted this Arjun. Now you cannot back out." His mind reasoned.

"But she is not at fault, why you are making her suffer?" His heart asked.

"I was also not at fault also, still I suffered and I'm still." His mind said.

"That does not mean you will punish others for it." His heart said to him.

"STOP! Just stop it!" He screamed loudly.

"I know by doing all this to her I'm not going to get my happiness back but I'll get peace. Peace that's what I want for my restless heart."

His voice boomed in empty apartment that belongs to him. No one was there to hear his voice.

Picking up bottle from drink counter he drank whole bottle in a one stroke to stop sound of her cries ringing in his ears, the images of her lifeless, pale face, her accusing eyes haunting him and the battle his mind and his still sane heart was having at the moment.

He drank and drank until his mind went black and he could feel nothing but the numbness, only numbness clouding his senses.

His eyelids felt too heavy to keep open. Still he was trying to keep them open. He picked his 5th bottle to finish by trembling hand. The alcohol had affected his system leading him to drowsiness, before it could reach his lips he collapsed on floor with the bottle breaking into pieces besides his unconscious body.

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Edited by muktai - 9 years ago
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PART TWO



"Teri Baato Me Hai Ajab Sa Nasha
Badli Ye Manmarjiya..."



"I can't do this anymore to her." Arjun took his decision.


After lot of internal battle his heart won screaming he has to stop hurting Riya. In his revenge from culprits he has not right of hurting an innocent soul. He himself did not understand why her tears were affecting him. Why he felt restless by hurting her.



His stubborn nature was not letting him see the fact that though he had shut down every feeling Riya's words, her nature, everything related to her had made place in his heart unknowingly.



Labelling it under sympathy he decided to leave her alone. Arjun change his plan of action. He will make Vishesh and bade papa pay the price of their deeds but not on her account. He will not play with her feelings anymore.




He knew the pain when someone plays with your feelings and pushes into the darkness to suffer alone. How it feels to be away from your love.


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"Arjun...Aap ye kya keh rahe hai?"(What are you saying Arjun?) Sakshi was stunned when Arjun told her his decision.




In morning she received text from him saying he wants to meet her and talk about Riya. She thought it's about any new plan so she hurriedly came to meet him hiding from her family in temple where they usually discuss everything.




Here what he told her shocked her, moreover agitated her. She was furious beyond limit but more than that she was worried for herself. How she will get Vishesh if Arjun broke their partnership?




"Wohi jo tum sun chuki ho."(I said what you have heard!) Arjun replied calmly. He knew he have to handle situation very calmly.




His one wrong move and he won't be able to handle the consequence. As he knew how madly in love Sakshi was with him.



Love! It can lead to destruction when crosses the line of sanity and become obsession. He can very well see Sakshi at that.




As a payback to her, he can at least bring her back from that point. Apart from Riya he doesn't want to be reason of Sakshi's pain.



Life has been so unfair to him, pushing him in pit of hurt, torment and pain that he don't want them to suffer even a single percent of that phase.



"Sakshi... Meri baat samjhne ke koshish karo. Mai Riya ko kabhi takleef nahi dena chahta tha, par wo mere raaste me aa gayi aur majbooran mujhe uske saath..."
(Sakshi...try to understand...I never wanted to hurt Riya, but she hersekf came in my way so I was helpless...So I did all that)




"In sab me tumhe bhi maine shamil kar diya. Par ab bas! Aur nahi, Mai dusra rasta dhund lunga meri manjil tak pohchne ka... akele"
(In all this, I involved you too...Enough! Not anymore! I will find another way to reach my goal...all alone.)




"Ab Riya ko koi dard nahi hona chahiye na meri wajah se aur na tumhari!"
(Now Riya should not face any pain. Not because of me, neither because of you!)



Arjun said every word slowly yet so dominantly leaving no space for further argument.




Sakshi left the place wordlessly. Arjun just hoped she understands this. The Sakshi he knew was not one who will agree this easily still he wished she does. If she doesn't then he was afraid for her.



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This is dedicated to harshita...thanku for being there always...

Thank u for reading and your feedback on previous part...
do let me know your thoughts on this...pm after completion of story...

Edited by muktai - 9 years ago
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PART THREE



Daastan Ek Nayi...
Khawbaon Pe Saji...
Bekaid Manmarjiya...




After Sakshi left, Arjun too stood up to leave the place only to get halted in his steps.




Those accusing eyes which made him change his decision were right in front of him boring in his as if can look through them to his insides reading his every thought.


Today they were not accusing him; they were showing some different emotions, he was not able to figure out.




Soon recovering from his initial shock he tried to cover up when she told him that she knows the truth.




Confusion clouded his mind how the hell she found out?




If she knows the reality then what she is doing alone? Wasn't she supposed to be with everyone exposing him?




The Riya he have known from past month was a living siren. Always ready to jump into problems for solving them not caring if it's hers or others and brings truth in front of everyone not caring how results would be taken?

"Riya...I..." First time Arjun was speechless.


"Aapko lagta hai Roshniji aapko iss tarah dekh kar khush hogi?"
(Do you think Roshni will be happy seeing you this way?) Riya asked him straight staring deep in his eyes without beating around bush.


Arjun who was expecting bombardment of questions was stunned when out of the blue she asked this.




How on earth she got to know about Roshni. Wait a second she knows about Plan too. How possibly this could happen? Perhaps Sakshi told. But I never mentioned this to her, then?


Arjun was staring her when his mind flooded with questions.


"Mai ye kaise janti hu ye jaroori nahi Arjun. Aur mai sach me khush hu ki aapne Sakshi ko sahi rasta dikhaya par aapka kya Arjun? Aap iss tarah RoshniJi ko insaf dilane ke liye galtiyo pe galtya kiye jaa rahe ho, uska kya?"
(How I know this is not important Arjun. And I am truly happy that you showed Sakshi right path...What about you Arjun? For giving justice to Roshni your doing mistakes after mistakes, what about that?)


Riya said breaking his trance, her voice heavy with emotions. The fact her very own sister was behind this was very hard to take though she forgave her for her deeds without any apology from Sakshi's end.


"Aapne kabhi soacha hai Roshni ko kitni takleef hoti hogi aapko yu dekh kar? Unhe kitna dard..."
(Have you ever thought what Roshni feels seeing you this way? How much pain...)


Riya's word halted when Arjun grabbed her by her arms pulling her roughly. He was bearing her every word knowing he deserves them but he lost it when she brought Roshni's name again and again and talked about her feeling pain because of his deeds. He saw red. Image of Roshni coated in her own blood lying lifelessly in his arms flashed in front of his eyes.


"SHUT UP! JUST SHUT UP!" He roared at her.

He continued looking in her eyes through gritted teeth.

"Dard? Dard janti ho kya hota hai?"
(Pain? Do you know what pain is?)

" Mujhse pucho apne pyaar ko apne aakho ke samne tadpkar marta hua dekhar kya mehsoos hota hai? Kitna dard hota hai? Pichle 5 saal se wo pal aaj bhi mere samne waisa hi hai. Wo dard mere sine me hai. Aur mai us dard ki wajah ko kaise maaf kar sakta hu? Nahi...nahi kar sakta."
(Ask me how it feels to see your love dying in front of your eyes? How much it pains? That scene is still fresh after years, that pain is still same in my heart. How can I forgive the reason of that? No...I can't! )


"Karan aur bade papa ko iski saja milke rahegi. Chahe phir wo rasta sahi ho ya galat. Agar ye baat tum unhe jakar bataana chahti ho to beshak jao. Par isse mai darke piche nahi hatunga."
(Karan and bade papa will get punishment for their deeds. No matter which path I chose. If you want to tell them this, then go tell them, but I won't back out. )




"Iss baar vaar samne se hoga. Roshni ko sukoon milega jab mai uske gunahgaro ko saja dunga. SAMJHI TUM?"
(This time attack will be from front. Roshni's soul will rest in peace when her culprits will get their punishments. Do you get this?)


He jerked her body away from himself freeing her afraid of doing something worse as his anger spiked through his nerves achieving highest of its peak.


Riya stumbled back on her feet with the force he left her. She could feel pain in his voice. She could see the broken Arjun behind this mask of anger, revenge.




She came to know about Arjun and Sakshi plotting behind every wrong thing happened till now before two days. She was heartbroken by truth. Her Sakshi did this, was bitter truth she have known ever.




She wanted to confront her, asked her why she did this? If she wanted Arjun then, when she denied? Sakshi in the first place brought her close to Arjun when she was denying him. Perhaps she hated me so badly to hurt me this much thought Riya.



With this she thought she had gone to Sakshi when she saw Sakshi's breakdown where she was confessing her love for Arjun and asking forgiveness for hurting everyone just to get Arjun back.



That's when Riya realized Sakshi had only walked on wrong path but at heart she was her old self who was overshadowed by her love for Arjun whom she can bring back. That won't be easy neither it will be hard. She has to just deal things patiently.


She had one more important matter in her hand. She knew she can handle Sakshi with help of her family but what about the one who was against his family, who was committing sins after sins in his misconception.


Yes misconception! He was living with the misconception that his bade papa and Karan were responsible for Roshni's death along with Sikandar when the truth was her own father killed her. Being person with orthodox mentality he himself killed his own flesh brutally, not for once caring about his own daughter's happiness, dreams.


Riya got to know this from Roshni's Mother. Roshni's mother turned out to be Riya's mother's childhood friend. When she visited their place for blessing Riya, she broke down in front of Sharmishtha telling her bitter truth behind her daughter's death.


Both the ladies didn't knew, there was one person listening their talks. Riya who have rushed to her Ma for something have overheard their conversation accidently. Latter she got to know its Arjun who was Roshni's love, when Arjun had come along with Karan to their place. There Roshni's Mother identified him as Roshni's best friend. Riya got to know about Arjun being the same person who was in love with Roshni when Roshni's mother was crying over fate for losing daughter and Arjun who was like son to her.


All the pieces fell into their places with this. Connecting dots Riya come to the conclusion of Arjun being the mastermind.

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Edited by muktai - 9 years ago
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PART 4



Riya stood wordlessly staring Arjun's back, her eyes moistening seeing him in so much pain. She could clearly see his turmoil, could feel his pain and that left her pure heart in tranquillity of telling him the truth.


Truth that will shatter the already broken man, truth that will tear him apart and leave him with guilt, guilt of living in illusion for so long, guilt of hurting people who were not at fault.


From his and Sakshi's earlier conversion she came to know how much guilty he already was for making her suffer. How will he react when he will know in his conception he was going to ruin his family? He was going to punish those people who were genuinely regretting for their earlier behaviour towards him, her heart going out for him thinking about his condition when she will tell him the bitter truth.


Riya knew no words from her can make Arjun believe her. No theory or proof of hers will make him understand her point. After all 5 years is very long time.



"Arjun" Riya called out him softly trying once.



"LEAVE" Arjun's thundering voice rang in her ears. This girl was hell bent on making him lose his mind. He closed his eyes in frustration trying to calm his bubbling anger without turning back..


He wants her out of his life at that very moment.

He opened his eyes when he felt someone keeping hand on his shoulder. Last thing he wanted is pity by anyone. Jerking that hand he turned around to give her piece of her mind when his words choked in his throat.


There stood Roshni's Mother in front of him.


His eyes widen in shock. He has not seen her after Roshni's death. He was too ashamed to face her thinking he failed to protect Roshni. Indirectly he was reason behind that incident.


How can he face the woman who showered him with motherly love, trusted him with future of her beloved daughter?


His head hung down, shoulder slumped at the very moment his eyes collided with hers. His caramel eyes looked down tearing up at the helpless situation he was in.


He fisted his palm. His chest tightened with the guilt and heart sinking with the very familiar sadness.


He stood there not knowing what else to do!


Riya left the place giving space to them knowing very well that they need time for sorting everything and she has no right of interfering in their personal matter.
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PART FIVE


"Khwaisho Pe Likhi Dil Ki Ye Arjiya...
Kaisi Ye Manmarjiya..."




Riya returned to same place after an hour when she received text from Roshni's mother asking her to be with Arjun as she is leaving for her home and have told him everything in hope he will understand and believe her.


Riya's eyes instantly filled with tears as she saw the image of broken man in front of her. She stood there, few feet away from him, just staring at him.


Arjun was sitting on bench placed there, with his head downcast. His palms fisted on either side of his body as if trying to control himself.


She didn't know what happened. Did he believe? Did he accept the truth?


His shoulders shook little indicating he is trying hard to not cry. As she stood there she saw few tears falling from his eyes. Riya at that moment realized, he indeed accepted the truth.


Slowly advancing towards him, she cautiously sat beside him. Riya herself was confused on how to console him.


They just sat silently one trying to figure out how to handle situation and other in remorse of spending so much of time in misconception.


Riya kept her palm over his fist trying to give some strength to him and find some for her too.


Riya was stunned when suddenly Arjun turned at hugged her.

She felt something wet over her shoulder realising he is crying. He soon broke into loud sobs, his body shuddering with its intensity.


Sensing his need of comfort Riya wounded her arms around him after a moment of hesitation.


Riya's heart broke into pieces as his sobs increasing with passing time with incoherent mumblings something like sorry, guilt and other which she was unable to hear and frame.


Riya let him cry knowing very well that this is needed giving away the time he has been living in the illusion of his misconception. Now he needs to let it out of him. The truth has indeed shaken him. He was crying miserably.


The fact that he was going to ruin so many lives in his now so called revenge that he was going to hurt his loved one because of his misconception. Those people, who accepted him, cared for him; he was on verge of destroying them. He almost has destroyed Riya's life yet she helped him. She brought him to right path. This realization added more guilt to him who was already feeling like killing himself out of guilt.


Time passed and there were no sign of him stopping, so Riya slowly pulled herself back and holding his hands in hers made him look towards herself.


"Arjun, Please Sambhaliye apne apko. Mai janti hu ye mushkil hai par namumkin toh nahi. Waqt har ghav ko bhar deta hai, Mai janti hu ye Sach janne ke bad aapko aur bhi jyada dard ho raha hoga ye sochkar ki aap apne hi parivar ko tabah karne wale the bina kisi kasoor ke, hai na?" She said as if trying to convince a child.


Arjun nodded affirmatively surprised at how easily she understood his thoughts.


"Par Arjun aap ye to soacho ke waqt rehte aapko sach pata chal gaya. Aapke pass ab aapki galtiya sudharne ka mouka hai. Shyad RoshniJi bhi yhi chahti thi isiliye aaj ye baat aapke samne aayi hai." She continued softly.


"Toh ise apni galtiya sudharne ka ek mouka samajh lijiye aur uska sahi use kariye Arjun, RoshniJi ke liye...aur khud ke liye bhi!"


He tried saying something might be his apology when Riya nodded her head in denial.



"Mujhse maafi mangne ki jaroorat nahi hai Arjun. Mai aapko pehle hi maaf kar chuki hu...Aur ha ye maine kisi sympathy ki wajah se nahi kiya ye maine us insaan ke liye kiya jise apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya tha aur usne aaj usse sudharne ki koshish ki...dil se" Riya said to him not wanting him to apologize.



Arjun just stared at her. How could someone be so kind, so mature, so understanding at this young age? She is for sure from some other place because in this cruel world he hasn't seen someone as her. She is such an angel.


Despite of him doing so wrong to her, she did her best to do right to him.


She entered in his life and changed everything for good, preventing him from committing sins.


"Toh Arjun ab umeed karti hu aap kabhi galat raasta nahi apnaoge...Aur agar aisa kiya to iss baar mahila mukti morche se aapko koi nahi bacha payega..." Riya said trying to lighten the heavy situation.


Arjun stared her face before his lips curved into smile and soon he broke into laughter?


Mahila mukti morcha?

Seriously?


Riya was lost in his laughter. He looked so cute while laughing, her own lips curved up in beautiful smile.


Arjun stopped when he realized what he just did. Moment before he was burdened with guilt and now he felt so light weighted with her talk and seeing her smile which pleasantly surprised him.


"Riya mujhse dosti karogi?" Arjun asked after silence of few minutes.



Riya looked towards him and his stretched hand with blank face.



Arjun took her silence as denial. His face fallen at that, soon covering it he said that's okay he didn't deserve it when Riya smilingly held his hand and announced her acceptance.



The setting sun witnessed the new blooming relation of friendship between two people. In past one was hell bent on breaking other while in present other has mended the broken one.



They still had many things to look after. But the baggage of past was now slowly fading away. So much would have been changed for worst, but now things will be better. At least that's what they hoped.


Ek taraf Riya ki manmarjiyo ne use Arjun ki madat karne ke liye majboor kiya, aur dusri taraf Arjun ki manmarjiyo ne Arjun ko khudka raasta badal ne par!
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Edited by muktai - 9 years ago
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pms after complition of story
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Jaha Ariya Waha Hum.. Plz, next part super soon..
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Wow again ariya story, Nice story and concept. Conti s0on
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Awsm storyline mukta
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