ARIYA SS JANE ANJANE RISHTE. THREAD 2 LINK AT PAGE 1

Hii..this is sur .its my sec story n first on ariya..I am writing it on suggestion of kumkum88 .I hope you all like it. So all ariya lovers here it goes Jane anjane rishte

prolouge
Kabhi kabhi lagta hai maine apna sab kuch kho diya hai.koi rishta nhi bacha ab jeene k liye.sikander ko to mar dia maine or roshni ki maut ka badla bhi le liya hai.ab kya bacha hai meri jindgi mai.q chal rahi hai meri saanse.q lagta hai jaise koi hai jise intzar hai mera .jaise kuch Jane or kuch anjane rishte mujhe awaj de rahe hai.kya karu kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha.kitni ajeeb bat hai na sabko samjhane wale acp arjun suryakant rawte ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Kis raste par ja raha hu mai.
Yuhi chalte chalte arjun ko sadak ke kinare par ek ghar najar ata hai.waha aag lagi hoti hai.arjun daud kar us taraf jata hai waha bed par ek ladki bandhi hui hai.arjun use chuda kar bahar lata hai or use dekh kar chunk jata hai
R I Y A


Character sketch.
Arjun sameer ayesha Chotu shree Liza sakshi and riya (she is alive)



THREAD 3

Thanks 4 ariya story
Awesome concept
Continue soon

Part 1
Arjun ko thodi der kuch samajh nhi at a kya ho raha hai. Fir thoda sambhalkar wo riya ko utha lar hospital ki taraf daudne lagta hai
In hospital
Arj- Dr plz kuch bhi karke isko bacha lijiye plz
Dr- ap wait kijiye mai dekhta hu.
Arjun POV :- Tumhe jinda dekhkar khush hu riya . par tumhari ye halat Delhi nahi ja rahi .kisne kiaya ye sab or q .kitni buri tarah torture kia gaya hai . par riya jinda ye kaise hua or ab tak kaha thi .or mujhe itni restlessness q feel ho rahi hai q..hope wo thik ho jaye aise nhi dekh sakta use.
Itne mai Dr: dekhiye Mr..
Ar- arjun arjun nam hai mera.
Dr - Mr arjun patient ab khatre se bahar hai but unhe bahut buri tarah se torture kia gaya hai .wo ab tak kinda hai ye koi miracle hai ya unki strong will power. Maine unhe treat kar dia hai..par kab take puri theek ho pyengi keh nhi sakta.
Ar- kya mai use mil sakta hu.
Dr- wo hosh mai nahi hai.ap baith sakte hai unke pas.
Arjun riya ke room mai ja kar bed k side mai stool lekar baith jata hai. Riya ko dekhkar uski condition dekh kar arjun ki ankhe bhar ati hai Jane kab tak uske ansu behte hai use hi khud pata nahi.bahar se sound ane par uska Terence tutta hai.
Ar- ye mujhe kya hua mai ro raha hu.q .kya riya ke liya par q. Rosh ki death k bad aj tak aisa nhi hua to aj q apne emotion control nhi kar paya mai.q
Itne mai nurse riya ko check karne ati hai. Uske jane ke bad arjun fir soch mai dub jata hai.
Arj POV :- jab maine pehli bar riya ko dekha to wo mujh par gun point kar ke khadi thi.kuch hi palon mai wo mere hathon mai kaid thi.uski ankhe jaise much keh rhi thi mujhse ,ek ajeeb sa dar or baichaini thi uski ankho mai. Fir jab roshni ki report padte waqt jab mai use dant raha tha to ek anjana as apnapan or Jana pehchana dard dekha maine par apne gusse mai ignore kar dia. Or wo sab kuch kitni asani se apni beautiful smile or child antics mai sab chupa deti thi.mai samajh leta tha par kabhi puchne ki himmat nhi hui
.fir wo last case xora 2 jab wo rajat k kabje mai thi uski ankhein kitne emotion ek satha display kr rahi thi..jaise kuch hai jo wo chod kar jana nahi chahti. Kuch nahi bahut kuch kehna tha shayad use.uski ankho ko mai chah kar bhi nhi bhul paya.pata nhi q
.ek anjana sa rishta jaisa lagta hai usse.jaise Jane kab se janta hu mai use.
Itne mai riya ko hosh aata hai. Par wo ankhe kholte hi fir behosh ho jati hai.

Wow nice concept welcome in ariya land

Conti soon

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Ar Dr ke pas jakar use hosh aya tha Dr PR wo fir behosh ho gai
Dr - check karke .Mr arjun wo bahut week hai physically as u see use bahut torture kia gaya hai . par shayad wo inner strength se uthne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai ye kai dino se behosh hai .par apke sath hone ki wajah se use strength mil rahi hai .ap jarur koi khas honge inke ya patient ap bar bahut vishwas karti hai.
Ar - riya nam hai iska
Dr ok kehkar injection dekar chala jata hai.
Ar dr ki bat yad karke (ap jarur koi khas honge inke ya patient ap bar bahut vishwas karti hai.) Use riya ki batien yad ati hai
Ri - arjun sir mai bhi ek din ap jaise hi wo dekhna chahti hu Jo dikhai nahi deta
Ri - ant mai jeet ap hi ki hogi sir .humesha hoti hai
Or bhi sari batien yad aakar arjun smile karta hai .bad mai sad hokar riya ka hath pakad kar
Ar - I am sorry riya tum kitna vishwas karti thi mujh par or mai nhi bacha paya .par ab tumhara ye hal karne walon ko nhi chodunga mai. Par tum pehle thik ho jao riya .shayad yahi vishwas ka rishta haihum mai. I promise you riya is bar tumhara bharosa nhi todunga mai.
Riya fir hosh mai akar arjun sir bol kar fir behosh ho jati hai
Ar- riya k sir pr hath pher kar .aram karo riya kuch der tumne bahut kuch saha hai.thodi der aram karo. As she listening uske face per ek peace dikhai deta hai jo arjun k face pr bhi dikhta hai ..wo whi head down karke baith jata hai or dhere se so jata hai.

Here at etf conf hall
All are sitting and doing paper work of sik case
Ay - pata nhi arjun sir kaha chale gaye.
Ch - aj bahut dukhi honge wo to kuch der akele rehne ke liye chale gaye honge.
Sak - par yaha hota to hum sab the na uske sath
Sh - sak kuch gum batne se nhi tanhaiyon mai hi kam hote hai.
Sameer barked ye sab kya laga rakha hai kam jaldi finish karo or ghar jao apne apne..office ko sabji mandi bana dia hai..after that he left ch
Liz - ab inhe kya hua
Ay - wo bhi to roshni ke dost the unhe bhi aj uski bahut yad aa rhi hogi.
All nods
All finish there work and left for their home.

Well this story is interesting I'm loving it. Update soon

Nice concept..

Nice parts.

Part 2
at hospital in morning
Arj uthta hai.or sochta hai - ye kya mai so gaya wo bhi puri rath bina darawne sapne ke.or abhi abhi aisa laga jaise roshni muskura kar nai subah ke liye utha rahi ho.q aisa q.fir wo riya ko dekhta hai use dekhkar aisa lagta hai wo peacefully so rahi hai. Arjun use dekhta reh jata hai. Uska tarance phone ki ring se tutta hai .dekhta hai to rathore ka phone hai.
Ra- rawte kahan ho tum
Ar- use hospital ka addr dekar team ke sath ane ko kehta hai.
Ra - kya hua rawte are u fine
Ar -mujhe kya hoga rathore.mai thik hu tum log aao to.
Phone disconnect karke wo hospital mai hi freashup hokar ata hai. Waha dr riya ka checkup kar rahe hote hai
Ar - wo thik to hai na dr
Dr - ha uski jan ko to koi khatra nhi hai par.exact condition to uske hosh mai ane par hi pata chalega .wo kitni theek or normal hai.
Ar - ok dr.
Dr chala jata hai or ajun fir wahi baith jata hai.
Kuch der bad puri team waha ati hai or riya ko dekhkar shock ho jate hai.
Ra - rawte ye sab kya hai or ye riya
Sh - ha sir ri jinda hai kaise
Ch - or ab tak kahan thi.
Girls shock .ye kaun hai .itne mai kuch yad aakar ayesha
Ay - riya riya mukharji whi na jise us din bravery award mila tha.par wo to mar chuki thi na.fir kaise.
Arjun explain all he know.how he found how he get her to the hospital.
All become shocked and numbed.itne mai chotu to shree - dekh shree humari ri jinda hai.
Sh - ha chotu par uski halat dekh kitni buri hai.mujhse to dekha nhi ja raha use is hal mai.
Ch- ha humari ri humesha hansti or hansati rehti thi ye kya hal ho gaya iska. Kaise hua ye sab
Ar - abhi kuch nahi keh sakte asli condition to riya ke hosh mai ane par hi pata chalegi. Chotu us ghar ke bare mai pata lagao or ayesha liza tum log waha jakar evidance dhundo. Riya ko pata nhi kab hosh aye
Ra - stopit u trio. Jitna ye sach hai k ye riya jaisi dikhti hai utna ye bhi sach hai ke riya ne humari ankho ke samne virus khaya , humare hi samne wo mari or humare hi samne uska furnel hua .to ye riya hai ye confirmly nhi keh sakte
Ar - ye riya hi hai
Ra - oh stopit rawte or har kuch to chut raha hai kehne wale tum itni asani se kaise man gaye yhi riya hai.dammit kya hua hai tumhari so called six sence ko rawte
To Liza - is ladki ke sare test karo or report humare record mai rakhi riya ki report se match karo
Liza - right sir.
Ar - rathore tum Jo chahe keh lo par mujhe pura yakeen hai yahi riya hai or wo report bhi yhi kahegi.and he left for doc cabin

Interesting update