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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome updt dear
Thanks for the pm
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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awesome update 😊
continue soonish and thanx for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very painful update.
Riya had to bear so much in life but never forgot to smile and spread happiness.
She's such a brave girl.
Its good that she's got some nice friends like Shree and Liza.
So arjun finally got to know her past.
Lets see how he handles the case and whether Riya's past affects him or not.
Cont soon.
Will be waiting to see, how the story unfolds.
Sorry for replying late.
Thank u for the pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Riya ka Sach me painfull tha...

Riya ne bhot kuch saha he...

Pata riya ki esi halat kisne ki par jisne bhi ki ho ab arjun use cho dega nahi...

Arjun ab riya ki takat banega. ..

Bas ek baar riya ko hose aa jaye...

Fir sab acha ho jayega...

Please next part jaldi update karna. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7
Shree Lisa ke Jane ke bad arjun riya ke paas akar baithta hai.
Ar - uska hath pakad ke. Kaise itne dard mai bhi tum muskura leti ho.main bahut cache se samajh sakta hu tumhe kaisalagta hoga jab tumhare papa tumse aisa behave karte honge.tum sach mai bahut acchi ho riya.kisi ko pareshan nahi dekh sakti.par kya sach mai tumhe mere dantne ka itna fark pada ke tum ro di.shree ne kaha tum kisi ke samne roti nahi ho.or mere samne do bar q.us din bhi criminal ko shoot karne k bad tum mere kandhe (shoulder) per sir rakh ke royi.kya tumhe sach mai mujh par itna vishwas hai riya ke tum mujhse apne emotions bant sakti thi. Ye kaisa anjana sa rishta hai riya .per ab mai is vishwas ke rishte ko nahi tutne dunga.har dum tumhara sath dunga. Shayad mujhe bhi apni is khali padi jindgi ka jeene ka maksad mil jaaye. Bas tum jaldi thik ho jao.
Here at same time shree n Lisa
Li - ye kya hua shree ri ke sath .kisne kiya hoga.uska to koi dushman bhi nhi hai.mujhe use aise chup chap lifeless lete hue nhi dekha ja raha.or wo rone lagti h
Sh - ro mat liza humari ri bahut brave hai.tum janti ho na use rona pasand nahi hai. Mujhe bhi use aise nhi dekhte ban raha hai.
Li - ha shree mai nhi roungi ri ko bura lagega na
Sh - ha .ye hui na baat.or rahi bat us culprit ki to arjun sir use dhund nikalenge .WO itni aasani se use nhi chodenge.
Li - ha mujhe bhi arjun sir per pura vishwas hai .per wo ri ke liye itni care q kar rahe hai.matlab jab se mai unhe mili hu unhe aisa to nhi dekha.
Sh - aisi bat nahi hai jab us serial killer ne mujh par attack kia tha tab bhi sir bahut gusse mai aa gaye the or jab sakshi kidnap hui thi.rathore sir ko bhi lekar tension lete hai.or tumper jab dead body late waqt humla hua tha tab bhi sir ko bura laga tha.WO sabki care karte hai.
Li - ha ye to hai.per riya
Sh - per riya or unka rishta alag hai.hum use koi naam nhi de paye.ek anjana as rishta hai un dono k beech.shayad dard ka vishwas ka ya koi or pata nahi.ha per ri unke aas pas humesha sukun mai rehti thi.
Li - ha sukun jo use apni life mai kabhi nahi mila.
Sh - fir bhi wo humesha muskurati thi.
Li - yaad hai tumhe us din jab hum picnic gaye the
Fb
Wo log picnic ke liye shimla jane wale the
.WO riya ki fav place thi .riya ne waha Jane ke life mushkil se rs collect kiye the.but hostel ke samne paper bechne wale bacche ka accident ho jata hai to wo half amt uske bill bharne ko de deti hai.
Ri - guys hum shimla nahi ja rahe
Sh - per q .wo to teri fav place hai na or tune kitni mehnat se rs collect kiye the
Li - ha ri kya hua ab.
Riya unhe puri baat batati hai.
Li - koi bat nahi ri.tu mujhse le le .jab tere pas ho lauta dena
Ri - tu janti hai na li mai dosti k beech paiso ko nhi lati.
Sh - per ri humari outing.
Ri - offo maine kab mana kia hum outing per nhi ja rahe.
Sh - li - matlab
Ri - matlab hum shimla or kabi jayenge abhi hum lonavla chale jayenge.waise bhi kaha ja rahe hai se jyada kiske sath ja rage hai ye mayne rakhta hai.
Sh - per wo teri fav place hai na.
Ri - ha hai.per mere Shimla jane se jyada jaruri us bacche ki jaan hai.or rahi bat shimla ki to kabhi na kabhi mai waha jarur jaungi.
Li - I am proud to being ur friend. N both hug.
Sh - mai bhi.n trio hug
Ri - bus hum teno sath hai na to hum lonavla ko hi shimla bana denge.
Teeo - ye hhh ..
Fb end.
Sh - har bat mai positivity dhund hi leti this wo.
Li - ya she is simply great.
Next morning at hospital
Ar - kya mai fir so gaya.or maine neend mai rosh ki cheekhien nahi use muskurate hue dekha. Q aisa q.
Wo dekhta hai wo riya ka hath pakadker hi so gaya tha.
Itne mai Dr abhay aate hai.
Abh - good morning arjun.kaise ho
Ar - good morning .mai thik hu ap.
Ab - I am also f9.chalk mai riya ka checkup kar lunga or yahi rukunga.tumhe aaj office jana hoga.or yaha security bhi arrange karwa do hai.
Ar - thanks.but aap q pareshan ho rahe h.
ab - tumhe kab se thanks bolne ki jarurat padne lagi.or kya mai tumhare liye itna bhi nhi kar sakta.or yahi rahoge to culprit ko kaise pakdoge.jao or is gudiya si ladki ko insaaf dilao.
Ar nods or waha se chala jata hai.lodge ja kar fresh hokar office pahuchta hai.
At etf conference hall
Arjun enter.
Sh - sir ab kaisi hai ri.
Ar - abhi to waisi hi hai shree.
Ch - sir Dr ne kya bola.koi khatra to nahi hai na.
Ar - nahi .bas bahut weak or hurt hai wo .Jaan ka khatra to nahi hai par bahut pain mai hai wo.
Ye sunkar choree ki ankhee bhar aati hai.
Ar - or waise bhi ab khatra us vkrant or uske sathiyon ko hai. Ayesha chotu kya khabar hai.
Cho - sir mere khabri k anusar vikrant abhi dharavi k ek area mai dekha jaa raha hai.
Itne mai rathore bhi aata hai.
Ra - to chalo use pakadne chalte hai.
Ar - hmm.chalo.
Sakshi Lisa ko chodkar sab mate hai.
At dharivi's place
Ch apne inf se - vik kaha milega.
Info use addr batata hai.
Etf waha pahuchti hai.
Ar ek admi se - vikrant kaun hai.
Ad - apun nahi janta.
Arjun bahut gusse mai use slap karta hai jisse uska daant tut jata hai or blood ane lagta hai.
Ad - aaahh.wo wo lal T-shirt wala hai vik.ahh.
Ar - chalo.
Arjun vikrant ki collar pakad ke tu vik hai.
Vik - kya kam hai tere ko.or aise q pakda hai.
Ar - riya ko kidnap karne walo mai tere sath or kaun kaun tha.
Riya ka naam sunkar vik bhagne lagta hai.or uske goon etf per attack karte hai.
Sabhi fight karte hai or arjun jakar vikrant ko khub marta hai.rathore aa kar use rokta hai tab wo rukta hai .ab vikrant bina puche hi sabke naam bata deta hai.un sabko arrest karke etf k intarogation room mai laya jata hai.

Pre - whole kidnapping mystery unfold and new entry in ariya life.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks everyone for liking this story..its really means a lot.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. amazing
nice pre cap. who's is new entry?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
emotional chapter
arjun felt peace with riya even didn't get nightmare
shriza was sad seeing riya like this lifeless 💔
FB was lovely
yippee finally ETF got that vikrant 👏
getting arjun punch he is ready to tell the truth
precap look interesting
continue soon
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Part 8
Sabhi aadmiyon ko lockup mai dal diya hai.
Vik interrogation room mai hai.arjun bahut gusse mai hai.ch ra shriza bhi.
Ar - ek slap mar kar. Bata q kiya riya mukharjee ka kidnap or use itna torture q kiya.
Vik - Maine kuch nhi kiya sahab.mai to bas drug dealer hu.
Arju again slapped him.rathore bich mai aakar arjun ko side karta hai. Or puchta hai.WO sare gunah Kabul karta hai par riya ki kidnapping nahi.
Kuch der bad.
Ar - thik hai rathore Ise kuch pata nahi to bolkar use kuch inject karta hai
With in ten min wo chikne lagta hai. Ye kaun sa injection diya hai mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai ..ye wahi hai na Jo aah humne us ladki ko diya tha..aah isse to mai aah dhere dhere mar jaunga..ahh
Ar - to yad aa gaye tujhe
Vik - ha sab mujhe jaldi antidote do mujhe sahan nhi ho raha aah.
Ar - isse bhi jyada dard diya hai tumne use.isse bhi jyada tadpi hogi WO.
Ra - arj use antidote do Hume sach janna hai.
Ar - OK..or use dusra injection deta hai. Par ye mat sochna tu Bach gaya.
Kuch der bad uska dard kam hone per wo hosh mai aata hai.
Ar - ab bol ..sach bolna warna is bar koi antidote nhi hoga.sys
Vik - batata hu sir sab batata hu.
Ar - bol
Vik - hum drug dealer hai. Bas yhi kaam karte hai. Ek din ek admi aya or
Fb
Ad -riya ka photo dekar bola Ise uthana hai.ye rahi iski details.
Vik - par hum kidnapping nhi karte.
Ad - ye kam karega to tujhe drug mafiya mai bahut bada post milega or dhanda bhi.soch le.
Vik - par
Ad - bhaiji ka aadesh hai.
Vik - thik hai.
Or hum us din se is ladki ka picha karne lage.
Do din bad fir phir phone aya.or unhone ek or kaam diya..or hum Rabat ke ghar pahuche.aap logon se pehle.
Vik - rajat hum jante hai tum hi wo virus pani mai mila rahe ho.etf bhi jaan chuki hai.
Raj - kya.matlab mujhe bhagna hoga.
Vik - wo log fir bhi dhund lenge.agar tum humara kam karo to hum tumhe paise bhi denge or desh k bahar sahi salamat pahucha denge.
Raj - kaisa kaam.
Vik - kya is virus ka koi tod hai.
Raj - ha ye antidote hai..ek ball ke liye ek bottle.
Vik - thik hai unhe is area mai le kar jao or waha se is ladki ko utha lao.WO log tum par attack nahi kar payenge.
Raj - thik hai.. Ye antidote
WO admi to vik - ab us antidote k badle hum humari mang manwayenge
Fb end
Ar - kaisi maang
Vik - WO sara plan riya ko le Jane or pathan lala ki rihai ke liye racha gaya that.
All in Union kya.
Vik - mere admi raj or ap logo k piche the tabhi.rajat ne us ladki ko pakad liya or ball dalke wo pathan lala ki demand karne hi wala tha ke .
Ar - riya ne wo ball kha li.( with sad tone) fir

Vik - mujhe ye bat pata chali to Maine ye plan banaya or jaldi se us loc k pas k hospital pahucha. Mujhe pata tha aap log wahi ayenge.
Or fir

Fb
Dr - kaun ho ap.
Man - abhi etf team ek xora 2 virus ki patient ko lekar ayenge. Tumhe use ye antidote dena hai. Isse wo kuch der bad thodi der k liye coma mai chali jayegi .or tumhe uski team ko bolna hai wo mar gai.
Dr - nahi ye kar sakta mai.
Man - Dr tumhare pas do option hai ya to ye rs lo or humara kam karo ya fir tum or tumhari family nhi bachegi.such lo.
Dr- par uske bad .
Man - tum postmartam ke liye use Lana .waha se hum le jayenge use. Or waisi hi body etf ko de dena .or bolna virus ki wajah se body gal rahi hai.use expose na kare or juldi furnel kar de.
Dr - par wo etf hai.kuch shak bhi hua to hum mare jayenge.
Man - kuch nahi hoga.par tum apna muh kabhi nhi kholna warna.
Dr- ha thik h .( darte hue)par
Man - or waise bahi wo ab unhe kabhi nahi milegi.humara kam hote hi .use upar hi pahuchna hai..
Itne mai Dr Dr jaldi aaiye
Man - WO log aa gaye ab jaldi jao.or kuch gadbad mat karna ..samjhe
Dr - ha
Fb end.
vik - fir hum use le gaye or us ghar mai rakha Java wo apko mili.
Ra - q kiya riya ka kidnap.
Vik - kuch puchna tha usse..par use hosh mai aane mai 5 Mon lage. Fir Wo Josh mai aai.
Ar - kya puchna tha.
Vik - WO
Fb - riya ko hosh aata hai.
Vik - miss riya mukharji apki dost any kaha hai.
Ri - kaun ho tum..q laye ho mujhe yaha.mai kisi any ko nhi janti.
Vik - jhut mat bolo batao kaha hai wo.n slap her. Wo kuch nhi bolti to use garam rod se jalate hai hunter she Marte hai.par for bhi wo chup rehti hai..wo bahut buri condition mai hai.khub sare burn or Marne k nishan.
Ri - etf or arjun sir nahi chodenge tujhe.
Vik - ha ha ha wo log to mujhe tab pakdenge jab unhe tere bare mai pata chalega .wo to tera antim sanskar kar chuke.ha ha haa.
Ri - tu kuch bhi keh le arjun sir ko ek na ek din jarur pata chalega.or wo mujhe yaha se le jayenge.or tujhe bhi wo nahi chodenge samjha tu.
Or wo fir behosh ho jati hai.aise hi 1 Mon use roj torture karte hai roj puchte the par wo nahi bolti hai.
Fir ek din
Vik - bahut dard sehne ki takat hai na to ye injection ka card seh k bata.betahasha dard hoga or milegi dardnak maut.
Ri - tu kuch bhi kar le mai nahi bataungi or yad rakhna.arjun sir nahi chodenge tujhe .jindgi bhar jail mai tadpega..
WO gusse mai us inject karta hai or use khub card hota hai .par wo kuch nhi bolti.
Itne mai
Ek aadmi - boss bhaiji ka encounter kar diya etf ne.
Vik - kya kab hua ye.
Ad - bhai abhi abhi thodi der pehle.TV mai dikha rahe hai.
Vik - ghabra ke.jaldi karo .apna saman
sameto or is ghar ko aag laga do.agar ye Bach bhi gayi to kinda hi jal jayegi.
Ri - di aarav arjun sir.
WO log aag laga dete hai.
Fb end
Vik - fir mujhe nahi pata.
Ar - Bhaiya ji matlab sik
Vik - haan.
Arjun ke kano mai vik ki ek ek bat gunj rahi .kaise riya ko torture kiya kaise use arj sir par bharosa hai.
WO gusse mai vik ko Marne lagta hai.vik almost dead ho jata hai.
Ra ch use rokte hai or vik ko hospital pahuchate hai.
Arjun chala jata hai. Sabki ankhe nam hai .par shrizatu to fut fut kar rone lagte hai.
At hospital
Ar - humne use pakad liya riya.agar mujhe pata hota to mai us sik ko or bhayanak maut deta. Q riya q karti ho mujh per trust . mai layak nahi hu iske.mai kisi k liye kuch nahi kar sakta.
Itne mai koi uske kandhe par hath rakhta hai.WO shree hai.
Sh - aisa mat kahiye sir. Apne hi uski jaan bachai hai.or uske culprit ko bhi saja dilwayi hai.apne uska bharosa nhi tutne diya sir. Or ap hum sabki care karte hai .hume bhi aap par bharosa hai.
Arj nods.n shree riya ne behosh hone k pehle di or aarav bhi kaha kaun hai ye log.
Sh - sir riya to uske parents ki ek luti beti hai or jaha tak Hume pata hai koi di nahi hai uski relation mai.uskee parents ko unke gharwalo be disown kar diya tha. Or arav ye naam bhi pehli bar suna hai.shayad ri ko Delhi mai mile ho..etf ane k bad jyada time nhi mila .kam mai busy or fir wo ghar jaldi chali jati thi.
Ar - to kya un 4 mon mai kabhi ghar nahi gaye uske.
Sh - sir kai bar socha per mauka hi nahi aya.
Next morning in etf.
Sab khush hai qk riya k culprit ko saja mili or dr ne bhi kaha hai riya jaldi hi hosh mai bhi aa jayegi.
Samjun enter in previous mode
Sak - sab pehle ki tarah ho gaya. Perfect. N smile.
Ra - commissioner Sir ka phone aya tha Hume aaj new officer join karne wali hai.
Sak - new officer kaun q
Ra- pata nahi. Commissioner Sir hi batayenge.
Sh - yar ye new commissioner Sir to ek dum mast hai unke nam ki tarah vijay dixit.ek dum amitabh bacchan style.
Sab hanste hai.
Ar - ye kya tamasha laga rakha hai.WO senior hai humare.
Sab arjun ko dekhte hai.itne mai commissioner enter with a beautiful girl.
Arjun us ladki ko dekh kar ek pal ko shock ho jata hai.
All stand up n greet him
Com- team meet she is miss anushka AR.


Precap - into n anuska character info .and Arjun' s confusion.

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This is anushka AR


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