Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm - Page 9

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I dedicate this part too stuti and jeharshu




Part 6


Riya:"shree tum ne aaisha ko mana kia mgr wo phr bhi nai roki tu tum ne usy abi kch nai kehna tha mai us se bat kr lyti"
Un dono k jane k bad riya ne shree ko danta chotu k hote howe jb k chotu hairan o parishan khara hai yahan ho kia raha hai? Or us k sath aik or bhi parishan o hairan hai or wo hai hamare
Nai nai mere hero sameer rathore.

Chotu&sameer in mind,
Sammy *ye kia ho raha hai aik larki aati hai khud ko cbi ki 2nd in command kehti hai or arjun par bewaja ghussa h0ti hai phr shree usy kehta hai k us k mana krne k bawajod aysa react q kia or phr cbi ki officer sorry bolti hai or wo bhi riya ko dekh kr ye ho kia raha hai? Dam it kch samjh nai aa raha?.*

Chotu *1st utsha riya se hath milati hai tu us ki body lang change hoti hai jis par teeno usy ghusse se dekhte hain, phr aaisha arjun sir se buhat bura bartaw krti hai phr shree bolta hai plane k about tu utsha hi riya ko kehti hai k shree ko samjhen or wo bhi mem keh k or phr aaisha s0rry bolti hai mgr riya ko dekh k ye kia ho raha hai? Kahin riya bhi shree ki tarha cbi mei tu kaam nai krti? Mai kia karun? Pata krna hi pary ga*.

Rathore chotu ki halat dekh k entr hota hai,

Rathore:"chotu mere cabin mei aao mujhy tum se baat krni hai!"

Riya:"sir?"
Rathore:"haan riya bolo"

Riya:"sir mujhy leave chahiye thi mai yei batane ayi thi office mei, meri tabiat thek nai hai mujhy doc k pas jana hai"
Rathore:"riya sik k hawaly se abi tamam kam pending mei para hai or abi cbi ko bhi file bhijni hai"
Riya:"sir plz"

Rathore riya ki eyes dekhta hai jo bata rahi hain k wo sari raat rooti rai hai or jagti rai hai.

Rathore:"kb tak free hogi."
Riya:"sir aj p0re day ki leave chahiye mai kal aaon gi"

Rathore:"ok thek hah!"
Riya:"sir mai ne raat hi kisi se keh kar paper work c0mplete kar liya tha ye rai file"
Wo aik red colour ki file nikalti hai or rathore k handover krti hai.

Riya:"sir agr kch ghalati ho tu bata dijye tb tak mai yahin hun"
Rathore:"ok"
Wo file dekhne lagta hai usmei sb kch perfect hota hai.
Rathore:"vry gud riya its just prfct.
Ab tum jaa sakti ho 😊 "
Riya:"thank you sir gud bye"
After riya left rathore goes tn his cabin.

Chotu pichy pichy jata hai door knock krta hai,

Rathore:"come in chotu"

Chotu:" sir apko mujh se kch baat krni thi?"
Rathore:"chotu mujhy sb kch jan'na hai wo bhi sach"

Chotu:"ji sir?"
Rathore:"shree kia keh raha tha aaisha ko? Mai ne suna mgr kch samjh nai ayi"

Chotu in mind *sir ko bata dyta hun phr shayad mujhy bhi kch pata lag jaye*.

Chotu:"sir shree yahan aane se pehly cbi mei kam krta tha bal k abi bhi krta hai as teach-exprt"
Rathore:" what dam it" in shock.
Chotu:"yes sir, us ne kaha tha k wo apni cheif k kehne par yahan aya tha kisi k about pata krne"

Rathore:"dam it ye tum kia kar rahe ho"
Usy yakeen nai aa raha.
Chotu:"mai sach keh raha hun sir"

Rathore:"but wo keh kis k bary mei raha hai i mean wo yahan kis k about jan'ne k lye aya hai?"

Chotu:"sir i dnt kw but sir jb sik pakra gya tha tu wo buhat khush tha keh raha tha k ab wo wapis chala jaye ga"
Rathore:"matlb wo yahan sik k lye aya tha dam it"

Chotu:"may be sir" after one or two mint.
Chotu:"liken sir"

Rathore:"liken kia chotu?"
Chotu:"sir aaisha mem ne riya ki tarf dekh kr s0rry kaha or wo bhi arjun sir par ghussa hone par, sir ye baat mujhy samjh nai ayi"

Rathore:"pehli baat wo aaisha rawte par ghusa q kare gi? Jb k rawte usy janta bhi nai hai or 2nd us k lye wo s0rry boli wo bhi riya ko q? Dam it Ye ho kia raha hai etf mei?" after some time kafi sochne k bad.

Rathore:"dam it kch samjh nai aa raha"
Chotu:"sir aik or baat jb utsha ne hamye hath mila rai thi jb riya ki bari aayi tu us ki body lang change ho gyi jis par shree,riya or aaisha ne usy ghusse se dekha and ..."

:" kia mtlb? Kisi body lang" Rathore cut him.
Chotu:"sir jis tarha apne se bary ko hath milate wqt body mei respct, and darr hota hai jaise mujhy ap se ya arjun sir se hath milate wqt h0ta hai waise hi riya k lye tha"
(ch0tu sirf hath paon nai chalata dimagh bhi chalata hai)

Rathore:"dam it ye kia ho raha?" kch tu chuht raha hai"

Chotu:"or sir jb shree ne aaisha ko kaha k us ne aysa q kia tu utsha ne riya ko mem keh kr usy samjhane ka kaha"

Rathore:"dam it, chotu tum shree se pata krne ki koshsh karo k wo riya ko kb se janta hai? Or yahan aane se pehly riya kia kam krti thi"

Chotu:"yes sir" and left the cabin.
Rathore:"ye dono hum se kia chuhpa rahe hain? Agr mai aj chotu se na p0chta tu mujhy kch pata hi nai chalta, dam it"

An other place
One girl kafi try kr rai hai usy samjhane ki but wo samjh nai rai bs chakr kat rai hai us k cabin mei.

Girl:"riya meri jaan cool down plz"
(riya hai wo larki)

Riya:"nai mai kaise sambhal jaon, aj jxt aaisha ki waja se arjun sir ko mujh par shak ho sakta hai"

Girl:"riya us ne jaan bojh kr tu nai kia na, na us se bardsht howa"
Riya:"nai shomaila (its me) wo aysa nai kr sakti wo cbi 2nd in command hai, mai bhi tu bardsht kr rai hun"
Me:"tum mei or us mei kafi farq hai"

Riya:"han us mei or mujh mei kafi difference hai" wo ja k seat par beithti hai.
Me:"lo pani piyo"
"thanx" riya pani peeti hai, after 5 mins.
Riya:" liken agr shree usy ye na batata k kaise arjun sir mujh par bewaja chilate hain tu aj ye sb na hota, ye wo sb mere lye kr rai thi"

Me:"q k wo tumhari best frnd hai wo bhi 10 years se, yad nai jb wo, mai, shree ya tum mei se koi hum mei se kisi danta tu kaise us ko sabq sikhate thy"

Riya:"liken yaar shree bhi tu mera bst frnd hai"
Me:"han hai liken wo wahin kaam krta hai tabi kch nai kr sakta, jb arjun tumhe dant'ta hai tu wo chahte howe bhi kch nai kr sakta, jb sik k bhagne ka ilzam tum par laga tha wo tb bhi kch nai kr sakta hai. Agr mai aaisha ki jaga hoti tu mai arjun ko aik thaper bhi maar dyti us ne tu kch bhi nai kia"

Riya:"hahaha tum arjun sir ko thaper maro gi maarne se pehly khud maar jao gi." mai ne sakoon ka sans lia.
"liken yar jb mai ye sb bear kr sakti hun tu wo q nai"

Me:"meri jaan tum arjun se pyar krti ho tabi sb kch seh jati ho"
Riya:"shayad tum thek keh rai ho"
Me:"shayad nai yaqeenan mai thek keh rai hun. Agr ab tu ijazat dy tu mai jaon meri buhat important meeting hai"
Riya:"jao jao meri maa, mai bhi chalti hun"

Me:"koi nai lunch kar k phr chali jana medm ji"

Riya:"ok ok tumhara hukam sar aankhun par"

03:00pm
Arjun in his cabin.

In mind
*mai ne kal riya ko kch zeyada hi keh dia tha jb k wo tu mujhy bacha rai thi mai sik ko pakr kr us k sath agye barna chahta hun, or aj tu usy thek se dekh bhi nai paya dekhne ka mouqa hai nai mila. All jxt bcz of aaisha kapoor aik dafa mil jaye phr bataon ga usy 😡 *

Knock on the door

Arjun:"come in"
Shree:"sir apko rathore sir ne conf.room mei bulaya tha."

Arjun:"ok m coming"

In conf.room
Shree:"sir mujhy abi nikalna hai, mujhy leave chahiye sir plz"

Rathore:"dam it, ab tumhe q leave chahiye?

Shree:" wo sir ... Han meri maa baba aa rahe hain tu mujhy lyne jana hoga, plz sir 4 bajy tu mujhy paka ghar par h0na hai warna kafi dant pary gi shayad maar bhi"

Rathore:"ok mai samjh sakta hun tum jaa sakte ho"
After shree left.

Rathore:"aj koi case nai hai tu aj k lye chuti."

Chotu:"thank you so much sir" nd left.

Arjun jane lagta hai.
Rathore:"tum se aik kam tha"

Arjun:"kia kam tha?"
Rathore:"rawte mujhy com.office jana hai tum ye file ly jao gye"

Arjun:"kahan rathore??"

Rathore:"cbi office mei"
Arjun:"what? Mai jaon mgr mai hi q ye tu chota sa kaam tum chotu ko bhi keh sakte thy???

Rathore:"chotu tu shayad ye file dy k wapis aa jaye ga mgr tum wahan as a 2nd in command of ETF jao gye
Wahan ki cheif se mulaqat karo or ye jan'ne ki koshish karo sik ka case unhe q mila and shayad wahan jan'ne se tumhe pata lag jaye k aaisha tum se mis-behve q kia tha."

After 5 mins
Arjun:"ok thek hai mai chala jaon ga"

03:45pm

Meher cbi mei entr hoti hai
reception:"gud after-noon mem"
meher:"gud after-noon,,
ETF se koi file ayi?"

Recep:"no mem"
meher:"ok aa jaye tu bhij dyna conf.room mei"
Recep:"ok mem"

Meher goes too her cabin

With in 10 mins sb conf.room mei hain,
meher enter hoti hai
all:" gud after-noon mem"
meher:"gud after-noon team"

Tabi aik car aa k cbi building k samne khari hoti hai us se aik handsome and hot boy nikalta hai or building mei enter hota hai

Tamam larkiyan us ko dekh kar hosh kho dyti hain,
wo reception par jata hai

"mujhy cbi cheif se milna hai"
recep:"ji ap kon or ap ko kis se milna hai"

Boy in mind *dam it k chakr mei ab or pata nai kia kia karna pare ga*

Boy:"mujhy ye file daini thi"

Recep:"ok ap file mujhy dy dijye abi mem meeting mei hain jaise hi free hun gi mai dy dun gi"

Boy:"mujhy un se milna bhi hai"

Recep:"ok ap mujhy bata den ap hain kon mai mem ko bata dun gi"

Boy:"tum mujhy nai janti mujhy?? News waghaira nai dekhti ho?? Mai acp arjun rawte second in command of ETF hun samjhi ya samjhaon?? 😡 "

Recep:"sorry sir ap conf.room mei chaly jaiye mem wahin hun gi"
Arjun:"ok thank you" nd left,
Recep:"haaayyeee pleasure is all mine kitns handsome hai"

Arjun conf.room enter hota hai

Meher ki door ki tarf back hai

Meher:"team ab hamye or tawajo or mazbot tariqy se kaam karna hoga"

Arjun in mind ye awaz tu suni howi hai kafi zeyada mgr kahan??


Aaisha:"meher ab hamye koi ar plane banana hoga sik ko pakrne k lye"

Meher:"haan aaisha tum sai keh rai ho" wo turn karti hai team or door ki tarf,


Arjun:"TUM YAHAN"


T.b.c

Har ghalati muafi mangti hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Owesome. ..m.

Fantastic. ...

Riya Kahi cbi ki chief to nahi...magat mehar ki ska name he...

Arjun cbi me
.kisi dekhkar shok ho gaya...

Kahi riya to nahi...

Acha he arjun bhi Riya ko pyaar karta he par danttaa bhot he.

Next part jaldi dena. ...

Besabrise intzaaar karenge. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
yrrr i lovee you lot
update dedicated to me n harshu diii
sam bhai ka jawab nhiii
he is really intelligent tbhi toh etf k chief hai
n arjun bhai kuch nhi ho skta unka
ek taraf riya se pyaar krte hai
n dusri taraf usse dante rehte hai
unhe kya lgta hai aise behaviour k baad bhi jb voh usse propose krnge toh kya voh haa khegi idiot
ab yeh cliff hanger kis gham mein tha
arjun bhai shocked too see meher
voice bhi kuch suni suni si lg rhi hai
yeh toh ek taraf ishara kr rhi hai
but i'm not telling zip on lips
khud ki bhi entry wow
not bad mazze ayenge dekhne mein
and yrr sst ka paper 2 days holiday issliye online hu
chinta mat kijiye studies pr dhyan hai humara
aur aap pr bhi
update soon thanks for pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Fabulous update
Love it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awesome updt dear.
Arey yeh hamare Chotu ji hi hai na???
Kamaal hai, aisa laag rahi hai ki he's gone a complete make over.
Ha ha ha Rathod sir is so frustrated ki unke jubaan per Arjun Rawte ka line aagaya.
Ri and someone special's convo is really nice and matured.
THANKS FOR KEEPING MY REQUEST DEAR.
Again lot of questions to be answers.
End is such an interesting cliffhanger.
Good going with the suspense.
Waiting for the next part.
Do cont soon.
Did arjun see Riya??? Well I guess so...
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Wow it's Awesome story dr
Plz Cont soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: rvss

Owesome. ..m.

Fantastic. ...

Riya Kahi cbi ki chief to nahi...magat mehar ki ska name he...

Arjun cbi me
.kisi dekhkar shok ho gaya...

Kahi riya to nahi...

Acha he arjun bhi Riya ko pyaar karta he par danttaa bhot he.

Next part jaldi dena. ...

Besabrise intzaaar karenge. ..



Thnx,
Next update ka wait karen janb pata lag jaye ga k arjun ne kise dekha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: angelariya

yrrr i lovee you lot

update dedicated to me n harshu diii
sam bhai ka jawab nhiii
he is really intelligent tbhi toh etf k chief hai
n arjun bhai kuch nhi ho skta unka
ek taraf riya se pyaar krte hai
n dusri taraf usse dante rehte hai
unhe kya lgta hai aise behaviour k baad bhi jb voh usse propose krnge toh kya voh haa khegi idiot
ab yeh cliff hanger kis gham mein tha
arjun bhai shocked too see meher
voice bhi kuch suni suni si lg rhi hai
yeh toh ek taraf ishara kr rhi hai
but i'm not telling zip on lips
khud ki bhi entry wow
not bad mazze ayenge dekhne mein
and yrr sst ka paper 2 days holiday issliye online hu
chinta mat kijiye studies pr dhyan hai humara
aur aap pr bhi
update soon thanks for pm




Thnx an lv u too

Sammy mera hero hai tu intenlligent tu hoga hi 😉
Mujhy nai pata story agy kia mo0r ly gi bt pata hai k jb arjun bhai riya ko propose karen tu wo khushi k mare roone lag jaye gi.

U r a vry gud girl tabi tu lips ko seal pack kr dia tha 😃

Thank u thanku utsha dear kaha tha apni entry karwane ka tu kr di.

Chalo acha hai, but zeyada exam ki tayari karna, bst of luck for ur exam
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Fabulous update

Love it
Thanks for pm



Thanx am glad that u like it

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