Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeharshu

Part 4

It was superb updt shomaila dear
Fb was awesome
Truely u nailed it
Ab aage kya hoga
Eagerly awaiting for the next chapter
Kyun kuch questions ki
Answers abhi b baaki hai
So please do continue soon
Nd thanks for the pm



Thanx dear i realy glad for such a nice comments,,

I'll update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Hey when r u gonna update???
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5


Etc In m0rng shree k elawa koi nai aya,

Shree:"come to etf office bcz rathore sir aane waly hain or han khud ko c0ntrol mei rakhna, arjun sir par ghusa nai krna unko shak ho sakta hai us par" shree on call to aaisha,

Aaisha:" ok, i'll try my vry best to c0trol my self and us par ghusa na karun mgr usko dekh kr mai kaisa react krun gi mujhy khud nai pata."

Shree:" plz try to understand aaisha, warna uska plan sara ka sara barbad ho jaye ga,"

Aaisha:" hum aa rahe hain" call khatm bichara shree parishan k agr arjun sir ya rathore sir ko shak ho gya or unhen pata lag gya tu phr us ka sara khail khatm ho jaye ga

Chotu aata hai,

Chotu:" gud m0rng shree"
Shree:" m0rng chotu aj ki m0rng gud har giz nai hai, tum sunao dair q ho gyi?"

Chotu:"yaar raat thek se so nai paya tu neind bhi subh jaldi nai kh0li, riya abi tak nai ayi?"

"gud m0rng mai aa gyi" riya with dimple wali smile but un dono ko pata hai k ye fake smile hai".

Shree:"m0rng riya and hug her and shree says:
"shaitan ban gyi hai tujhy yaad kia or tu hazir" choree hansne lagte hai and riya unhen angry fake look dyti hai.
Tabi 2 larkiyan entr hoti hain chotu:"nadia & rehana yahan?"
Utsha:"gud m0rng team, its utsha kapoor from cbi and she is aaisha kapoor 2nd in command of cbi"and hand shake with trio. But riya se hath milate wqt uski body lang change hoti hai jis par rii, shree, and aaisha usy angry look dyte hain, jb k chotu ko shock lagta hai but p0chta nai hai,


Chotu:"shree isi lye tu keh raha tha k aj teri m0rng gud nai hai 😉 "

Tabi samjun entr h0te hain aaisha utsha un ki tarf bck hai,

Trio:" gud m0rng sir"
"M0rng" rathore said and our hera jxt n0de his head tabi aaisha utsha pechy dekhti hain,

Samjun:" nadia rehana tum dono yahan kaise?"

Both:"jai hind sir,
Aaisha:"m aaisha kapoor 2nd in command of cbi and she is utsha kapoor encounter and undercover spcl-list of cbi."

Rathore:"tu aap wahan kia kar rahi thin?"

Aaisha:" sir cheif of etf ap hain or ap ye p0ch rahe hain?"

"wel we both were there on undercove me as nadia and utsha as rehana,"

Rathore:"hmmm ok" and then said "meet my team, shree teach expert chotu commando, riya research and undercover spcl-list and acp arjun rawte 2nd in command of etf" he said with so much proud.

Both:"hi hye"
Trio:"hi aaisha mem and utsha"
Aaisha"sir mujhy aap se kch p0chna tha"
Rathore:"yes" jb se us ne aaisha ko dekha hai usko kch kch howa hai, ab us ne bolaya tu uski p0ri body ears ban gyi.

Aaisha:"sir jb sik ka case apko nai dia gya tu ap ne acti0n q lia?"
She is in th0ra thora ghusa.

Rathore:"wo hamaye jaise hi pata laga k wo aa gya hai phr hum ne or kch nai s0cha" rathore ne s0cha nai tha k aaisha us se ayse achanak p0ch ly gi.

Arjun 1st time bola:"ye jaan bojh k case cbi ko dia gya tha sb ko pata hai k sik ka pakry jana mere hathun se kitna ..."
Aaisha:" ap se kahin zeyada kisi or k lye usy pakrna zarori tha mr.arjun rawte 😡 " she is in full ghusa.

Chotu:"yaar ye tu arjun sir ki behn nikli sys ko hi chup kra dia" he wishper in shriya's ears nd they both smile little bit...

Arjun just glare her.

Rathore:"dam it, ye kia tariqa hai baat krne ka?" he is stil in shock bcz aj tak usne kisi larki ko arjun se is tarha baat krte nai dekh,

Aaisha:" sir mazrat k sath mgr jo jaisa h0ta hai us k sath waise hi baat ki jaati hai mgr ye baat mr. Arjun nai samjhen gye bcz ye sirf ko samjhana jante hain khud samjhna nai jante." she is full in so much angr.
Rathore in mind, * Sahi takr ki larki hai arjun k, or keh bhi tu thek rahi hai, bichari riya k sath kitna bura bartav krta hai*

Arjun:"tumhe itna ghusa q aa raha hai jb k mai tumhe janta bhi nai hun samjhi ya samjhaon 😡 "
Hamare hero ko tu bs bahana chahiye ghusa krne ka,

Riya:"cool down sir nd aaisha 😡 " arjun ne ghuse se bhari look riya ko di or apne cabin ki tarf chala gya.

Utsha:"dii just come down" and utsha to rathore,
Utsha:"sir hamye paper work chahiye kal ka."

Rathore:"ok, riya inhe kal ka tamam paper work dy do" and go to his cabin mgr aik bharpur nigha aaisha par dal kar 😉

" ye kia tha aaisha mem?" rathore k jate hi shree aaisha se.
Shree:"mai ne mana kia tha na? Unhe shak ho jata tu wo arjun sir hain wo tumhe ayse jaane nai dy gye or agr unhe pata lag gya tu hamara bana banaya khel khatm ho sakta hai 😡 or ye sb kch tumhari waja se hoga"
Utsha:" ye kia tariqa hai shree dii se baat krne ka? Mem ap hi samjhayen." wo riya ki tarf dekhti hai.

Aaisha:"mai ne usy kch nai kaha tha mai tu us ki tarf dekh bhi nai rahi thi wo khud bola tu mai khud ko rook nai paayi sorry" wo riya ki tarf dekh k sb kehti hai.

Riya:"its ok tum dono jao ab"

Both:" ok jai hind."

T.b.c

Har ghalati ki maufi mangti hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
Continue soon

Thank for pm
Edited by rinku95 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Nice update..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Very nice update shomi.
Great going.
Ayesha kya jawab di arjun ko. Arey koi usse pani offer nehi ki?? Itna chillayi bechari ne.
Aur kisko sik ki talash hai bhai???
Yeh Ayesha toh Jaise ETF ki hi interrogation kar rahi thi.
Aur lagta hai Rathod sir ki haalath thori kharab ho gaya.
And Riya ki kya chakkar hai ji???
ETF me se arjun, Rathod aur Chotu ko chodke sab mujhe CBI ka laag rahi hai.
So many questions and jawab nehi.
So will be waiting for updates.
Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.
And yaad se next update me kisiki khaas entry chahiye mujhe. Don't forget haan??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
nice chapter
which plan shree was talking abt? 😕
I like the way Aisha talk to arjun 👍🏼
uff riya came to rescue arjun
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous update
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsmmm prt dr
thnks 4 pm

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