Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Awesome Update...
I just loved it...
The foody convo was amazing...
Continue soon..

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Answered in bold 😳

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Awesome update dear🤗

loved it

Arakshi-licious update! It was lovely! Their talks, gazes, blushes, looks, smiles, n everything was beautifully written!👏 They want to marry each-other, that's great! Their romance was nice! Then Arjun tried to get into reality, be practical, n they had a fight! the arguments were too good! It's like we keep on agreeing with both!😆 But they didn't stretch it n ended it like a good couple, on a happy note!😃 Loved the part where she fed him n then ate her food without washing hand! 😳

Sameer was a cherry on top!😳😆 He enjoyed teasing the lovely couple, n got hit badly by Arjun, haha!!😆 I enjoyed that scene thoroughly! "Roktobeej ... Kaam Deb" the range is just perfect!😃 He kept teasing both of them n also helped them to end their fight n sort out their views! He's a perfect brother!👏⭐️

I missed Hussain, hope he'll be back in the next update! 😳

So now marriage rituals have begun. It's interesting!😛

"That's when Shaakhi realised.. She would cease to exist without Arjun. " The storm's coming, I'm running to hide in some safe place!😉😆

do continu soon😊

thanks for pm

Love,

You know..😉😛

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

''You can't calm the storm.So stop trying.What you can do is calm yourself.The storm might pass''.

That was a sweet yet the most needed update.The words are simple,touching and ensnaring.The 'engaging' factor of this story is ''what's next''.And each time the pm of this update pops in my inbox I silently send a quick prayer and wish that this should n't describe their valediction to each other and their lives.😔

We know the leaves are going to fall at the arrival of autumn,the storm is bound to come yet we don't want to part with their newly gentrifying life.Any ways we have to accept the reality and till the storm devastates their dreams and our wishes we should dip ourselves in their fantasy land.😊😊

The emotions displayed are so very indian in nature,loved each line.And the ethnic touch of dialogues all the more strikes the right chord.Awaiting for the forthcoming update with bated excitement or say anxiety.

Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊😊

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

it was such a sweet feel good update and then u say u can't write romance
everything was just perfect arjun's confession his insecurities sakshi's anger sameer's teasing and then knocking some sense in these love birds and then the marriage 😃
and god even acknowledged arjun's wish of having sakshi as his for seven lifes 😊
after going through so much in their life these two deserve all love and happiness
i just loved this chapter
thanks for pm

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Really thank you so much for your wonderful comments but since I have no time I'll just jump to the update, I honestly love you all for your comments... really!

So, Hello my dear friends, I am back with a double update for Jaatishwar. One of the most difficult updates of my life and I myself cried like anything while typing this out. Just a little warning for kiddos as this one is a highly intense sequence. Get ready for blushes and tears! Really looking forward to your responses!

Love,

You know who.

CHAPTER 5

Shaakhi had her eyes trained on the door, waiting with a bated breath for Arjun to step in their room. She toyed a little with the shiuli petals on a sturdy cot and breathed in their heady fragrance.

Chewing her bottom lip nervously, Shaakhi stared at her fingertips dyed red with alta and blushed. It was too good to be true. Touching her partition gently, she smiled as she felt the powdery sindoor.

She wasn't jewelled as a bride for they had none to offer; her hands were encased in delicate jasmine bangles and her neck was adorned by a mala of flowers. And to be honest, she felt like the most beautiful women when Arjun had laid his eyes on her.

She pressed a palm close to her bosom, her heart beating frantically against her ribs. Swearing as her anxiety got the better of her, Shaakhi wrapped her arms around her knees and sat on the mat.

Waiting for her husband to come.

*Rest in blog, for those who didn't get the link, check my index or profile*

And guys, this work is mine and is copyrighted and if someone goes to play with it then I won't sit, simple funda hai.

Edited by IArmageddonI - 9 years ago

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

nice update
specially how they were talking abt their future together 😊
was wondering what happened to sammer and sakshi's lil bro 🤔
sakshi reborned and is blind and deaf

sorry for late comment

Edited by sisodia_shefali - 9 years ago

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

really good was happy with Arjun-Saakhi's union..but then sad as it was the last day for them...now back to present sakshi i feel bad for that see cant see or hear now m wondering that even if she remembers her past life then also how will she recognise her arjun...waiting read the present arakshi meet too and arjun's intro too.

thanks 4 pm