Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

I'm speechless don't know what to say It was So so sooo Awwwsssmmm
Brilliantly Written
Chapter 5 was Heart Warming
Loved Arakshi moments Sooo Beautiful
Their dreams their wishes So Amazing
Chapter 6 was Heart Wrenching
Arakshi's dreams wishes remain unfulfilled
The present starts
Ahhh Sakshi is blind n deaf
How will she recognize Arjun
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Super awesome update dear, it left me just speechless!

Loved it to the core

Arjun's buddies teasing him was really funny!

Sakshi was a little nervous but eager too! Arjun became the die-hard romantic,, hayee! Beautifully written! Their talks were lovely, so beautiful dreams! But unfortunately they weren't completed! Hopefully those dreams would be fulfilled in the present!

Their love scenes were lovely, I don't have much to say about it!

Their fear n escape was nicely put up, then they are killed, the sweet birds died cruelly in the hands of Cruel Britishers!

Then the most intersting part, she wakes up seeeing his face,hearing his voice n then the twist by my dear twister, the girl's a blind n deaf! Well can this be more interesting???

I'm so eagerly waiting for the next part..

do continu soon

thanks for pm

Love you loads,

You know.. ;) :P

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Wonderful and tragic at the same time. But now Sakshi is blind and deaf - even if she remembers her past life how will she know when she meets Arjun? Please update soon.

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sairam175

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Awesome part

Superb

Loved it

Con soon

Thanks for pm

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kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Wah meri jaani

Tussi tho kamal kardi

Read 3 parts together

Such a beautiful dream only to be shattered as they were juat formed

But the climax!! U took it to another level

Cant wait to read more gm

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tingding

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Pls pls pls pls pls update soon. I'm dying to read this, keep thinking about IT.

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

''Death is the wish of some,relief of many and end of all''

Death is beautiful but the moments before the death is so barbaric.You surely managed to pool eyes with tears.Really a commendable piece of writing.👏 The sweet nothings and then the ruthless separation is pathos evoking.Its simply terrible when this happens in reality.The leap and the last line blew the remaining sanity and peace of mind out of proportion.Blind?? Seriously..🥺

Awaiting for the upcoming updates with a renewed hope.😊

Keep writing and Keep Smiling.😃

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Part 2

Sameer's introduction was super. Ha ha he is always the same. Arjun ko taunt maara nahi toh uska khaana hazam nahi hoga😆😆😆 Harishchandra ki Aatma🤣

Ha ha someone is shopping for Shaakhi. Par tumhaara samjaane ka tareeqa bilkul galat. Ab dekho Shaakhi ne tumhe galat samaj liya😭😭😭

Shaakhi is not beautiful. Really Arjun?

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Areesha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Ayi Allah yeh kaise miss ho gaya?
Pehle baki parh loon phir aaram se app ki stories parhon gi
Love you

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Areesha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Uhumm I don't rennet of I commented on part 1 or not o 😕

Anyways I can't think fancy words at this hour at night so here goes the old ghissa pita dialogues 🤢

It was Amazing, superb, fantastic, mindblowing part
Love it 😊

*and arma di slap her head saying yeh kabhi nahi sudhar sakti 😛 *

Not going to say thanks as sisters mein kahan ka thank shank 😛

P.S. sorry for late reply
P.p.s. next parts ke liye bhi yahi old dialogue hai 🤣