Reasha ss : My Queen

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"Chotu kya lagta hai chale Rathod Sir ke ghar?"

Liza ask while sipping her Coffee.

" ha Liza is Chutti ka koi to fayda lena hi hoga.. "Shree answers

" Shree ye Pizza tune order kiya tha na ?" Chotu ask while munching on his Burger

" Chotuuu..." Shree shouted

" Ha " Chotu answers in calm tone

"Hum ye soch rahe the ki hum sab ko Rajashtan jana chayie , Rathod Sir ke ghar.. " Shree answers in rude but yet calm tone


" ha ha kyu nahi , unki bada yaad aa rahi hai," Chotu says & Shree & Liza smile.

( chalo kabhi to kuch alag socha khane ke siva )

" Aur unhone kaha bhi tha ki vaha , alag alag tarike ke khane ki cheese hogi "Chotu happily says & Shree & Liza just want smash his hair.



" Chal office jakar ye baat Sakshi se bhi bolte hai "Liza says

Finally all comes to Rajashtan..

" Ha ab bolo kaha jana hai ?" Girls ask

" Kaha kya , Rathod Sir ke ghar " Boys answers

" Ha to , Address kaha hai ?" Girls ask

" Liza ke paas " Shree says

" Excuse me...mere paas kaha ye hoga ??? mai kya unki Girlfrindhue?" Liza shouted

" OMG Liza tune batya nahi ki tu Rathod Sir ki Girlfrind hai?" Chotu ask

"Choootuuu "All shouted on him...

" Ab???? " Sakshi ask

" Mai to thak chuki hue Guys" Liza says

" Are vaha dekho , koi Chai ki Dukan hai , chalo kuch kha lete hai " Chotu says

" Ek kaam kar Chotu tu sab ke liye kuch snacks lekar aa , jaa " Shrre says

" Rathod Sir ko call karte hai , " Liza says


" My Darling Liza , Sameer se pitwana hai kya hai ?" are hum use surprise dene jaa rahe hai , aur tum... " Sakshi says


" To kyu na Arjun Sir ko caal kare aur puche? " Liza again suggests

" Shree lagta hai ye Liza hamhe maarne pe tuli hai ... kyu ki agar Arjun ko pata bhi chala hum yaha hai , to vo hamhe jinda hi maar dalega... is Rajashtan ki mitthi mai na humne jinda dafan karega... " Saakshi ask Shree , Liza just makes faces to Saakshi.

" Acha ye fight karna chodo, aur suno..kya hum Rathod Sir ka naam lekar puche to????unka khandan yaha kitne saal se reh raha hai , to yaha ke log unhe jaante to honge na? puchlete hai aur pata laga lete hai" Shree says

" Ha kyu nahi , Shree tu Chotu ke saath jaa aur pata kar , tabtak hum dono yaha rest karte hai " Liza says & Shree just want to grab their neck.


Shree goes into near Chai Taperi

" Are ha Bhai , humhe Sameer rathod ke yaha jana hai , jaante ho unka ghar?"

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shree Heard Chotu ask Chai wala


" Ji unke ghar???? aap unke Mehmaan ho"? Chai wala ask

" Ha , Mumbai se aaye hai ,unse milne... " Chotu says

" Hari...Birju , Mohan , Bintu yaha aao jaldi se... " Chai wala shouted

Shree immediately run to Chotu & tap his shouldder.

" Kya hai " Chotu ask

" Yaar , ye sab ko kyu bula raha hai ? lagta hai Rathod Sir ne iska udhaar chukta nahi kiya " 🤢 Shree whispers

" Dekho ye sab Sameer Rathod Saab Ji ke Mehmaan hai , unhe vaha tak chod do.. , aur ha Jeep se leke jaao... " Chai wala says


Shree Hold Chotu's hand tightly


" Ha...ma...re sssaaath Auuurrr do lakdiyaaa hai..." Shreee says while shivering

" Chalo unhe bhi le chalte hai... "Bintu says


" Shree hamare saah to Liza aur sakshi hai , per hamne Ladkiya bhi laayi thi...????" Chotu ask in confused tone


" Are ladkiya ho ya Lakdiyaa kya fark padta hai , bas unhe le jana hai "Shree says


Shree , Chotu & others comes to girls

" Are va itni jaldi tum log pata karohe pata nahi tha. " Saakshi says happily

" Ab chalo bhi... " Shree says



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start...
Chotu ko khane ke alwa kuch nahi sujta...😆😆😆
Yeh log Rajasthan toh pahunch gaye lekin address nahi pata...😆😆😆
Address toh mil gaya...dekhna yeh hai ki Sameer ka reaction kaisa hota hai sabko yahan dekh ke...😆😆😆

Continue soon...
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After half an hour they all reach outside one big palace ,


" Yahi hai ji Hukum ka Ghar " Other person says


" Hukum????? are nahi aap galat samaz rahe ho , hame Sameer ke ghar jana hai , SAMEER RATHOD , MUMBAI MAI REHTE HAI POLICE MAI HAI , UNKE PITA KA NAAAM DAMSIGH RATHOD HAI... " Saakshi says in loud tone

" Bintu ye sacchi mai Hukum ke mehmaan hai na , nahi kyu ki inhe Hukum ke bare mai jyada pata nahi "Mohan ask

" DEkho ji yahi Aaapke sameer saab ji ka Haveli hai aur yahi hamare Hukum haveli hai"Bintu says & starts to walk away from Team

" Ajjeb hai , hamhe kaha pehuncha diya , isne , ab kaise dhund ge sameer ko ?" kash ye surprise purprise na hota to use call to kar lete. "Saakshi says


" Mujhe lagta hai abhi bhi unhe call kar lete hai ,aur bolte hai ... " Liza says but Shree intruppts her

" Ha ha kisi Hukum ke bada haveli ke bahar khade hai ...aur naam kya hai is so called HUKUM ka?" Shree says in irritated tone

Chotu silently walks towards Gate & sees two persons wondering inside.

" Are va Bhai saab suno to... "Chotu calls

" Ha ji " That person come & answers

" Vo... ye haveli ksi ki hai?"

" Ji Hukum ki"

"Ha ...vo... per unka naam ... "

" kyu aapko kyu jaana ana hai naam ?"

" vo hame hamare Sir ko milne aaye the Mumbai se.. per shayhd rasta bhatak gaye... aur do logo ne hamhe yahi chod diya... "

" Mumbai se ?????? aapke Sir se ???? " naam kya hia aapke Sir ka ?"

"Sameer Damsigh Rathod.. "Chotu says

As soon as Chotu take that name ,

"Are ooo Mintu singh... saab se milne kuch logaayehia Mumbai se... inhe andar le le,aur ja Hukum ko bata de.. "

Shree & others also heard this & comes near gate , Gate automatically open & all enter in Palace

one open jeep come near them

" Aap apna shtan granhan kare " ( Plz take your seats Sir )

all look at each other & seat in Jeep ,

20 mins they reach near palace

but found lot of Crowd

" Ye bheed...?" Chotu ask

" Aaj Janta Darbar ka din hia , to bheed to hogi na " That person says

" Suno hamhe yahi chod do.. " Saakshi says

" Ji " jeep stop there

" Saakshi ye kya ho raha hai yaha ?" Chotu ask

" Chotu miane suna tha ki Yaha ke raje - Rajwade aaj bhi apni hukumat yaha pe cahlate hai , unhone sarkar ko haqu nahi diya hai , vo apni logo ki yani Praja ko khud samabhal lete hai aur week mai ek baarsab ko bulate hai taki unke dukh , unki problems slove kar paaye. "

" Oh... to yaha Police ke jarurat to nahi hoti hogi " Shree ask

"Nahi Shree Police to hote hai , per unhe bhi inke saath mil - jul kar kaam karna padta hai " Saakshi says

" OMG yaar mujhe ye sab dekhna hai , please chalo na "Liza says with excited tone

" ok " all says & comes near crowd


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" Saakshi & others comes front side so they can see what is going on..


They see a woman about to35 - 40 yrs old wears green colour saree seat on large chair & lot of people gather around her & listens her.


" Lagta hai yaha ki Rani hai " Saakshi says


" Per vo kar kya rahi hai ?" Shree ask

" Ofo Shree shant baitho tab pata chlega ki vo kya karti hai.. " Liza says


" Bharati Devi Singh... " one man calls & woman about 65 yearsold stand up &comes in front of that lady.

& Do namaste to her ,that lady also do namaste to her

" Maha rani ji vo... Bhairav Sign mhari ladki Barakha pe gandhi najar daalo hai , do baar use maara bhi , aur samaz bhi diyo hai , per nahi sunta , aur kal to bhari baazar mai haath pakad liya mhari chori ka.. "

that lay listens all & look at her left side , two persons immediately bow their head down & goes to catch culprit , within a minutes Bhairav Singh stands in Janata Darbar , he completely drunk , he can't stand properly , so one person hold him

" Aeee... kaha le aaye mujhe????? itni acchi daru pee raha tha ,,, Bhairav Singh shouted & his gaze fell on Bharati..

" Budiya tu????? lagat hai beti ke badale Maa ko jawani chad aayi hai ha... chal koi nahi mujhe Maa bhi chalegi.. "


" Bhairav..." that lady shouted " Puchna to nahi chathte , per phir bhi... ye sab band karo aur maafi maango Bharati Kaki se aur Barakha se..."


" Chal hat... " Bhairav says & look at lady.

" Vaise tu to Barkha se bhi acchi hai , ekdum khubsurat , ye tarasha hue badan... " Bhairav says

" Bhairav " now one of the man stands near that lady shouted

that lady only raise her hand, means stop , that man immeadtly step back ward

" Hame tumhe ek mauka dena chathte the , per shayhd tum iske layak nahi ho... "

" Iski saza yahi hai ki jis aankho se usne ladki ko dekha ,uski aankhe nikal di jaye , aur jis haath se usne Barakha ko chuaa uska vo haath uske sharir (body ) se alag kar diya jaaye... aur ha is saza ki purtata ( completion ) vahi ki jaye jaha isne Barkha ka rasta roka tha ... " Some boys capture Bhairav & starts to take him away ..

" Aur ha , itna sab hone ke baad yaad rahe ki Bhairav marne na paye , na koi uska illaz kar paye... ,ye saza har us insaan ke liye hogi jo aurat ko sirf apni pair ki zhooti samazata hai , insaan nahi... " that lady says in proud tone


"Maha rani ji... hamare bete ko itna kathore dand na de " ( Plzdn't punish my son too hard ) one older woamn comes there

" Shanta kaki hum Bhairav ko maaf karenge... " that lady says

and all cored look at each other Shanta kaki have sigh of relif ,

" ye to dal - badalu nikali ,itni jaldi uski saza maaf kar di ?" Liza ask saakshi.

" Per hamari ek shart hai " that lady says &all crowd again listens

" Hame ye vada do , ki Bhairavkabhi bhi kisi bhi ladki ki sparsh , nahi karega , usko buri nazar se nahi dekhega "

Shanta kaki only stand still , she can't answer in yes or no

" Shanta kaki hame jaante ki Bhairav hi aap ke jaavan ek sahara hai , per aapke sahare ke liye hum sab ki jaan aur ijjzat dono ko khatre mai nahi dal sakte.. "


" Vikram...shanta ki sari zimmedari , unki kharcha hamare paise se hoga... " that ady decalres. & all crowd shouted

" Maharani Ayesha devi ki Jai...Maharani Ayesha Devi ki jai... "

Ayesha get up from her place & crowd starts to dispersed

One man comes near Ayesha & informs her something

Ayesha look at crowd & found ETF Team still stand there.

Ayesha goes to near him

" Kya aap sameer ke Mehmaan hai? Mumbai se aaye hai ?" Ayesha ask

" Yes actually we want to give him surprise " Liza says with smile.

" Ha aur siliye Sameer se koi baat nahi ki... " Saakshi says in causal tone

" Sameer???? " Ayesha ask

"Ji Sameer actually mai use naam se bulati hue. " Saakshi says

" Aagese dhyan rahe unhe sameernahi balki Sirkeh kar bulana yaha per ye sab nahi cahlta " Ayesha says

all nods

Ayesha turns other side & says " Vikram inhe inke rooms tak chod dena , thak chuke honge.."

" Ji.." Vikram says

Ayesha turns to go , but stop

"Aur ha yaha kuch kayde - kanoon hai jiska aap sab ko palan karna hoga " she says & goes from there



Ayesha's Sari & Hairstyle





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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...
Ayesha 😲
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow awesome start
Etf want to surprise sammer
But they don't know him address
Like sakshi and liza fight
Omg chotu kabhi nahi sudarega
Maharani is aisha wow
Wonderful concept
Con so sooon
Please send me pm
And thanks for pm
Waiting for all stories updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg wow yaar...

Etf ki comedy circus ab rajasthan mein ...lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow didu...
new story
lovely...
beautiful start...
just loved it...
do continue soon...
and please write ariya story also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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reserved/unres
awesome update..
ya ALLAH ayesha in devi's avatar 😲😲
itni sakt rajputani language 😲😲
wese punishment sahi mili usse 👏👏
and chottu n shree are 😆😆
do update soon
and i love ayesha's saree 😉
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