Arakshi SS - Phir Le Aya Dil - Last chapter & Epilogue 03/07 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Part 3

That was the cutest part ever
Love it
Thanks for blog link ritu

Update soon
P.S. sorry for late reply
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
nice update
although i love siddie and piya together but i also love siddie's bond with pari they have this very special and sweet bonding
so siddie wants it to be surprise for piya that he is moving to dehli
so now story will be mostly of siddie and piya and how do they move from here
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Heyloo!🤗
First of all a biiig thank u for leaving your comments.. both here and on the blog. Sorry for not being able to reply individually this time Really really appreciate the feedback though because it keeps me going😳

Another simple chapter ...writing it made miss Delhi even more. Sigh!
Hope u like it😃

Chapter 4 - Surprises

... updated at the blog😉

Thanks a bunch for commenting.. And do hope you'll leave your comments for this one too.😳🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Res//Unres
Yippee...
Me first...

That was one awesome update
Loved it
Loved Piya and Siddie
And Their friendship is one of its kind
How I wish my bff would be with me right now
But that's not possible
Anyway great update
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
This is about us!!!...

this last line of the update had me all smiling and grinning like a mushy teenager for so long that my roomie had to call my name to take me out of the trance...

Simply loved this update...it was all about Them...really
..Them...

two best friends who are bound by a relationship so sweet and eternal that their breathing stops on the thought of seeing the other one after such a long gap of time...

the longing...the happiness in piya's voice after meeting Sid...and the excitement and liking...in ADI's voice were so beautifully written...

seriously ... (and I am not guilty)...I couldn't focus on the pari-arjun-sakhi part coz I wanted to read it Asap and move to sid-piya

This...is my love for Ur created characters ...

craving for more ritu...
pls update soon

love
Birdie
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Awesome update...
Siddie bohat hi asani se pata kar liya ki Piya aaj kahan jane wali hai...😆😆😆
Piya-Siddie reunion was nice...😃😃😃
Piya jyada pitai nahi ki Siddie ki jhoot bolne ke liye...😆😆😆
Jalebi...😆😆😆
Pari...my cutie pie...🤗🤗🤗
Pari ne bubble banana sikh hi liya...🤗🤗🤗
Pari's expression seeing Siddie with Piya was 😆😆😆
Siddie-Piya will go to Darjeeling...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
So finally it took a mammoth effort to keep our dear Piya dwelling in imagination of witty Sid unpacking in Pune. Finally the two meet and that to in famous market of the capital.that was a nice surprise indeed.Bangles and Jalebi were quite good props. Sid had idea about Piya's bangle size?? Without any confusion and wrestling efforts the bangles fitted so well,so the doubt crept into my head.The lines felt dipped in an ethnic and aromatic flavor .
the story is indeed moving in a beautiful and coherent way.the bubble scene played by our cute Pari was something highly commendable.👏
thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Love is in the air.I can feel another Arjun -Saakshi love story in the making😳😳😳

Pariii

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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Just a word ritu

"Beautiful"

Love it from bottom of my heart

Thanks for pm

Update soon

P.S. sorry for late reply
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Hello Ritu..🤗
WOW..! I so LOVED the update..It was simply beautiful.
👍🏼I was having a constant smile on my face while reading.😃
The reunion scene..I was like..yay..! Yippee.! This couldn't have got any better.
Jalebi-eating scene..mmm..
nice, very nice. 😃And bangles..what to say, better I not comment on that. Jaha pe chudiya aati hai i'm like not a bangle-girl , you see.🤪
I loved Piya-Siddie scenes so much..Most Credit to how you have penned it down..👍🏼All the emotions came across clearly.

Arjun-Pari-Sakshi..Aww..! that was sweet and Pari..shhooo cute..I wish I could pull her cheeks..
😆I enjoyed reading their family time..
Bubbles..*memories* I used to enjoy so much..with my bestie.. blowing bubbles..
*sigh* childhood never returns..
But You make us have those experiences again, and that too with beautiful ease,.when we used to get happy on small little things..that was our world..
So Thank You..🤗

Anyways, the update was awesome..okay to be apt it was simple and beautiful.
😃
Loved it.
Thanks for pm..continue soonish.

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