Arakshi SS - Phir Le Aya Dil - Last chapter & Epilogue 03/07

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: skrafty
Res//Unres
Yay!!!!!!!
Me first🥳🥳
Awesome update
Loved it
Amazing
Arjun already missing piya
Truly now only few times they all will be together
(I'm also moving out in few days and my parents and chotu bro are giving same reactions)
Loved the emails between Piya and Siddie
Their friendship is adorable
Siddie Piya ki yaad mein devdas ban gaya😆😆
Little Pari is shooo cute
Loved her
Is Siddie upto something? ???
Interesting
And The second part
It was superb
Loved Arakshi
Can't wait to read more
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Awww hehehe.. hope u don't move too far away though! All the best for the entrances if u have any left😊

He he he .. yes he is.. that's in the next chapter!

Thanks for ur comment🤗

Originally posted by: Devangana
Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next part.

Thanks sooo much!😳

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
''Sometimes it takes sadness to know happiness,noise to appreciate silence and absence to value presence''...😊
seriously no matter how much we fight,make mess and pull hairs and legs sometimes...siblings and best friends can never have any substitute.Home has the sense of security and unfathomable love which no place in the universe can provide.The possessiveness of papa,loving arms and kisses of mama and deals between siblings to clean the room when expecting a visitor( just to show we are always disciplined.😉😉 ) ...the charm never fades.
again it was prodigious.paintings and smell of acrylic colours ...total ''camlin'' setting.Wink
song selection -- one of my favs.so thanks for that.
keep your writing spirits high and continue soon.👏👏

Sooo true! I know.. hehe... kinda missed the siblings relationship since I don't have none and my cousins live tooo far away right now Anyway! Yes .. I agree completely.

Thanks sooo much .. the song is one of my favourites too😃 ☺️

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Awesome update
loved the bond between siddie and pari
siddie and piya are always cute
waiting for next update

Thanks soo much!!😳

Originally posted by: fly.high
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai

Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai ...

haayeee...u used this one song...and His voice made me crazy enough to forget the whole update .. oh god... how much I love him... *sigh*

I had to read the 1st part again to get a grip...

now ...

The Arjun's POV and that of piya reminded me of my own situation..I m staying away from home...and trust me its very difficult to cope with the homesickness at times...
*sobs* *missing papa*

u have already got me to love siddie way too much...and this update made me fall for him even more...he us badly missing piya...

the second part...

it was so beautifully written...u know...this is the thing about u ritu...even if u write a whole update full of romance...still it doesn't seem to appear even remotely Clichy or cheesy...it didn't lose the charm ever...that's why I call u Nicholas sparks...coz apart from him I don't find this quality in any other romance genre writer...

( though Durjoy Datta is an exception *blushes*...)

lovely part... tempted for more...continue soon...

love
Birdie

PS: would like to read more on piya and siddie...its a request ...

Heylooo!!!

Sheeeshh I love that man☺️ anyway... I shouldn't start talking about HIM else I go crazy🤪 (oh wait, it's already happened)

LOL.. anyway..

Aww.. call ur Papa. I am sure he misses u just as much

Ahhh and the last few lines of your comment made my day.. I have re-read it and gloated on myself too many times hehehe.. thanks soo much! It really means a lot🤗

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon

Thanks so much! 😳

Originally posted by: sairam175
Awesome part
Con soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you!😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: kunchu
It seems I missed commenting in the firt part
sorry Ri
And here I loved it a lot
Pari Sid rishta hai badi cute
and ri... u r digging yr grave
reason private me bathathi hu
and the second half.. really ae is just numbers for them
loved it re

It's okaayy.. don't say sorry😳

Hehehehe.. areey nahi nahi main nahi darti😃😛

Thanks soo much KK🤗

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun has already started missing Piya...😃😃😃
Arjun dont want to think about future...😃😃😃
LOL...Poor Siddie...Sammy usko bohat pareshan kar rahi hai...😆😆😆
Aditi toh Arjun pe fida ho gayi...😆😆😆
Piya is missing her family but she is stick to her decision...👏👏👏
Sammy Piya ka badla le rahi hai...😆😆😆
Siddie sach mein devdas ban gaya hai...😆😆😆
I just loved that bargaining session...😆😆😆
Pari's sketchbook is sooo important for Siddie...😃😃😃
Pari is so cute...I want her...
Liked Arakshi & their sleep walking...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks soo much Sneha!😳😳

Aww I know.. I am writing about Pari and I feel like cuddling her lol. Wait for the next one😉

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Awww that was soo cute and shweet
Love it ritu
You explain every line and emotion so beautifully
Ummh I wanna say more but mere cell ki battery is down *sigh*
Have to go but please you continue soon
We are waiting

Thanks soo much! It means a lot.. It's okay😳

Originally posted by: Swara85
Hello Ritu..😊
Finally read this sequel..So here I'm..

Chapter 1:
Aww..Start mein hi itna cute scene..Arjun - Pari..❤️I really liked that sweet little cute sa part..😳
So Piya wants to go Delhi to study and Arjun was not allowing..I was again like Aww..! May be all fathers are like that..possessive and over-protective.

The mail conversation was very very nice..👍🏼So Piya and Siddie are best friends and their bond seems too stronger..isn't it.?🤪
I'm looking forward for this story..It was awesome and had Ritu's magical ingredient, I would say.😃
Thanks for pm..will be back chap 2 soon.

Heylooo!🤗

Hehehe thanks soo much!! Yes they are.. at least mine is hehe. 😛

Oh yes.. their bond is deffo stronger.. wait for them in the next few chapters coz this story will focus on them😳 and of course, Pari😳

Aww thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Last ka hint samjha mujhe akshara😉

@KK :Very smart ha😉

Nahiii *slaps forehead*

Mujhe nahi samajh aaya😳

Originally posted by: Swara85
Chapter 2:Beautiful was the scene with Arakshi and Pari..😃Though It was incomplete without Piya, as you said.
The emails..it was real fun reading them..
Piya and Aditi reminds me of me and my best friend..Chashmish..he he.that's my pet name.😳
Ye P-S and P-A mujhe meri bestie ki yaad dila rahe hai..I'm getting emotional..😔

Arjun and Shahrukh Khan ( 2 times mentioned.)..and second half mein His song..Ritu, how did you manage to even write this..?😆😛
"His smile is so cute." Really..?😉😆
Bro-Sis scene mast tha..! And Pari..sooo shweet..Looks like she is the most fav among all..

"I begin to lose myself in the depth of her eyes, which appear like a dark, bottomless sea, its surface glittering with the gentle crests of waves illuminated by moonlight. "..Haye.!!!.you did it again..👍🏼

Arakshi and the SONG in the bg...☺️
Though I like sketching more than painting, but i Love the smell of paints..😃
I'm loving this story..
Thanks for pm..continue soon.

Thanks soo much Swara! Oh u chashmish too? So am I😆😆

Aww.. I kinda was remembering my uni days while writing it.. unko call kar lo😳

Ha ha ha ha don't ask! And the song was playing over and over in my head😕☺️

Of course *dreamy* ... Srk-Kajol❤️

Pari is the cutest😳 hehe

Ahh thanks soo much 🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Heyloo!

This took me forever Anyway, finally I am here.

Before u begin reading, I should say this story is too simple and short... hope you don't get bored.😛 While typing this I experienced the feelings of both a middle-aged woman and a teenager🤣 I know that sounds weird.😆

Another note, as you know the story will focus on Piya-Siddie... so Arakshi dosage will be a little less (of course I cannot keep them out). Hope u accept that fact before u read too.😊

And that's it. Happy reading.😉

Chapter 3 - Choices

...Posted at blog😃

Do leave your comments if you read.🤗

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Reswa

Will unres tomorrow

Out for an adventure trip

Unres

Yippeee...

Me first🥳

Awesome update

Loved it

Amazing

Loved Piya-Siddie part

(Siddie reminds me of my bff)

So finally Siddie moving to Delhi

Arjun-Pari moment was cute

Loved it

Arjun Rawte the possessive father

I expected something like this from him

Pari and Siddie

Awww

Loved them

I'm waiting to see Piya'a reaction

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

*doing happy dance *

I don't know what is it with piya and siddie that always bring a nostalgic smile on my face...

Or...may be I just know.!

The simplicity and easy flow of words are the USP of this story

siddie and pari moments are always so cute and innocent...

wonder what is arjun planning...

so finally we'll be getting more of siddie piya together scenes

continue soon

love
birdie

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

such a simple sweet chapter

through the msges, it really makes spl

after all, our lives are connected through this little msgs everyday

little still strong enough to hold us together

Sid have indeed great parents

But I am sad for Pari

she will miss her didi and sidhie

that last scene was so sad, poor little siddhie

I know you-know-who knows a way to put an end to Pari's pain. but na... this lil family is just tooo cute

waiting for Piya meets Sid

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Shruti

@shurtiekta

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

hey dear i didn't get the pm
u always forget me to pm
my email id is shurtivarshney02@gmail.com

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
sid and pari scene made me cry
cont soon

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

''Missing someone gets easier everyday because even though you are one day further from the last time you saw them,you are one day closer to the next time you will.''

that was an enthralling update.again letters( emails) came ruling the relations and bridging the distances.😊 all the characters were equally justified in their own terms.

one thing i would suggest here that if along with emotions and scenic backgrounds some data could be inserted it would look much better.like where was Sidharth studying,which company,exact location in Delhi and same for Piya--like name of the hostel,her roll no. etc.Precisely something in figures (as the creator of this story you know the best what to insert and what to delete).Just a suggestion.😊😊
eagerly awaiting for their meet and forth coming update soon.

thanks for the pm,😊😊