Arakshi SS - Phir Le Aya Dil - Last chapter & Epilogue 03/07

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

res😊

that was fun them meeting at dehli haat and enjoying themselves
waise let me tell u summers in dehli is scorching no one goes to haat in this heat 😉
but then it is colorful place with so many different things to shop and eat 😊
i loved sakshi and piya playing with soap bubbles its actually fun
i remember playing it with my niece 😊
so it is all abt siddi and piyu now 😃

Edited by sisodia_shefali - 10 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

so cute ritu...

just loved the way how u wrote...

totally enjoyed it...

thanks for PM...

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Chapter 2
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Arjun already missing Piya
Loved the email convos between Piya and Siddie
Their friendship is Sooo Cute
Piya is missing her family but she is stick to her decision
Siddie-Sammy convo was fun
"Piya di kya gayi, aap toh unke
ghum mein Devdas ban gaye." loved this dialogue it was Supper Awwssmm
Little Pari is Sooo Adorable
Loved Arakshi moments Lovely
Amazing Update

Edited by _Nikita_ - 10 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Chapter 3
Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It
Piya-Siddie's email convo was Sooo Cute
So Siddie is moving to Delhi
Loved the way Pari welcomed her Papa Sooo Cute n Innocent
Pari-Siddie moment was So touching
" Why do the Rawte sisters do this to me? " Loved this line
Awww little Pari is gonna miss her Saddle n he as well gonna miss Pari
Wonderfully Written
Thanks for the PM

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Chapter 4
Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It Sooo very much
Piya-Siddie's reunion was Sooo Sweet
The happiness n the excitement after seeing eachother you described every emotion so Beautifully
Loved the Bubble wala part
Cutie Pari's reaction after seeing Piya-Siddie together was Adorable
Awww Siddie gift Piya bangle Sooo Sweet
So they are gonna explore the city
Amazing update
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

commented on page 10 😊

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: skrafty
Res//Unres
Yippee...
Me first...

That was one awesome update
Loved it
Loved Piya and Siddie
And Their friendship is one of its kind
How I wish my bff would be with me right now
But that's not possible
Anyway great update
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Thanks soo much Shravani.. I am missing my BFF too now..

Khairrr.. it's not possible for me either

Thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: Humzy
lovely update
loved it
cont soon

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: fly.high
This is about us!!!...

this last line of the update had me all smiling and grinning like a mushy teenager for so long that my roomie had to call my name to take me out of the trance...

Simply loved this update...it was all about Them...really
..Them...

two best friends who are bound by a relationship so sweet and eternal that their breathing stops on the thought of seeing the other one after such a long gap of time...

the longing...the happiness in piya's voice after meeting Sid...and the excitement and liking...in ADI's voice were so beautifully written...

seriously ... (and I am not guilty)...I couldn't focus on the pari-arjun-sakhi part coz I wanted to read it Asap and move to sid-piya

This...is my love for Ur created characters ...

craving for more ritu...
pls update soon

love
Birdie

Awww.. trust me, I wouldn't even have been writing this if it hadn't been for u.. so thank u so so much!🤗 I am gladd u loved it so much.. and the next part.. I dunno if my writing is at its best right now, but I still hope u like it 😳

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Siddie bohat hi asani se pata kar liya ki Piya aaj kahan jane wali hai...😆😆😆
Piya-Siddie reunion was nice...😃😃😃
Piya jyada pitai nahi ki Siddie ki jhoot bolne ke liye...😆😆😆
Jalebi...😆😆😆
Pari...my cutie pie...🤗🤗🤗
Pari ne bubble banana sikh hi liya...🤗🤗🤗
Pari's expression seeing Siddie with Piya was 😆😆😆
Siddie-Piya will go to Darjeeling...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks soo much Sneha🤗

Hehe I love Pari too😳😳

Arrey nahii.. they'll be in Delhi only hehe😛

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
So finally it took a mammoth effort to keep our dear Piya dwelling in imagination of witty Sid unpacking in Pune. Finally the two meet and that to in famous market of the capital.that was a nice surprise indeed.Bangles and Jalebi were quite good props. Sid had idea about Piya's bangle size?? Without any confusion and wrestling efforts the bangles fitted so well,so the doubt crept into my head.The lines felt dipped in an ethnic and aromatic flavor .
the story is indeed moving in a beautiful and coherent way.the bubble scene played by our cute Pari was something highly commendable.👏
thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊😊

Thanks soo much!🤗

Haha they are best friends and know each other since Piya was a baby, so he's bound to know everything about her.😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Love is in the air.I can feel another Arjun -Saakshi love story in the making😳😳😳

Pariii

Thank youuu GB😃😃

I do hope you like the rest (and that I can do justice to this story too)...😳😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Just a word ritu

"Beautiful"

Love it from bottom of my heart

Thanks for pm

Update soon

P.S. sorry for late reply

Thanks a lot Areesha!😃

Originally posted by: Swara85
Hello Ritu..🤗
WOW..! I so LOVED the update..It was simply beautiful. 👍🏼I was having a constant smile on my face while reading.😃
The reunion scene..I was like..yay..! Yippee.! This couldn't have got any better.
Jalebi-eating scene..mmm..nice, very nice. 😃And bangles..what to say, better I not comment on that. Jaha pe chudiya aati hai i'm like not a bangle-girl , you see.🤪
I loved Piya-Siddie scenes so much..Most Credit to how you have penned it down..👍🏼All the emotions came across clearly.

Arjun-Pari-Sakshi..Aww..! that was sweet and Pari..shhooo cute..I wish I could pull her cheeks..😆I enjoyed reading their family time..
Bubbles..*memories* I used to enjoy so much..with my bestie.. blowing bubbles..*sigh* childhood never returns..
But You make us have those experiences again, and that too with beautiful ease,.when we used to get happy on small little things..that was our world..So Thank You..🤗

Anyways, the update was awesome..okay to be apt it was simple and beautiful. 😃
Loved it.
Thanks for pm..continue soonish.

Heylooo Swaraaa🤗

I know you're busy but I miss youuu Anyway..Aww thanks soo much! Glad u liked it!😃

Ohh u dont like bangles? Koi naa.. unhe imagine kar lo😳

Thank you soo much for loving this simple update.. I am glad it brought a smile on your face😳

Loads of love❤️

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
res😊

that was fun them meeting at dehli haat and enjoying themselves
waise let me tell u summers in dehli is scorching no one goes to haat in this heat 😉
but then it is colorful place with so many different things to shop and eat 😊
i loved sakshi and piya playing with soap bubbles its actually fun
i remember playing it with my niece 😊
so it is all abt siddi and piyu now 😃

Thank u so much..😳

Haha I know.. I am a Delhi girl.. so quite familiar with the heat. But when there's friends around, I dont really mind the heat so much .. but then maybe that's because I visit India once a year now..

Anywaay.. yep it'll be mostly about them now😳

Originally posted by: anu91
so cute ritu...
just loved the way how u wrote...
totally enjoyed it...
thanks for PM...

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Chapter 4
Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It Sooo very much
Piya-Siddie's reunion was Sooo Sweet
The happiness n the excitement after seeing eachother you described every emotion so Beautifully
Loved the Bubble wala part
Cutie Pari's reaction after seeing Piya-Siddie together was Adorable
Awww Siddie gift Piya bangle Sooo Sweet
So they are gonna explore the city
Amazing update
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thank you soo much for all your comments, Niki.. means a lot😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Heyloo!🤗

I know... it's been forever since I updated. I dont know why I couldn't write properly for the last two weeks.. I felt like I was blanking out.. anyway.. slowly getting back to it now!

Another simple chapter (which made me miss Delhi like anything again😭). I am just hoping you would like it.

@Aisha .. This one is for u..because u love them so much.😳

Chapter 5 - Puzzled Thoughts

.. posted at the blog.

Do leave your comments if you read.🤗